i loved it

Wooo. Plenty of citrus.  And they love each other.  Yeah.  Cammy is going to be a pain.  I know Bella will be pissed, but I don't think it is Edward's fault.  What happened wasn't right, but he just got the shock of a lifetime.  In my opinion, Bella should throw her relationship with Edward at Cammy and tell her to fuck off.  Just nip it in the bud before it gets out of hand.

Hooray for I love you's!!! 

Of course Cammy is going to stir up trouble. In so many other stories it's Tayna; guess she's getting a break this go around

Can't wait for their overnight date!

I don't know how you do it....but you just make me so happy with each of your chapters.   I want to SQUEEEE!   This one was no exception.    How this small loving family has grown in affection for one another, well, the outward examples to each other and to the rest of the family.    It is wonerful.    Watching in our mind, the whole peeing thing!!! ROFL.   I was truly laughing outloud....so so funny.   I loved how Edward had to talk Bella into opening the door to take Charlie to school, and then the realization that Charlie would be just as cute as Edward, and she'd have to deal with that one day, with the girls...LOL!   I loved how Bella is being so aggressive now on the sexual front, and poor Edward is at his wit's end.   Loved IT!!!!   When he had to tell her that he wanted to, but now right now because of Charlie being there...perfect.    I was really happy when Edward confronted Bella with the news that their son had shared with him about being called "the boyfriend" and how FINALLY...he POURED out his heart to Bella (I was sniffing here) and told her that he LOVED HER!!!   YIPEEE!   Of course, after a painful pause, Bella told him the same!   This relationship has nowhere to go but up now!!! Love it all!   DAMN that CAMMY!  Stay away witch~!!!!!!!!    Ah...until next time.  

Oh snap oh snap oh snap!!!  Can't wait for more!  This was just so amazing!  I knew Edward and Cammie would have an ah ha moment and then it would be like oh shit....  Can't wait for their weekend alone woo hoo hot this has been amazing!

Hot, hot, hot.  I love it. They are testing the waters, so to speak.  Just teasing lemons.  I gotta say, Charlie is hilarious.  I laughed so hard both times.  First, when they were talking to Lauren. Second, when Edward told him to say goodnight, buddy and he copied Edward. He is adorable.  Post again soon.

Author's Response:

Charlie is my little heart. He's based after my son when he was that age. :oD He and Edward have a little adventure in the next chapter too. LOL. 

Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. The next chapter has been submitted and should be up soon. 

~lc~

OMG OMG OMFG!!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!  Wow I mean holy crazy fortune teller and then the ending to teh chap was icing super sweet icing lemon flavored muah hahahhah

Post again soon can't wait for more!!

Author's Response:

Hee hee. Yes, these guys are starting to "warm up" to each other. LOL. 

Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. 

The next chapter has been submitted and should be up fairly soon. :oD 

~lc~

Edward is trying to do the relationship thing the right way.  Take things slow.  Date her, treat her with respect, take their time, build their foundation, cement them as a couple and a family.  Edward wants to show her just how much he cares for her.  He doesn't just want to take her.  Have her think it's all about sex.  He cares about her totally as a person.  Yeah it's about the physical too as witnessed by Charlie, but his feelings for her run deeper.  Edward wants the whole package not just another fling.  He wants the family, the home, the white picket fence, the wife, the son, more children in the future, etc... He'll probably stay in Washington to finish medical school if he ever returns at all. They are doing all things together selecting pre-school for Charlie.  Bella appears to have another agenda for herself.  She's waited all this time for Edward to actually love her, she wants Edward to physically love her now.  She knows he emotionally already does, she wants to take it to the next level. In Bella's mind, Edward has already proved his devotion in many more ways than just words by his actions.  Bella is ready to take it to the next level.  What Edward said to Lauren is going to bite them both in the bums around town.  Bella will be treated as just another notch in Edward's bedpost instead of his one and only by the women in Forks.  If Tanya does come back she's try to break them up especially because he broke up with her.  Her vanity won't let that insult go without causing trouble for Bella now that she has Edward.  Scandal of Bella going after Edward for only his money.  Poor girl getting pregnant on purpose to win pretty rich boy, etc....

Author's Response:

Yep, Edward is trying to do things the right way. His feelings for her run so deep that he doesn't want screw it up this time. Now there's so much more as stake. 

That always was Bella's biggest fear; people thinking that she had gotten pregnant and had Charlie to trap Edward. Edward is under the belief that it doesn't matter what people think. As long as he, Bella and Charlie know the truth, that's what's important. 

The next chapter is all ready to go and submitted so it should be up soon. 

Thank you for reading and, as always, reviewing. :oD

~lc~

You write one hot couple.   I mean...wow.   These two could steam up a steamroom.    I loved how Edward spent a day and night with Charlie.   I was fist pumping when I read what Edward was saying to Lauren   Of course, Charlie's little comment about his parents kissing was so absolutely sweet.   LOL .....but Edward's comment about how Bella means so much to him.....GAH!!!!   Loved it!    Edward and Bella's date....perfect.   It kind of creeped me out with the fortune teller, but that's life.   Things could go wrong, so they better watch out.     What a sick witch that Tanya was...poking holes in condoms.   What a bitch!   I hope she gets what she deserves, and it's not a prize.       Wow...I would really love to read the continuation of what Edward and Bella are going to be doing soon...very very soon   Those two may combust.   By the Way...laughed when I read "Sorry Charlie"  ....thought of the tuna fish commercial...LOL!   Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Hee hee. Why thank you. Out of the mouths of babes, right? My kids always say things like that at the most interesting times. LOL. The continuation is coming up pretty quickly. . . I hope. It's all submitted. :oD 

LMAO. I do remember the tuna fish commercial. 

Thank you for reading and, as always, reviewing. 

~lc~

Ok, so is it Tanya or the bartender? Please tell me nobody ended up pregnant. I keep thinking if it were Tanya she would have already reveled that. 

Author's Response:

LOL. That's the question? Who could it be. :oP 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm trying to stay on top of things. *sigh* 

The next chapter will be submitted tomorrow so hopefully it will be up soon. 

~lc~

luv it luv it, looking every week for up dates. really luv it

Author's Response:

Getting on top of things early this chapter. LOL. Thank you for reading and for reviewing. I'm planning on submitting the next chapter tomorrow so hopefully it will be up fairly quickly. 

~lc~

I've been reading this story for days...now I'm impatient!! :D

 

I had to catch up with your story before I left you a review. Your story has had me since the first word. I love your way of telling a story and all who are in it. I was lucky to find my Edward 44 years ago and your are so right I don't know what I would do with out him. I met him at work and new the day he started that he was the one. I hope your Bella and Edward find what I did. Can't wait for next chapter.

Lilly