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Reviews For The Vial
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 03:05 AM · On: Square One

Squeee so exciting!!!!   Can't wait for more very excited!!!  Shes making major changes and it will be so hard but I know thinsg will happen that cause set backs post again sooN!!!

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

very interesting!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2012 09:34 PM · On: Square One

So the mother is still alive?  Can't wait to see wht's up

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2012 09:17 PM · On: Square One

I second her desire to start from square one.  I really like Edward in this chapter.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 01:57 PM · On: Stories I Tell

Interesting back story about Bella and Jasper.  Happy to see Bella is jumping on the "vegetarian" train.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 01:10 AM · On: Stories I Tell

Love the differences in their creations.... and Bella's anger is awesome in its fury!

Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 02:32 AM · On: Swingset Chain


Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Rabbit Heart

Oh yes, this is gunna be good. :)

Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh ho ho! Cryptic! I like!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 11:28 PM · On: Swingset Chain

You are so evil!!!  Now she knows Jasper too!!!  I can't wait for more post again soon!!!  I wonder how her and Jasper are aquainted and I love the change in tale for Edward for backstory great work never saw that coming!

Reviewer: blueschicka (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 02:05 AM · On: Swingset Chain

I'm glad you are fond of reviews. Does your fondness of reviews a reflect the speed of updating perchance?

Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 05:06 PM · On: Swingset Chain

Wait! No, you can stop there you have to write more! Come back here!

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Swingset Chain

Looking forward to finding out...

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Swingset Chain

Unique conversion story for Edward.  I liked it. 

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Roslyn

No, not poor Edward. COWARDLY Edward.

Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Roslyn

I'm glad you know. Please write your great story another chapter soon! So, i may be able to see what happens to poor Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: ichiko (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Roslyn

wow. you're quite good! i'm looking forward to more from you! :)

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1


Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Roslyn

Oh my God, such a good story.  Please continue!

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 03:22 PM · On: Roslyn

Very good! I liked the confrontation. No more running. :)

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 12:47 PM · On: Roslyn

Can't say I have much sympathy for Edward here, he deserves all the punches Bella can throw.  I can feel her frustration at her inability to hurt him, how utterly bewildered she must be.  The situation is certainly not a good one.  She's been harboring her anger and hatred for so long, it will be difficult to let go of that...

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: dinothedinosaur (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 08:54 PM · On: Roslyn

Is Rosalie a witch in this story? I hope theyre bffs so they can both kick his butt.

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 05:31 PM · On: Roslyn

Such a sad story.  She can't live with him or without far.  Looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: bellasumu (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Roslyn

Amazing had me practically drooling with fanhappiness! ^_^ It was amazing seriously the way you made it dramatic yet totally possible. Update soon!

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 09:55 AM · On: Roslyn


Your style is very effective.  I can feel their pain and urgency.  Very well done.

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