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Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 10:06 PM · On: Confessions
Wow...oh Wow. OK I knew that Edward would act incredibly crazy and I was not disappointed. He was a complete idiot. Shocked ....yes....but so nasty to her, not about not telling him, but for putting HIM in that situation? That's hysterical. That she could be a SLUT??? Hysterical. That he could go out and get drunk and possibly impregnate another woman, who he doesn't even know??? Hysterical. Everything including Alice and Emmett attacking Edward, Hysterical!! The only thing not hysterical, is poor Bella who trusted the Cullens that she was doing the right thing by telling Edward the truth. Apparently, he is going to need time to come to grips with this. Thank Goodness for the wrath of Esme Cullen, the force to be reckened with!! Go ESME. She'll straighten that boy out soon! Would really love to see a tender moment between Bella and Edward but I"m not sure hold long that will be. He just needs to spend some time with his son, watch him play the piano to see what he knows to be true. Such a wonderful story. Keep the updates coming. We're all waiting! So glad this came in tonight, well actually this morning. It's 1:00 in the morning now, lol.
Reviewer: Cyper22 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 06:18 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
Excellent so far!! Is there more to come soon?
Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 12:03 AM · On: Small Town Gossip
uggh I surprised he hasn't pieced together the puzzle yet but at the same time I was glad he didn't figure it out while overhearing chief swan because knowing Edward he would have flipped out and done something stupid. I want Bella to tell him. Can't wait for your next update!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Small Town Gossip
WOW! I cant believe it ... So after i read this before bed last night, I couldnt help but think about what might happen ... Edward goes to Bella's house and Jake is trying to get him to leave and then ... Charlie comes to the door and Edward passes out! I literly saw Edward on the ground at Bella's front door. (LOL) I mean if i saw my clone I would freak too!
I cant wait to see what you have instore for us ... waiting with bouncy knees
LOVE MAC!
Author's Response: LOL. There are all sorts of possibilities. :oD
The next chapter is going to the beta as soon as I upload it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:00 AM · On: Small Town Gossip
Is edward going to find out he's the father in the next chapter?
Author's Response: Oh yes, Edward will be finding out about Charlie. :oD
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Next chapter is all ready for the beta and will be going today.
~lc~
Reviewer: KEEGANN (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
i saw the update and pretty much peed myself
please please please please please please please please please please get the next chapter out as soon as you can aka tomorrow looks good!
you def. took a twist with edward evesdropping...muahahaha
can't wait for the next
Author's Response: Oh, and your wish is my command. :oD
As soon as I finish with review replies, I'll be sending the next chapter to the beta.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
Edward has been thinking of Bella for a very long time. It's too bad he didn't realize it earlier and treated Bella better for there only night together. Or at least have apologized or talked to her after he found out she was a virgin. But no he just left after being a jerk. He's regretted his behavior for years too bad he's never contacted Bella to let her know at all. Now he knows Bella has a child but doesn't know how old little Charlie is and who's the father. Since he's on his way over to the Swan's home big shock in store for Mr Edward Cullen. Shake him to his core even further and understanding why his siblings are so angry with him will become very clear to him. Can't wait for Edward's jaw to be dropped to the floor.
Author's Response: Yes, we are about to hit the bumpy patch. Sorry I'm rushing through reviews today. I've got the next chapter all ready for the Twi'd beta so as soon as I'm finished with my replies, she will be getting it. :oD
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 07:11 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
fabulous, superb, amazing
i have been literally hitting refresh on my laptop hopping for a update on this story
loving the drama and the character development
love that Edward is not a complete arsehole and that there is hope for redemption with him
not to be to bossy but hurry up already
smooches
Author's Response: LOL. The next chapter will be with the Twi'd beta in less than an hour. :oD
Just prepare yourself. Thus begins the rollercoaster.
~lc~
Reviewer: qlsm (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
Let's see. Edward could stop by to see Bella and see photos. Bella could simply tell him outright, or Edward could ask someone the age of Charlie and realize the time line. Maybe Edward overheards the conversation among family members or Esme allude to Charlie as her grandson....Regardless, This story has a good element of angst. Looking forward to the update!
Author's Response: It's coming very soon. :oD As soon as I finish reviews I will be sending it to the Twi'd beta.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 05:41 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
OMG he's gonna shit when he finds out and hes gonna be pissed that no one told him
Author's Response: LOL. We're about to enter a very emotional place. :oD
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is going to the Twi'd beta as soon as I get finished answering reviews.
~lc~
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
Oh God! OH God! Finally. I can't wait. As soon as he sees his son, I think he'll figure it out. How old is the baby, and the looks. He'll be in shock. I hope he doesn't get too angry at Bella. It was stupid, but then again, how he was conceived, maybe he'll be able to forgive her. He needs to bond with his son as soon as possible for the sake of little Charlie. Keep up the great work! We are waiting. I was so glad to see a new chapter. Have been waiting on pins and needles. Gah!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. You'll get some answers very shortly. The next chapter is going to the Twi'd beta today. :oD
~lc~
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 02:48 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
hes going to freak when he finds out about charlie isn't he? i hope bella has a plan in place! like maybe he'll see jake playing with him and jump to conclusions?
Author's Response: Hmmm, you'll find out very soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is going to the Twi'd beta today. :oD
~lc~
Reviewer: barbiebitch417 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Small Town Gossip
awsome
Author's Response: Thank you, Next chapter is going to the Twi'd beta today!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
Hello, First let me say that it's 2:30AM ... and I started reading this around 10:30, long chappies and a couple of pee breaks. LOL! I would have reviewed before now but i read on my ereader and i cant leave reviews with is. sorry ... but when i got here and saw how you ended the chapter i had to let you know what i saw happening before me ... before i got to the end (of the chapter) ...
I think Edward needs to go to the hospital with everyone else ... its a bad place to do this but good because sometimes stressful situations will affect how people respond to things. IF Charlie doenst have anthing really bad wrong ... then the worry and stress will be eased and then Edward and Bella can have a talk with him there, and it will force them to be civil (hopefully).
OK so there you have my thoughts i had to log onto my computer and let you know. Please forgive my typos and misspelling ... it's 2:30 in the morning and i should be in bed!
LOVE MAC!!!
PS Please update soon! oh and if you want i make banners?
Reviewer: KEEGANN (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
So this is def my favorite story right now but I am dying because everyday I check back and it hasn't been updated. I am in love with Edward, Bella, and Baby (HUMAN NOT THE GODDAMN NESSIE, justkidding shes ok too) But you are doing a fabulous job! Don't get distraught because there are tons of people (like me) who log on just to see if you updated.
Hope the update comes soon--Keegs
Author's Response: Hiya,
Thank you so much. I'm almost ready. It's actually complete, but I'm making some changes. It should be with the Twi'd beta this weekend. She's usually really good with her turn arounds. And hopefully, one we get to about chapter 10, they should come faster.
I so appreciate you reading and reviewing. <3
~lc~
Reviewer: KariCullen (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
aw I just knew you were gonna cliff hang it....totally sucked into this story :) can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :o) The chapter is finished, but I'm making some changes to it, but it should be with the Twi'd beta this weekend.
~lc~
Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 05:14 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
oh no what happened to Charlie? Will Edward go to hospital out of curiousity and notice the similarity between him and the little boy in the hospital bed? I was actually really enjoying the conversation Bella and Edward were having... maybe he's grown up a little bit since high school :) I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Oh, yes, just remember that this is a roller coaster. LOL. Chapter should be with the beta this weekend and in just a few chapters I should be able to get them out a lot faster. :oD
THank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 05:00 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
Soooooo mean!
Author's Response: Awww, I didn't mean to be mean. :oD
The next chapter is uploaded and with the beta. The next one will be following shortly.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: shaydarlogoth (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
I normally do not like the human fanfic stories, but I have to say this one has really drawn me in.
When it comes to Bella not saying anything I think you wrote it perfectly. I do not think Bella yelling out sometime like our son would have seemed like a very natural thing to say. As a mother when my children are hurt I tend to turn everything else off until I am done fixing them.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I agree. For me, Edward would have taken a back seat as well. Yes, he deserves to know, but that just wasn't the right moment. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is with the Twi'd beta and the one after that is almost complete and will be submitted ASAP.
~lc~
Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 01:01 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
Love reading your story. It was recommened by another fanfic I was reading so I decided to check it out and I am very happy I did. I like how you start after she has already had the baby so we don't have to go through the whole process of her being pregnant at school and think this allows for more juicy stuff to go on :) p.s. love that this edward has a tat
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 07:09 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
ack... seriously... evil cliffy ... realy evil cliffy!!
Author's Response: LOL. Sorry. The next chapter is with the Twi'd beta and the one after that is right on it's tail.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 06:42 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
for one third of this chapter i was singing your praises from highest mountain top - this story was evolving so beautifully and then you rip the fucking rug out from under me,
astonishing, amazingly BRILLIANT!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you. There are going to be a lot of moments like that in this story. :oD
The chapter is with the Twi'd beta and the one after that will be there soon.
Thanx for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: barbiebitch417 (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
plz update this story is awsome
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Next update is with the Twi'd beta and the one after that is almost ready to go. :oD
~lc~
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
great part. i hope edward learns about lil charlie soon.
Author's Response: Soon. I promise. Soon. LOL. The next chapter is with the beta and the one after that will be there shortly. :oD
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: Ariel_Marie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Bar Fights and Barbecues
wonderful story...please please please hurry i need to know what happened
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next chapter is with the Twi'd beta and the one after that will be there soon. :oD
~lc~
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