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Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 03:57 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

When do you think you'll update? :)



Author's Response:

I just updated, you should be able to read it in the next couple of days. Thanks for the feedback...

Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 10:56 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

Awww. Why is Rosalie mean to Bella? If that's her daughter, wouldn't she be more nice or something? Or does Rose not know? Lol It's good! Keep up the good work! I love how it's going so far. :)



Author's Response:

Rosalie's motives will be shown later on, thanks for the ego boost...

Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 08:24 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

Are you gonna write more?!?!?!?!! IT'S SOOOO GOOD!



Author's Response:

I am writting more, thanks for the feedback....

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 08:05 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

This is a very intriguing story. I can't wait for more.

Alaina



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, you will get more....

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 11:04 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

oh, and I hate Edward being with Kate. get rid of her!



Author's Response:

Aye, aye captain...

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 10:57 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

Hi!  finally catching up on my reading!  I can't wait to see where you bring this story - the plot is so damn interesting. 

 



Author's Response:

Are you saying you have other priorities other than my epic story? How dare you. Ha, thanks for reading and the feedback...

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 05:43 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

I love her pissed off-ness! Well, some of her story is confirmed, that's a relief. So, what happens now? Will Alice get to spill the beans?

Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry, Alice is coming up in a big way soon. What happens now, you ask? I type, you read and enjoy...

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 04:42 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

I figured Edward wasn't Bella's father, but I still can't piece it all together.  I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Next chapter is up, you will be able to read it soon, thanks for the feedback...

Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 03:16 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

Once again, I am so glad to read a story with a unique plot. I have a theory about Kate and can't wait to see where you take us next.



Author's Response:

What is your theory on Kate? Thanks for the feedback, I adore hearing your input...

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 10:23 AM · On: The lady doth protest too much

OK.  That was interesting.  If Edward is not her father, who is he to her?   You have me fascinated. 



Author's Response:

You have me grateful for the feedback. You will find out soon who he is to her...

Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 11:50 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

WTH! He's in a relationship with Kate? Kate also seems a little jealous to me ;) And why would Rosalie be so mean to her own daughter? Each chapter just brings more questions. Update soon please!

Author's Response:

I updated today. All will be explained. Thanks for the feedback...

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 11:37 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

But not about Rosalie...



Author's Response:

I don't understand your review, but thanks...

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 10:23 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

im intrested to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

I updated today, so you will find out in the next couple days, let me know what you think...

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 10:13 PM · On: The lady doth protest too much

thank you!



Author's Response:

you are welcome, and thank you...

Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 09:44 AM · On: Listen to many, speak to a few

Nice! Love it!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Nice, love the feedback, can't wait for your response on more...

Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 09:38 AM · On: 'Tis best to weigh The enemy more mighty than he seems

Excited to see what Edward will say to her.  Very good plot and different from a lot of the other things out there.  Hopefully, Edward will be his typical gentleman self, and it will also be interesting to see what Rosalie is like.  Very intriguing story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback and curiousity, hope to hear from you again that you like where they are going...

Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Wisely, and slowly. They stumble that run fast.

Oooh, things are coming together.  Is Bella Rosalie's baby?  I'm excited to see how things go between Edward and Bella now that she knows.  Very good!



Author's Response:

Thanks...

Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Prologue

Good so far!  Very mysterious!  Came over from your link on Facebook (Twilight fanfic page), so your self-pimpage did some good :)  Really, I think it's good so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback...

Reviewer: fourshotchild (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 11:34 PM · On: Listen to many, speak to a few

Interesting. I rather like where you're going with this. It's kind of strange thinking Bella as Edward's child. Huh. Wouldn't she be half-vampire? I can't wait until you post your next chapter. I'd like to recommend adding this story to fanfiction.net. Alerts are a godsend. If only they had them here... *sigh* Well, good luck!



Author's Response:

I am working on ffn, again procrastination. I actually uploaded chapter 1, but have not posted it, but I will. Thanks for the feedback...

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Listen to many, speak to a few

well im still excited to see her unfold this mystery



Author's Response:

well, I'm still excited to see your reviews on upcoming revelations...

Reviewer: MicaJ (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 04:24 AM · On: Prologue

I´m pretty sure Edward is not Bellas father - cause that would be wrong on so many levels:-)

I think Rose got raped by Royce or someone like that, Edward or Carlisle saved her just like in Twilight and then Edward kills him for what he did to Rose.

Does that sound about right? :-)

Yeah..... like you actually would tell me :-)

 



Author's Response:

You are correct..... Like I would actually tell you. My outline is center field, and you are floating close. Thanks for the feedback...

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 12:07 AM · On: Listen to many, speak to a few

Look, this story does not seem completed, but you crossed the circle in the banner page that says Complete Yes. If it is not so, please delete the yes!



Author's Response:

Fixed! Thanks, my mouse has a mind of it's own...

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 09:39 PM · On: Listen to many, speak to a few

I am very much looking forward to putting all the pieces together.  I'm still a little muddled: is Bella Edward's daughter or did he just happen to be there when she was born?  I can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

I am very much looking forward to the feedback when it all comes together. What is muddy will become clear...

Reviewer: Avaanne (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Listen to many, speak to a few

I like how this is unfolding.



Author's Response:

I like how you give feedback...

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Listen to many, speak to a few

Good, moving right along! I hope she has enough of his cold shoulder (literally!) and corners him (somehow)! And sheesh, Rosalie is not the warm, fuzzy, maternal type!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, 2/3 of your feedback is answered in new chapter. Rosalie, well she never was warm and fuzzy...

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