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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Say as you think and speak it from your souls
well hes getting better
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Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 05:25 AM · On: Say as you think and speak it from your souls
Yeah... they kissed!!! Did he break up with Kate? I can't remember. Maybe Tanya has finally chowed down and Kate is at the house causing a fuss. I have no problem with them both having experience. They are both older in this story.
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Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 05:09 AM · On: Say as you think and speak it from your souls
Thank you!
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Reviewer: Emmet Cullen Lover (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 02:29 AM · On: Say as you think and speak it from your souls
I like the plot but i do think the chapters should be longer.
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Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 01:24 AM · On: Say as you think and speak it from your souls
Ok, at this point I'd be pretty worried if I were Bella, he's had 15 girlfriends, not bonded with anyone. He just dumped Kate after 10 years. I know the story says he's found his mate and Bella is that. However....er....from Bella's point of view this does not look good because he hasn't told her really how he feels. He's really looking fickled here.
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Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 12:30 AM · On: Say as you think and speak it from your souls
Love it!
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Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2011 06:23 AM · On: Prologue
I didn't get one yet.
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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
I don't think Carlisle was too harse on Edward. He's got to be responsible for how he treats Kate.
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Reviewer: chibichanga (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 09:25 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
Just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story. Its very different!!! I am fascinated that Rose is the mother. Can't wait for the scene when she finds out..
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Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
So good! Keep up the good work. :)
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Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 01:49 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
So when does Rosalie get to find out Bella is her daughter?
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Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 01:43 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
Did you delete a chapter? Chapter 7 ended with Edward in Bella's room and Bella waking up. Now 8 starts with a note about the grandparents I don't understand and the previous scene completely dropped.
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Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 07:08 AM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
I have to say I was more then a bit surpized to find that you had FINALLY updated this. I had pretty much given up on it. You have done a great job on it though! I thought that Carlisle's response was quiet appropriate. He was leading Kate on and that is not an okay thing. Edward needed to figure out who exactly he wanted and stop leading them both on. Carlisle gave the much needed wake up call to them both. Looking forward to more soon.
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Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 05:22 AM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww! im loving it! can't wait 4 the nxt update :D
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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 11:53 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
No, Carlisle was right! But it's time to do even more, Edward can't keep Kate on the hook in case Bella doesn't love him, when it's clear he loves her. He never had those feelings for Kate, so....
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Reviewer: yellowdandylions (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 10:06 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
So glad to finally read another chapter. I like your story. The approach is very different.
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Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 09:49 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
Ok, the only problems I'm having is the long time between updates as I do read a lot. So I usually have to go back and review when I do get one of these.
Carlisle wasn't too harsh, someone should have said those things to Edward earlier, with his tendency to brood and feel guilty the situation he was in was a no win. He knew Kate wasn't his mate, so the physical thing with her and the emotional with Bella was a recipe for disaster. As they say...sometimes you have to be cruel to be kind.
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Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 02:04 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
I just came across this story and find it quite readable.
C was not to harsh on E. Edward desperately needed that.
Hmm, the could the newborn they are planning on for Tanya be Garrett?
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Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 01:45 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
Interesting concept, I like it so far.
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Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 01:30 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
this is very different...cool :)
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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
well im excited to see what happens next chatper
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Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
I'm glad they are getting closer. I wish Kate would just go home. So curious to who her father is. Carlisle needed to be harsh. I don't like Kate, but it is not fair to her.
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Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 12:27 PM · On: Pleasure and action make the hours seem short
Thank you! I so glad this is not going to be an orphan story!
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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 11:06 PM · On: A stage where every man must play a part, And mine is a sad one.
well i cant wait to see what happens next chapter
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Reviewer: Moodyval59 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 05:09 PM · On: A stage where every man must play a part, And mine is a sad one.
Can't wait to read more.
Don't think I've read a story where Rosalie is Bella's Mother.
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