I'm dying for the next chapter. Such a great read!

Please tell me you have not given up on this story!! It has been FOREVER since you last updated

Author's Response:

I haven't, don't worry. I've just been really busy and kept forgetting to log in and post. I did just send the next chap to my beta though, so hopefully it will e up soon. Again, I apologize. :o( 

Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. 

~lc~

Glued to this story! Excellent, excellent read! Pls update often :D

I hate Cammie with all my heart! The girl has some SERIOUS issues!            Oh god i really hope Edward hasn't messed up everything cause it would suck...big time.(Although something tells me that's exactly the case) We all know how prone he is to overreacting , but i just hope he didn't screw up not only for Bella's sake but for Charlie's too. Other than that it was so exciting to find out about Rose expecting and the engagement of Jazz with Alice. The costumes were priceless although about Esme...geisha? Really..? Wonder what Carlisle's costume was like...hmm

I am going to be a pain and beg you to post as soon as you can. Eddie has some serious explaining to do!

P.S. I hate Cammie.

Things going so busy for Edward and Bella after he moved in with Bella.  With work, getting ready for med school interviews, work loads for both of them, exhaustion from stress and long hours of working.  Halloween costumes were funny, How Alice convinced Jasper to be a banana must be awfully good.  I know I chuckled at that one.  Then to have Emmett as Peter Pan was even funnier.  Just thinking of all that bulk muscle in the tight green tunic and green tight tights picturing a muscle bound Peter Pan giggle worthy. Like Peter on steriods.  Edward's car being broken into and destroyed, I'm betting on Cammy the psycho.  Leaving those pictures on Bella's desk knowing they had a huge presentation that day.  Riley and his text of talk to me.  I'm coming to you.  I thought Bella made a good decision meeting in a public place had back up with her boss in case Riley took it too far.  She told him it was Edward, always Edward.  He broke the agreement, he withheld information about his feelings. Bella did tell Edward as soon as she made the appointment to meet Riley.  Edward getting upset in Boston when he couldn't reach Bella.  I'm surprised he didn't call the main house to find out why she wasn't answering her phone.  Her phone battery dying is a valid excuse.  I'm surprised Edward turned his cell phone off when he went out drinking.  Especially how bad that whole day was for Bella.  Starting with having to wake up without him, to the pictures from Cammy, the presentation, meeting with Riley, and then discovering the apartment broken into and Charlie's things stolen and their bedroom destroyed.  Wonder if this was Cammy too just trying to get back at Bella.  Edward had better have behaved himself.  He would be really stupid if he went back on his old ways now when all his dreams were almost all achieved.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

OK, it's pretty obvious who's behind everything. The computer, the car, the break-in are all tied in to that pyscho Cammie. Please tell me that Edward didn't do anything stupid while he was away. 

Glad to see Riley has finally accepted that it's over

Gahh!  I finally got around to reading the previous chappy earlier on today, and was DYING for a new chapter.  Lo and behold, I come home to just that waiting in my mailbox.  Then you go and leave us all with a cliffie like that?  Unfair.  I hope your idea of quickly is under 24h. Otherwise it just ain't quick enough.

I'd also like to congratulate you on your proper usage of 'me & I' in this chapter.  Many would have slipped up and used I, when me was actually correct (A niece or nephew for me and Bella).  Perhaps it isn't anything special, but its a mistake that is made far to often.  That and thinking that none is plural.  There is none, not there are none.  Seriously people; it's  SINGULAR!  Grammar rant is over... for now.

It was Riley and Cammy who trashed the car wasn't it? Man, messed up. Update soon, I have a feeling Edward has scred things up again.  Overreacting has either pushed him into the arms of another woman, or he flew out and bea the shit out of Riley. 

 

UPDATE SOON,

Very nice job.  I could have gone without the Cammy lemon though, she's nuts.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

This story just keeps getting better, but why do I get the feeling the shit is about to hit the fan? Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Bella starting to worry about Edward leaving for medical school on east coast.  She is encouraging him doesn't want to hold him back.  Edward has already mentioned bringing her and Charlie back with him. Bella couldn't believe Edward had so much stuff moving into her apartment.  where would they put it all.  So sweet giving his favorite childhood stuffed dog to his son Charlie to sleep with now.  Passing it down, so sweet I actually teared up it was so special.  Edward playing her his composition he had been writing throughout their entire relationship proved his loved for all this time.  I bet his being harsh and firm broke Edward's heart that first time.  Kids come back to their parents after their little anger session.  I hated Cammy's POV.  She's sick.  Always wanting to get something on somebody to make a side buck or get what she wants by blackmailing for it.  I would love to know what she's got on Edward to attempt to ruin him with in the future.

OMG OMG the girl is a fucking nut bag who knows what she will do with Edwards tape if he has one which I assume he does...OMG was this her POV when she had Edward?? I so want to see her POV on Edwards night if this isn't it!  His 1st time at what??  Squee I loev your work post again sooN!!