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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

Very much enjoyed the first two chapters. I liked your version of Arthur's Knights.  I have always loved the Medieval time of history. Just the thought of Edward in armor is heart stopping.  He'll be glorious.  Not that Jacob wasn't fine in his.  Enjoyed the joust and it was extremely kind of him to let Jasper win.  Twist of having Rosalie and Jacob being siblings with Rosalie interested in Jasper.  Alice interested in Jacob and sort of Jasper.  The Alice and Edward friendship related as sister/brother closeness.  Her new vision will cause a lot of activity in court.  With Jacob rivaling Edward for the hand of Isabella. Along with all the other ladies in waiting being jealous of any attention from Edward towards any woman, Isabella will be the woman envied by all the others.  Looking forward to the next chapter when Edward arrived back in Camelot.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words!  I hope to get chapter three up soon.  I am currently writing chapter 29, but getting things beta'd takes a little more time.  :)

I know some people prefer canon couples; I do too.  But when I started this, I couldn't see Em with Rosalie or Jasper with Alice.  It just flowed having the differing couples.  Sometimes I wish there was a little more of the non-canon variety in Twilight fan fiction.

 

Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great update!! can't wait for more. please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I should have chapter 3 up soon.  I myself have through chapter 28 written but getting it betaed is another story.  :)

Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

I hope Sir Jasper is smitten with Alice. You are setting up the story nicely. More please.



Author's Response:

Sorry, in this story Jasper wants Rosalie and Alice wants Jacob.

Thanks for reading!  I should have chapter 3 up soon.

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds excellent to me. i'm all for it ;)

Ta

MAster of the Boot



Author's Response:

Thanks, Master!  I hope you continue to like it.  Chapter 2 has just been posted. 

Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start. I love anything Camelot.



Author's Response:

Hi Kuuipo!  I do too.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ahh is this gonna be a jacob/bella story? or and edward/bella story??

 



Author's Response:

Canon and non-canon couples.  E/B in this one. 

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very lovely story. I like that you put it first in Jacob's POV; that's kind of unusual in fandom. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Hi nwalto!  Thanks for reading.  I hope to have chapter two up soon. 

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