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Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 10: Discomfiture
I'm excited for those limes. That was the cutest greeting in the history of the world!!
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 9: Snow and Sky
I'm sensing that this Olivier person has some persuasive power, something like Jasper? Hmmmmm.
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 8: Visitation
Hehe, Jake's like...Mmm sixteen year old Nessie. :)
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 7: Pursue and Embrace
Aww, Edward is such a good daddy :)
What's Jake gonna do when he finds out about this guy kissing Nessie? Especially since he said the party was a bad idea...
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 6: Lunacy and Libation
Oooooh. This chapter was absolutely amazing. I'm in love with your portrayal of Nessie. Or, Nessa, I should say? Haha. I'm so happy I found this story.
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Convincing
These phone conversations are so dang cute :)
(oh, I know I review a lot so don't feel the need to reply to every one, if you're that kind of person like I am) :)
Anyhow, I want to know what that funny pause was. I'll bet it was Jake reveling in the fact that Nessie likes him best :) anyhow, you're an amazing writer.
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 4: Interrogations
Oooh, that's gonna be awkward...hmmmmm.... :D
great chapter.
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 3: Disturbed
Hmmm...what is Bella going to tell Renesmee about why Jake stuck around? I was always under the impression Jake wanted to tell Nessie about the imprint himself. Hmmm....on to the next chapter :)
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Eastwood Academy
Wonderful chapter. I love that you're not portraying Rosalie as such a...well as such a bitch. Thanks for that :)
Great chapter.
Reviewer: simonebruneau (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
I reallyyyy reallyyyy love your story... i started reading it yesterday and i falll in love with it... First of all... Quebecois... i mean im Quebecois so for you to use quebecoise expression that was so cool... i wsas like maybe im gonna see ness or eddie soon at montreal hahha... Anyway it was my first fanfic with something quebecois in it so thanks for that.... Olivier was such a jerk, i hate him but i dont think i have understood everythin when she was kissing him at the end when jake rip his head off.. he looks peaceful i think?? I really love the fact that ness is not the perfect little daddys girl in your fanfic. she is imperfect and she is a real teen and i like it! im sad about alyssa but like ness said she would not have been happy being a vampire and unfortunatly sometimes there character who has to die... (like olivier lol) anyway i reallyyyyyy loved your story so congrats about finishing it!!
Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
LOVED it.. such a cute ending!!
Reviewer: Carabella Sophia (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
Very clever! I enjoyed this tale and how it flowed.
Reviewer: Baby_twi (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
Awesome story.....
I'm so speechless....,
But awesome story!!
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
lol Good ending.
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 30: Gardening
Bloody Mary! THAT would be the name of the street vendor lady. Hmm, irony. ha.
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 29: So Says the Soothsayer
Everytime I picture Estela, I think of the street vendor woman from South Pacific for some reason lol
Reviewer: woeir123456789 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 31: Sauce and Saucy
i love estela shes so funny!!!
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
Oh no. Oh NOOO. "Sucka' tried to play me..." lol
(in the case that that was creepy, it's a song from halo, I think...)
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
Oh shiz! Can't wait to find out what's in the txt mesg. I'm picturing something kidnap-esque. Like a picture of a bloody, dismembered index finger or something. Another good chapter.
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: Adjustments
Dundun DUNDUN
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 11: Jacob
hot xD
Reviewer: Maize (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: Discomfiture
Aw. So cute ^^
I'm lovin this story so far.
Reviewer: Reilly Whitlock (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
omg that was really sweet! in a lusty kind of way! lol, you are a really good writer!
Reviewer: u304823 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 37: a Marriage on Two Moons
Wonderful writing, everyone should read this one. Thank you for all of your work on it.
Reviewer: sarc (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 24: Visions from Within
u killed her. i dislyk u gr8ly 4 that. i mean poor luke! freaking heck! the nxt couple of chapters betta b betta..... happy 4 luke. othA then that crap part its a gud story.
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