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Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 09:48 AM · On: To do a great right, do a little wrong
Mama bear Rosalie is a scary thought.
Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 10:07 PM · On: Wisely, and slowly. They stumble that run fast.
Uhm if you end up pairing Edward and Bella that will just be creepy... like rich seriously old man dating teenage supermodel creepy (anna nicole smith comes to mind)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 01:49 PM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Oh I have an idea and I am sorry if its late but I knew 3 sisters growing up!!! Rose Violet and Lily! LMAO Yes the father was some kind of plant specialist I don't remember I was little but her mom always called them her flowers its so cheesy but when you said you needed a name it was like omg I totally know this one! Post again soon can't wait for more Bellas decloration of possibly failing to love him back was killer my heart hurt at the possible disapointment he might feel that she didn't already care for him right now!
Author's Response: Response and teaser on it's way...
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 12:08 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Bree ilove breefrom twilight read the book about her lika amillion times so sad :( so yeah i think rose's sister shud be bree ...any hoo greatchaptercant wait 4more!
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 11:32 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
This is a deep version of Twilight with lot of twist and turns. "Ashley" would be a nice name. I guess not telling Rose is becuase the father disowned the child and she is still hurt about it. Not sure why they don't want Rose to know. Regardless she needs to know and deal with it.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
looking forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: peepskeeper (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 06:37 PM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
I loved the chapter and was very excited to see you had updated. As for Rosalie's sister what about iris? Looking forward to your next chapter.
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 03:21 PM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Farrah, that's a good, different but not too different, name to go with Rosalie.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 03:06 PM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Maybe he should have lurched at Bella and said you can't handle the truth and you are a terrible liar. As in, you can't lie for shit! Now, Edward better confide in Alice or Jasper, because it's clear he needs some help!
Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 01:08 PM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
He should have known all this lying was not going to work. I can't wait for Rose to find out.
Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Hmmmm, Roslyn? That matches, right?
Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Loved it! I really. really. really. can't wait for Rose to find out though!
Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 07:09 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Did they really thing Bella could lie to everyone? Eventually the truth will get out.
Thanks for the update-Kate
ps no need for a teaser!
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Interesting chapter!
Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 03:00 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
What a wacky family.
And Rosalie's sister could be Vera - like her best friend from before her change in the original Twilight series.
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 02:54 AM · On: Such as we are made of, such we be
Lillian? Perhaps Muriel, Rossetta, Doreen, Enid, Cora, Doris. Ok...sorry, just thinking up some names that were older..
Reviewer: irishgirl23 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 12:06 PM · On: I'll not budge an inch
I may be hooked on your story now. I'm also following it on Fanfiction because I haven't been on Twilighted in about a year until now. The plot is very interesting. Is Rosalie aware that her parents live nearby? Or is that just a coincidence? Your beta might need to go back and proof some chapters, as there are several errors I came across, which she seemed to miss. Lastly, as disjointed as my thoughts are in this review, I hope that Bella is willing to take things seriously with Edward, but it seems she's not wanting what he wants yet. Maybe in time? Will Bella reconcile with her grandparents? I wouldn't mind if they came to an agreement of sorts versus her casting them out of her life forever.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 03:27 PM · On: I'll not budge an inch
I got my teaser and all I can say is I want more!!! OMG this chap was amazing but so short sniff your an evil thing! Post again soon can't wait!!
Author's Response: You'll get more, my beta is out of commision for the week, but I have had time to write 3,000 words, chapters are usually around 1,000. I should be able to post on Sunday or Monday, lots of things happening. Keep me posted as what you think, I appreciate it...
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 07:48 AM · On: I'll not budge an inch
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 09:26 PM · On: I'll not budge an inch
Love the quirkyness of this story the playful banter is delightful.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, teaser is on it's way...
Reviewer: DianaMiracle (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 07:49 PM · On: I'll not budge an inch
HaHa, I hope Rosalie takes it well. And at least it didn't sound like rape this time....LOL
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 05:23 PM · On: I'll not budge an inch
Ohhhh my, well she'll get a taste of Rosalie - I imagine her reaction will be as cool and angry as it usually is! Anxious to meet Emmett and Jasper, though. Thanks for the new chapter!
Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 08:53 AM · On: I'll not budge an inch
Ohh This is going to be too good, Rosalie is going to flip. I can't wait!!
Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 08:19 AM · On: I'll not budge an inch
At least she knows they can hear her before she breaks out Jim!! Curious to see how family bought will go!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 06:41 AM · On: I'll not budge an inch
I think that if Edward gave it to her good and hard- not too hard though, Bella might A) calm down and B) figure out that she wants to tap that forever :!
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