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Reviewer: crimson_eyed_bella (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: Eastwood Academy
The Egyptian's name is Amun, not Amin. Just thought I'd point that out...
Author's Response: wow, you're the first person that caught that... since october. anyway, i fixed it! and thank you so much for letting me know. :-)
Reviewer: sweetblood1145 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
Loved it love you as always
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
Oh Pastiche. This was great. I loved the wedding, both of them, and the reception. Yay for a baby! Leah with Nahuel, that would be great, I'm surprised no one else has ever thought of that, hmm. Mind if I steal that for a possible story? Can't wait for your next story dear, I'm sure it will be great too. Thank you for a wonderful ride the past few months. Until your new story!
Manda
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And yeah... Leah and Nahuel I actually read somewhere else first, but it made sense in this story, especially with Leah's earlier bits of dialogue. Heh.
Thanks again for keeping up with me on my crazy story!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
You did such a wonderful job with this story. I enjoyed it! Everything is great....maybe , just maybe a sequel?? If you need a beta, I'll do it for you :)
Author's Response: Hah. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! At this point in time, I have plans for a sequel, but I never say never. I actually only recently got a beta (Jfly/Thallium) for my new Edward AU, which should be very interesting...
Reviewer: Amazed (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
I love your stories and I have been following this one for ages!
It's sooo good!
I can't get enough of you!
Thank you for err... existing? Hahaha xxxxx
Author's Response: Heh. Thank you for existing toooo!
Reviewer: IwishIwasAlice (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
loved the story!
Reviewer: angieg (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
aw such a great ending! i love that you gave leah the happy ending she deserves!! =]
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
Its been a great ride.
Thanks for all the fish and Lemons :)
This was a wondetrful story
Author's Response: You made a Hitchhiker reference. I think I love you. And you read m'story - so yeah, I definitely love you. (And thank you for the lovely review.)
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
This was beautiful. SO tangible and completely unforgettable. When Ness thought that piece about leaving her childhood behind when she was off on the plane, all I could see was Edward's face when he caught that thought. The most... argh not enough adequate adjatives. Just love. Unpretentious, perfectly mixed light and heavy moments. And I really got a kick out of Nahuel and Leah. Because he's not a frat boy. And the whole You had me at Meso-American blah blah lovelyness. And the concieved on a beach. And Edward's a grandpa and we'll probably outlive our children. Gasp and sigh and laugh and sob.
Quite possibly my favorite ending to any story ever written. Notice that I did not say any fanfic. All of em Babe.
Unforgettable. It touched and entertained me greatly. Thank you. I'll be watching for the next. I adore this.
~Mia
Author's Response: Gah. Mia, you always leave the best reviews. Bestest, bestest. I'm so glad you liked it! I was a complete fruit cake over finishing up the end of this story - so thank you for sticking through it with me!!! MWAH! xoxoxo
Reviewer: TwitchySquirrel (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
I really hope the next chapter is put on soon!
Reviewer: Paige_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
Plz update soon!!! Love the story
Reviewer: jazz_the_soldier_boi (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 16: Lunch Break
much better than ch 11
Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
Well done! This is coming along very, very well. Can't wait for more.
-0z-
Reviewer: sammydee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
i love oh so very much i hope the next chapter coming soon, thanks for this wonderful story
Reviewer: sammydee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
i love oh so very much i hope the next chapter coming soon, thanks for this wonderful story
Reviewer: Swedish_Chef (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
I want to applaude you for this chapter. In most...no, probably in all the fanfiction I have read in every genre, I have seen someone have a deep, philosophical conversation type thing. The whole, what does it mean to be half-vampire is really interesting--what do they base morals off of, how do they live different, etc. You brought up a really good point. Most people just write a story with an awesome plot, which is totally fine. Twilight isn't that deep of a philosophical work...actually it's not deep at all =/ so I understand that the fanfiction won't touch on this either. But you do both!! I give you 130992230578 browine points!! =D
Reviewer: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
awww shes leaving the Cullens?! poor edward and bella :(
haha i love it when Nessie teases Jacob like that. Nice chapter, can't wait for the next one!
-riddiculusvampire
Reviewer: XXprincessXX (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
no bueno
more please
the story is not over
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
huh... didn't see that one coming. That's sad, for Bella & Edward, I mean.
Wonder what comes next.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 29: So Says the Soothsayer
Edward's reactions crack me up. I love how you write Nessie's character... a perfect combination of her mum and dad!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 25: Saving Grace
Way to bring me down from my Jake/Nessie high. I am so addicted though, it's flippin 2:20am here in England and I have to work in the morning, but the following chapters are calling out to me...
Author's Response: Ahhhh! Fic addiction! I know how it goes! Sleep is good though--very good. Sleeeeep. Heh. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Movie Time
The swine, I knew he'd knick her mobile, Grrr!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Adjustments
This is my new fave story. You are so funny, my husband keeps looking at me warily wondering why this laptop is amusing me so much!!!!
Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
Good story. Nice job
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 5: Convincing
I am having so much fun reading this!!!
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