Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: smileedimples (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 01:02 AM · On: Decisions Made
im guessing riley comes and edward is all like mine!!!
hahaha cant wait for the next!!!
:)
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is all submitted so hopefully it will be up pretty soon.
~lc~
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Decisions Made
Finally!!!! Edward is starting to realize what a precious jewel little Charlie is, and that he wants to be part of his life. I feel that Edward wants more of Bella's life too, but he's just too scared to admit it. Edward was so cute following them to the Park and how he wanted to see Charlie. Love it! You explained his nervousness very precisely. Loved IT!! Love how they spend a little one on one time together at the indoor play center. How Edward realizes that he wants to be part of Charlie's life now....not in eleven days. And now for Bella to move in....got to love it! Riley is going to be a complication, but maybe now Edward will start to admit his feelings for Bella too!!! Love it! Can't wait to see more!!
Author's Response: Edward really is much more complicated than people think. He's got a lot going on in his head. Next chapter gives some insight on how he came to his conclusion on what he wanted. :o)
This is definitely going to be a LONG process.
Thank you so very much for R & R.
~lc~
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Decisions Made
i hope that riley shows up and is obnoxious! and bella sends him on his way! im excited that edward wants to take a chance and know his son
Author's Response: You'll get E's thought process in the next chapter and how he came to his conclusion. :oD
As for Riley....Hmmmmm. LOL.
Thank you for reading and for reviewing. Next chapter is submitted and shouldn't be too much longer.
~lc~
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Decisions Made
omg so loving this finally an Edward who doesnt have his shit together
it is such a nice change of pace to see an Edward who is off kilter great job
Author's Response: No, Edward most certainly does not have his shit together. LOL. But he is trying.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is submitted.
~lc~
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Decisions Made
I'm proud of Edward. he did some major growing up in this chapter. I am also very impressed by Carlisle's monkey bar talents. Very impressive Dr. C!
Can't wait to read Edward's POV!
Author's Response: Edward is getting there, slowly. LOL. Yeah, poor Carlisle probably needed a good rub down from Esme after that. :oP
Next chapter is submitted and will hopefully be up soon.
Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. :oD
~lc~
Reviewer: greyeyedmama (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Baby Steps
Love It! Great story, can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 03:46 PM · On: Baby Steps
Excellent as always, this is by far my favourite story. More soon please x
Author's Response: Hiya,
Thank you so much. :oD I love hearing that.
The next chapter has been submitted so it shouldn't be too much longer.
Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing.
~lc~
Author's Response: Hiya,
Thank you so much. :oD I love hearing that.
The next chapter has been submitted so it shouldn't be too much longer.
Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 04:45 PM · On: Baby Steps
Hey! I love this story. This is what a lot of single mothers go through. Very realistic. How long does it usually take to update the story once you submit?
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 04:45 PM · On: Baby Steps
Hey! I love this story. This is what a lot of single mothers go through. Very realistic. How long does it usually take to update the story once you submit?
Author's Response: It really is. There are a lot of women out there faced with these types of decisions every day. It's very easy to say that they should behave one way or another, but in this case, Bella made a decision based on what she thought was right. Was it? We'll find out. :oD
I have already submitted the next chapter. The time frame varies, based on the Twi'd beta, but I'm in constant contact with mine so it shouldn't be too long.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: CrescentHeart (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 12:25 PM · On: Baby Steps
as much as i want to hate him, i just can't. love love love their interactions and can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: There's just something in the way he thinks, right? You can't really blame him for being confused and upset. He's made bad decisions and acted poorly, but he's not a bad guy.
The next chapter is already submitted. Shouldn't be too much longer.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Baby Steps
Edward finally got a good look at Charlie. Definitely can't deny him at all. Didn't even need a paternity test once he saw him face to face. It's obvious to him. He saw facial expressions of Bella on him that he thought were so cute. Hard for him not to smirk or chuckle. When Charlie took him into the music room and heard him play the piano another trait from him was another proof. Charlie was good. He was actually feeling a little proud. My son -- Our son. It's still a shock -- after 4 years to learn about having a son out of the blue. But all the clues since he has been home when no one mentioned that the boy using his piano and drawing pictures for the fridge was his son. Annoying since it's like he wasn't including in the family any more -- he was an outsider -- a pariah or something. Yes when he learned it -- he didn't take it very well. But his siblings and parents had some time to adjust and accept it as fact. Actually they were happy, but they weren't actually the parent, the one responsible for begetting the child. Now that he knows the child's full name and realizes Bella never used the Cullen name, never attempted to force Edward to marry her, never approached him, never approached his parents or siblings, and never asked any of them for help or money. She's not a golddigger. It just happened from the one time in his room at the party after graduation. I think he's starting to cave in now. He's actually met Charlie, watched him at the table, interacting with the family, joking with Uncle Emmie, accepting him as Eward. Not sure Charlie will understand when Edward's finally introduced as his daddy, that might take some time to sink in and make sense. It will take a lot of convincing to Bella that Edward is serious to be a part of his life. Edward doesn't want to lose his family, since they plan on keeping both Bella and little Charlie close to them, if Edward wants to be welcome at all times, he'll have to accept and be a part of his son's life as well. I don't think it will be as hard as he thinks it will be, he's right it is a big decision. It's a lifetime decision. Can't be quick, it's a long time and will effect his family life as well.
Author's Response: Yes, this experience is still very much confusing for Edward. The emotions are all over the place. How is he supposed to feel? What is he supposed to do? This is really a tough decision. They have so far to go. Will he decide to be a part of Charlie's life? Will he and Bella be able to get along for the sake of their child?
The next chapter is already submitted so it shouldn't be too long.
Thank you for reading and of course, reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Baby Steps
yay!!!
Author's Response: Yay for Edward meeting Charlie? LOL.
Next chapter is all submitted. Shouldn't be too long.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: jackthepoodle (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Baby Steps
I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :oD
I am glad that you are liking it. The next chapter is all submitted so shouldn't be too long.
~lc~
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 09:31 AM · On: Baby Steps
Edward seems to be turning a corner...slowly but still. Alittle movement is better than none, right? he seems to be very thoughtful as he is trying to make his decision.
Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: A little movement is definitely better than none at all. :oD The next chapter is already submitted so shouldn't be too long.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 09:09 AM · On: Baby Steps
I really love how Edward is finally getting to feel a little more like a dad, well at least that he has a son. He has made some type of connection with Charlie and you can feel his heart startening to soften. He wants to talk to Bella at least and see where everything is going, which is a great sign. I love how Esme was willing to kick out her own son for Bella, and how Edward was shocked that Esme would do it.....priceless!!! Love it! Charlie is just soooooo cute!! Want to scooop him up...all of his great words for piano and sweepy....lol. So...so....priceless. Can't wait for Edward to dislodge his head from his ass. Should be good! LOVE IT!! A definite FAVORITE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, he's beginning to see the light, but still very unsure. :o/ But who could resist that litle guy for very long. LOL.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is already submitted so shouldn't be too long. :oD
~lc~
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Baby Steps
i hope that whatever edward chooses its the best for the boy and bella!
Author's Response: Me too. LOL. Next chapter is already submitted so should be up soon. :oD
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: Twirob (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Prologue (Strider)
excellent opening this is my first read on this site and you're my first review i'm looking forward to reading the rest if i can figure out what i'm doing :D
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 01:15 AM · On: Small Town Gossip
Hey! Kudos on the "Hindsight is 20/20" line...very fitting for a psychology major to say something like that! That's a great detail to pick up on in the story!
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 12:13 AM · On: The Prodigal Son
you're doing greatj! keep up the good work!
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 10:48 PM · On: Painful Memories
It's going really well for you first time. ;) no pun intended. LOL I like the story....
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 10:46 PM · On: Baby Steps
2 weeks is 2 weeks, sorry Eddie you wated your chance
Author's Response: Well, he's still got some time. Two weeks after he found out the test results. Next chapter is already submitted. :oD
Thank you so much for reading and of course for reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 09:36 PM · On: Baby Steps
finally! he pulls his head out
this is evolving into something really special, i cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Next chapter is on it's way. All submitted and waiting for posting.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :oD
~lc~
Reviewer: Cyper22 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Reality Check
Read Through Chapter 10
Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 9: Reality Check
Please can we have the next chapter soon, this is my absolute favourite story on here, I need more, please ;-)
Reviewer: Cyper22 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2011 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 9: Reality Check
This is wonderful!
I never read stories that are not completed because I can't stand the suspense of waiting for the next chapters to be posted but I couldn't resist when I came across your story!
It's fantastic and the anticipation of his meeting with Charlie is killing me!!
I hope you post the next chapter(s) really really soon!
This has got to be one of the best stories that I have read!
Jess
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws. Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|