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Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 8: Moving Forward
Oh boy can't wait I hope to hell Edward doesn't think about doing the nasty with Jessica please Tanya was bad enough and I know hes pissed but really she never asked for anything from him and he would have never known if she hadn't run into Alice. I think Bella is in love with Edward and I think he feels the same about her he just being a asshat hopefully they can have a HEA baby Charlie needs both of his parents not some replacement
Author's Response: There are all sorts of emotions at play here, but neither one is acting rationally at the moment.
Sorry it has taken me so long to respond, but the good news is that the next chapter is already submitted and should be posted soon. :oD
Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 8: Moving Forward
Oh no. Don't leave us there. I hope Edward calms down when he talks to her.
Author's Response: Hiya, sorry it's taken so long. The next chapter has been submitted so hopefully it will be posted soon. :oD
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Tinnabon1 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Confessions
Started reading today. Love it already! I want to hug Bella and slap Edward!lol I can't wait for this story to play out. Try not to leave us in suspense for too long! ; )
Reviewer: angrykitten (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Confessions
Can not wait!!!!
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 03:25 AM · On: Confessions
Yep, that is just about exactly how I thought he would react. Poor Bella. I know he really over reacted but I cant say that I blame him on some level.
Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Confessions
Unbelievable! What a jerk. I hope she makes him work HARD on getting on her good graces. I can't believe he said those things about money. She never intended for him to know about that boy. And of course he blames her for getting knocked up! Unbelievable!
Reviewer: Derryqueen (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Confessions
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Confessions
i just got through these first through chapters and I love your story. Edward's reaction was totally realistic and incredibly well written. I can't wait for future updates
Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 03:48 PM · On: Confessions
Whoa. I knew Edward could be an asshole, but... this boggles the mind. He is, like, a DINOSAUR assshole -- you know, the BIGGEST asshole ever in the WORLD! That fossil would have to look like a freakin' cave! And the amount of shit that comes from it? Epic, man. Simply epic.
Thanks for writing. I think?
Reviewer: Aurora Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 02:32 PM · On: Confessions
well it may be long but its life, your trying to write something real not a fairy tale so i think its amazing keep the good work
Reviewer: mayluna (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:07 PM · On: Confessions
nice
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Confessions
Oh Edward I would say it's time for you to grow up you are an absolute shit I love you like the sun but dude you fuck'd up time and now it's time to make it right do right by your child! Bella doesn't want any thing from you except may be for you to love your son.well all know that behind that party all the time and casual fuckin guy beats the heart of a real man so un-earth him please
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Confessions
honestly, i wanted a better, more adult reaction from him, based on his inner monlgoughw on how he felt or was beginning to realize his true feelings but this reaction was more realistic and much much more entertaining i am buckled up and ready for the ride.
and wow, loving his families reaction, and especially enjoyed Em's right hook nice touch
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Confessions
Edward showing up asking Jake questions about Charlie was very interesting. Glad Jake didn't give him any new answers. Still made even more questions for him. I can't blame Bella for wanting to run. Just having the feeling that Edward would react the same way about his son as he did with having sex with a virgin. Getting angry and irrational. Which is exactly what he did. Especially after the evidence was presented to him. The proof that the boy was his by age and phyiscal traits. What did Edward do but blow up, yell, accuse Bella of being a golddigger, trying to pin it on him, make fool of him and his family, use them, and try to make herself feel better about her whorish ways (his words). Of course all he did was make her cry and feel horrible. Made his family angry. He didn't want to acknowledge any more guilt of what occurred that night at the party with Bella. It's ironic because he's been talking about Bella like she is his and he's been talking about accepting her even with a child. Now since he finds out the child is his, rejection and denial is his first offense/defense. Then he runs to get drunk and wakes in someone else's bed unaware of how he got there, what he had done, whether he used a condom, etc... Glad his mom called him out on his behavior. Shocked him mom knew so much about his whoring ways. He does owe Bella a huge apology for his behavior for the party as well as for the night before. Charlie is his son. He was conceived essentially in violence in Edward's bed before he left for college. Edward needs to seriously grow up and acknowledge reality and take responsibility for all of his actions and their repercussions.
Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Confessions
God, Edward was such a dickwad to Bella....
Reviewer: CrescentHeart (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Confessions
yay for esme and emmett!!!!!!! love them. and the rest of the fam too (Jasper <3)
Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:42 AM · On: Confessions
Wow. Interesting that he was thinking about still wanting her knowing she had a baby. Now that he knows it's his all those thoughts are gone for the moment. So far, he's not angry she didn't tell him he's just angry. Hopefully, he will soften soon. I'm really disappointed he went out and slept with someone. Please don't let him do that again!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Confessions
i feel so bad for bella! she doesn't deserve to have to go through all of this with edward acting like a colossal jerk! it depresses me! will he ever want to know charlie?
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Confessions
Found a new fav!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Confessions
omg someone beat the shit out of edward or i will find him and do it myself!!!! WHAT A COMPLETE FUCKING IMMATUARE ASS HOLE!!! If bella even gives him the time of day i will fuck her up as well!!!
OK i took a breath, but seriously ... how immature can you get scrath that, i've lived it i know, even the men who have acheived great prfessional success can run off when they get a girl pregnant. I feel really bad for Bella, and i be she is wish she had never gone back to Forks after college.
Please update soon, and kick Edward in the nads, just one time for me, infact Rose needs to be the one to do it!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: A Twilight Song (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 05:44 AM · On: Confessions
I know it's not s contest or something, but I can't help thinking "Who was more stupid?" and "Who do I feel more sad for?"... I must say that I am a little pissed at Edward for being an asshole towards her and also for being so ignorant, but then again, it must've some schock for him.
Anyways. Can not wait for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: starbubbles (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Prologue (Strider)
I just love the "unplanned perfection" phrase. I am not a mother yet, but I can't stand people that tell their kids they were "mistakes". I think "unplanned perfection" is just the most wonderful way to put it.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 11:34 PM · On: Confessions
He is such an idiot! Like she meant for this to happen. Does he even remember trying to pot on a condom!?! He doesn't remember the night before. He is being such a dick. I think if Bella wanted money she wpold have answered one of Alice's phone calls! Idiot!!!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Confessions
okay... i get it but.... what a dick! hopefully he wises up...
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 10:48 PM · On: Confessions
Wow! Not what I expected at all on the reveal! I can understand his anger, but once seeing his son and his likeness to himself..that is was so faaked up how he reacted..I know he is in shock and all..but come on! I just love Esme..she should have gven him a lil biatch slappin to wake his ass up...but her words, I feel had a better impact on him. Great chap...looking fwd to next update ;)
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