Reviewer: sallyro (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 16: Lunch Break
BOTH!
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
I did really love this story. I think the baby at the end was a bit soon, but otherwise, I loved the story.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 36: Waxing Crescent, Waning Moon
not where i expected this to go. i do think it's in my top 2 or 3 fanfics that i've read.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 25: Saving Grace
this one made me cry.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Movie Time
ooh i hate olivier! what a sneeky sneeky prick.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 16: Lunch Break
i liked this one better than ch. 11. I didn't feel like he was very Jake-like in ch. 11. he was too sweet and soft. this was much more him.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 14: Consequences
crazy.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Adjustments
brought a tear to my eye when he told her how it felt when he first saw her.
again, the chapter is too short.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 12: Edward
why are your chapters so short? at least it's over 30 chapters.
LOVE this!!
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Jacob
i love it i love it i love it!!!!!
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Discomfiture
don't know what "limes" or "lemons" means. lol.
I absolutely love this story so far. It may be my favorite fanfic yet!!
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: Interrogations
that chapter seemed incredibly short. i really like this story so far.
Reviewer: JessicaRajs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: Schooling a Half-Vamp
so far i like it :-D
Reviewer: Fatima (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 24: Visions from Within
HOW IS THIS SUPPPOSE TO BE BETTER?!
Alyssa was so nice!
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Reviewer: Fatima (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 23: Fight or Flight or Fall
OMG!!!!!
I'm going to assemble a mob with pitch forks to come get you!
: )
Damn you can write!
Reviewer: Fatima (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 22: Suffer No Fools
Ewww Gross!
Reviewer: Fatima (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 18: Eyes on the Prize
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I Hate Olivier!!!!
Reviewer: Fatima (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 16: Lunch Break
HOT!!
Reviewer: parrotchic (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 16: Lunch Break
Great read!!
Reviewer: i love new moon (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
I really liked this story. Please write another one. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: musiclover0620 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
3 words: FREAKING LOVED IT!!! I loved the fact that this story had everything romance, humor, suspense, drama...Just wanna say thank you...great job
Reviewer: Waldinando (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
One of the most amazing Jacob/Renesmee stories I've ever read!!! :)
Reviewer: Jaz (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
hURRY WIT THE NEXT CHAPTERS.........
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
I'm so sad to see it end but what a perfect ending it was! Perfect! :)
Reviewer: aimz (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 16: Lunch Break
that wAs amazing
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