I love how bossy Dawny is... it would've been pretty cool if Buffy were still around but seeing Dawn stand up and do her own thing is pretty awesome =P great job and plz update soon ^^

I love your story! i had just searched Uncle Jasper Whitlock cause i had let my imagination get me and i was like it would be awesome if jasper had a neice and then in a different fan fiction i read his sister had, had witch powers so then i was like it would be cool if she had some of her powers.. Anyway when i read your story i was like OMG!!! this is just how i wanted the story to be!(with a few extra pluses!) and i just want to say i love it! 

mmm interesting storyline, i guess bella wouldnt have been in as much pain if this had really happened lol

loving it so far keep up the great work

I really like your story, please update soon!! :)

Awesome as usual :) i especially like  that part where dawn chased emmett with the fireball lolz. also i was wondering if any of the scoobies will be in the story or it just dawn? anyways i can't wait for update! keep up the good work :)

Mmm, very interesting, I like this so far. Thanks for writing.

Awesome Cliffy1!!!!!

I was so happy to see that you had updated! I have these images in my head of Em and Spike getting into a good old fashion fight, some how I think those two together would be all kinds of trouble (okay so that was a random thought) Anywho keep up the wonderful work I can't wait to see how they respond to the whole Buffy use to slay Vampires thing =)

I'm not a Buffy fan by any means, but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy your story.  It took me a minute to get my bearings, but once I did I really liked the ride. :o)

I really like this story I've never read any crossovers before, but this one really caught my interest. I love that it's dawn that's related to Jasper. I can't wait for the next update =)

Wow, that was great ! I always loved Buffy and a combination is just fabolous :-) PLease go on ?

i absolutley love it! i love reading cross-overs but i have trouble finding ones that like so thank you because i think im going to love this one. As for whether this should be set during New Moon or Breaking Dawn, i think it should be set during BD cuz you already wrote that the family was working on the cottage for edward and bella. it would be interesting if it was set during new moon though. anyway i'll stop rambling. keep up the good work and update soon please!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you are enjoying.  I think I'll still with BD.  I think Dawn would be an incredible resource for the pregnancy.  After all, she does know Connor, so she knows it is not impossible for vampires to have children.  I just sent in another chapter, so keep an eye out for it!