Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 12:28 AM · On: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff
I think it depends on what you want for the story...Sounds to me like your characters are running away with it and telling you how to write it..Those kinds of stories can be fun...if this isnt what you wanted though then change it...I'm enjoying it though :)
Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 11:25 PM · On: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff
Please finish the story in the format that it is already in.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 09:49 PM · On: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff
No don't change course a story is a living breathing entity and it drove you here for a reason I can't wait to see Rosalies response I love the angst and drama its engaging and has me very excited for the nect chapter! I mean I love a good comedy like teh rest but its teh angst and drama that has drawn me in and captured my attention!! love post again soon I can't wait to see what they decide to do I say change Bella and have a newborn Bella take on Kate because we know they weren't maketed Kates just nuts..
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 07:19 PM · On: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff
looking forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: mousekitty (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 07:15 PM · On: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff
If you are really convinced the story would be better if rewritten, then do it. BUT, only after finishing this version, even if finishing is just outlining the rest of the story in a single chapter. Don't abandon this version and then start another which might (for whatever good reason) never be completed.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2011 02:50 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
I love Jasper's reaction. No concern for her human issues, indeed! But he's interested enough to try and figure out what it is that's bothering her - I think that would drive me crazy too, if I could tell someone was lying and they just never said anything!
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
I absolutely love this... Rose is gonna hate herself when she finds out she's been treating her daughter like crap.
I think the only way Edward isn't goingt og et his butt kicked is if she doesn't find out until after Bella marries him/is turned :)
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
I love your talent for weaving a tale so different from what anyone else has done. You did it with Einstein and dare I say....I think you've topped yourself!
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 10:05 AM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Loved the chapter!!!!
Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Great chapter.
I have a netbook its great because its so light and you don't have to worry about back pains or anything and if can stick it in a small bag/purse if you want.
Cons would be the small screen (but you can get screens now up to 10'') .
That's the only con I can think of everything else is a plus!
Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 09:37 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Great chapter! Emmett in playgirl, haha too funny! Just waiting for the big reveal!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Well, Jasper's a genius but doesn't know it! I don't think he'll throw Bella under the bus, for the sake of Alice, but he could provide some insight as to what everyone is feeling! PS can I have the link to Emmett's ass?
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Oh shoot, I was waiting for the truth to be told. Soonnnnn!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 04:07 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
looking forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 03:53 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Very interesting. Always glad to see an update
Reviewer: meyerfan (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 03:07 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
love your story - please update soon .
Ipads are the best way to go. second to none they are fabulous.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 02:36 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Thank you!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 01:17 PM · On: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Squeeee omg omg omg I was so windering whose hole yu had mentioned and I just should have known ewwwww!! lmfai!!! As always I love your work too priceless not to your an amazing talent who has managed to capture my attention with so many emotions you rock!
Reviewer: meyerfan (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 09:47 AM · On: He is evil by his very nature
stumbled upon your story I must say , I'm really enjoying it! - what an interesting spin on things! please do update us soon
Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 02:15 PM · On: He is evil by his very nature
Awesome! Can't wait for more...
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Prologue
I have to say the twist had me worrying but the writing style and tone has me hooked. I likes me a cautious though well worn eddie boy. rose is really going to hurt him. (Rubs hands together menicingly) I await your update oh wordsmith of wonders.
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 02:40 PM · On: He is evil by his very nature
Rose is going to bust a gut regardless. LOL
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 12:04 PM · On: He is evil by his very nature
Good but breif chapter!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 11:21 AM · On: He is evil by his very nature
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Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 06:49 AM · On: He is evil by his very nature
I can't wait for Rose to go all mother bear on him! Good chapter by the way.
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