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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Only You

Not truly admitting her true feelings all those years ago, but a quick synopis of them.  Bella had always wanted him, only him, and agreed wanted the us.  The same as Edward, but not just on the couch for a quick satisfaction.  Edward wants it to really mean something and to be done right this time.  Bella deserves so much since the last time.  Glad that all the anger between all parties has been forgiven and understood that it isn't worth it now.  It is only hurting them all from moving forward and getting them to where everyone is at peace, contentment, and happiness. I have to say after all the fighting about nanny vs day care, Rose suggesting pre-school was a great idea.  It's a compromise, but leaning towards day care.  Getting on in Port Angeles since that is where Bella and Edward spend most of their daytime hours anyway is the smart way to do it.  Even the catagorizing techniques and deciding which one to choose was a good method.  But could tell neither one really wanted to continue talking about pre school would rather talk about each other and their possible new relationship together and establishment as a permanent family.

Reviewer: helen2912 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Only You

Loved it, but god if Edward stopped on me like that I think I would spontaneously combust!

Reviewer: elauradannon (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Only You

ooh, it's heating up now! what a place to stop lol!

Reviewer: gracedout (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Only You

LOVE@@@@@!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: psychobabble (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Only You

love this

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Only You

Hooray for declaring their love to one another!!! Nothing wrong w/ a little dry-humping either! 

Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Only You

Great job.  I gotta say, Alice did deserve to be confronted.  Charlie staring at Edward was hilarious.  And we got some heat.  I wonder who is going to Denver? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 04:56 AM · On: Only You

I can't even tell you how much I loved loved loved this chapter.   Finally!!!!  So much Passion!!!!!  So much admitted love!!   GAH!   There is something about your writing that just makes us scream....with happiness.  Love it!   Finally these two are getting it right.   Fixing their past a little, well, at least making up for lost time.    Love how finally things are completely out in the open, well, maybe not completely since Edward stopped them on the couch.    LOL!   Love it and can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 8: Moving Forward

God I LOVE Charlie!!!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Confessions

go esme!!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 09:07 PM · On: Small Town Gossip

Damn it!!  It's way past my bedtime and I've gotten sucked into this story!  And how in the world am I supposed to go to bed now, knowing what's coming next?!?! :D

Reviewer: BRITANY14 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2011 05:50 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

please update soon

Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 09:00 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

Oh Edward..... If you could have just put your balls in your purse and talked to somebody after you flipped out. If you would have atleast talked to Alice, maybe you wouldn't have missed out on Charlie as a baby. Poor guy. I hope she gives him a little bit of a break, if for anything else, just for being a stupid guy.

Can't wait to see the fall out. Keep'em coming Suger Britches

Stephanie

Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:29 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

LOOOOVED IT!!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 07:10 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

That was amazing. I still cant forgive him but I do understand his torcher. I hope they both can star to heal.

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 03:54 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

fuck riley, riley's an ass hat! they had an agreement no wer in said agreement did it say claimm to love me then treat me like shit when i cnt return the sentiment! 

 

any who.....

 

this chapter was AWESOME!!!!!!! 

i just LOVED IT!!! 

 

can't wait 4 the nxt chapter!!!

Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 10:59 AM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 9: Reality Check

"Quilting Daily" that was so funny. I am proud of Bella for hold her ground were edward is concerned. Edward get your head out of your ass... not everuthing is about you.

Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 09:41 AM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

Gotta comment on the Jasper and Edward part.  That was funny.  It reminds me of the scene in Spaceballs where they are watching themselves on the TV.  Riley said some pretty messed up stuff.  I don't care how much pain he was in, that was wrong.  I'm not sure if he will be involved any more, but my gut says no.  Edward finally did it.  He told her he loves her.  And she did too.  Amazing job.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Hope you get it posted soon.

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Confessions

I just started reading your story and I am really enjoying it. I just have to say that Edward is one fucked up self absorbed guy. He needs to really put himself in bella's shoes. I was hoping Esme was going to slap him across the face. He needs something to wake him up.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 01:01 AM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

I don't blame Bella for being upset with Alice waking her up early in the morning.  If Alice was hungry, she could have gone to breakfast with Jasper and Edward.  Then Bella could have gone when she awoke later.  As it happened Rose and Emmett took their sweet time at getting downstairs could have been an extra hour sleep or two for Bella.  After all they all did do a lot of drinking the night before and a lot of drama as well.  The drama took a lot out of Bella.  She really needed the rest after all of the stress, tension, anxiety, and anger over the boys hormonal feud.  Riley was in love with her, but he was using her as an object in front of Edward.  Staking his claim by groping her in public.  Being very physical in public which she was trying to stop knowing Edward would be upset.  Deep down she still had feelings for Edward that started when she first saw him.  the same with him when he saw her the first time.  The instant attraction between them only grew stronger as time passed.  Glad Edward finally explained the anger and the violence.  Bella never knew Mike had bragged in the locker room about them doing it after prom.  Made her mad, don't blame her.  It was a lie.  So when Edward learned she was a virgin all the guilt and anger at himself for treating her so roughly became even worse and in his youth he couldn't handle it.  He hid behind his anger and tough exterior to hide his pain and his broken self.  Knowing he had probably lost his chance to ever win Bella for himself.  But he did admit he would have come back and loved Charlie and Bella.  He heard Bella say she would have loved him too.  Now on to the topic of Riley.  Riley had one thought on his mind when he drove to Forks. He was going to talk to Bella, but wind up in bed to convince her to take him back.  Once he learned Charlie was with Edward, his plan was sealed.  Insisted on the tour of every room even Bella's bedroom.  Made nasty comment about Cullen money.  Made Bella mad for sure..  Almost like if she had the two of them could have been living in the lap of luxury for four years.  Then instead of talking all he wanted to do was seduce her.  Bella had already made up her mind to end the physical aspect of their relationship.  She wants to maintain their friendship.  She likes/loves him as a friend like Alice, but she can't love him as a boyfriend/lover/life partner.  Bella reminded him of their agreement when they crossed the line that it wouldn't ruin what they had, but Riley couldn't keep that promise as he was in love with Bella and loved Charlie.  He yelled some pretty harsh accusations towards Bella about the Cullens will take away Charlie, Edward would use her and discard her like his other whores.  All of which Edward heard since he was standing at the door.  After Charlie was asleep he came up to see if Bella needed help against Riley.  I guess if he heard Riley yelling he thought Bella might need backup.  After hearing Riley insult him, his anger was related to his treatment of Bella and his entire family. When he ordered him out of the house.  Riley isn't too bright he continued to taunt Edward even though Edward was already livid. But once Riley grabbed Bella and attempted to pull her towards him, that's when Edward exploded.  Punches flew, bodies up against walls, etc..  Bella thrown backwards into the table.  I hope Carlisle checks her back sounds like she hit that table hard. Riley said those things to Bella to hurt her because he was hurting, but still he can't take those things back.  Those are statements that will remain and not be able to be forgiven or forgotten.  Riley has totally destroyed any type of relationship between himself and Bella.  For Riley to accuse her of not wanting to have sex with him because of Edward wasn't really the reason.  It was because she had feelings for Edward, but those feelings were there before she met Riley.  She even admitted she never should have agreed to it, it was against her better judgement in the beginning.  Never should have crossed from close friendship into friends with benefits category.  Riley felt she would fall in love with him and Bella knew she never would.  her heart was already taken and gone somewhere else.  His attitude the night of the club and at her apartment made the decision to make a clean break a lot easier.  His actions caused her plans to not work as she planned.  She was going to have him sit in the living room and talk.  Which he had no intention of talking.  He wanted sex, seduction, distraction, in order to sway her to his way.  Trick her while she's in a serene place after sex.  Not having her full mind capacity working on all cylinders.  Devious on his part to get his own way.  Desperate tactics because he saw the writing on the wall with her pulling away by moving his groping hands away.  It was cute them both falling asleep together on the couch.  Both will be stiff and uncomfortable when they wake up (no pun intended.) It might be though with her on his lap.  My favorite part was Edward's excitement about having Charlie spend the night with him the following weekend.  He was so cute.  Like a little boy on Christmas.  His face all lit up.  Making plans, wanting to sleep out in the clubhouse/fort. Both Moms said no too cold.  Why not make Tents with blankets and broom poles, mops, etc..., clothespins, and sleeping bags and camp out on the floor.  Either in Edward's bedroom, living room, downstairs media room, etc.... Be a great father son bonding inside camping adventure.  I know we used to that when I was a kid.  Even used the clothesline outside to help hold up part of the blankets overhead.  Looking forward to the fallout of the confessions on both of their parts.

Reviewer: tabbymarie1975 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 08:01 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

awe that was sweet u did awesome

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 07:47 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

Holy shit!!!! That was amazing!!! Riley decided to try to make his claim, and even though I understand that he is hurt, he has no right to suddenly think that Bella loves him, in that way. He had no right to hit Edward, as long as Bella was OK. Edwards confession was so unbelievable, and yes sweet. Their kiss was perfect. Their time together, perfect. Finally their relationship reaching for the next level. Wonder what's up next!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 06:56 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

Well Edward finally fessed up; good for him! Does this mean that Riley's out of the picture for good now?

Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 06:53 PM · On: The End . . . And the Beginning

Brilliant again, I really love this story ;-)

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