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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 12
Okay, I knew this was coming but it's so sad you've made me cry. They've all suffered their own loss but it's Art I feel for most. He has to grow up now with just his memories of his mum. At least his Nana and Papa will be able to tell him stories of her keeping her memory and love for him alive.
I'm so glad that Art got to speak to his mum and have a hug and cuddle with her before she died and I loved how Rob told Art that his mum had given him so many hugs and kisses for Art that he wouldn't run out.
Really a very powerful chapter.
Jane x
Reviewer: paula2838bu (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2012 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 12
Powerful chapter! Very well written....You showed so much respect for all the characters..not an easy task when a little boy,his newly found father, and the death of his mother are occuring. I love the way father and son are bonding under the saddest conditions. Great story
Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2012 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 12
Heart breaking. Should have come with a tissue warning. But I do so love your story telling.
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
heartbreaking....beautiful. xxx
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hello! Tissue warning, please!
This story is so unique in the fandom that it's like a little oasis.
Thanks,
Reviewer: Aurora Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
you are killing me with this but is so good i cant wait for more, you really got talent so keep going, this is original sad sometimes but wonderful
God bless you
Reviewer: 3dawns (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
Heartbreakingly beautiful. Love your story.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh no, this is so sad, please update soon. I'm so glad that Dallas and Art got to speak with each other. Please, please update soon.
Jane x
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 11
Awwwww... please don't take too long updating.... we need to know....
Thanks.
Catherine
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 11
heart breaking, beautifully heartbreaking xx
Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
Should have come with a tissue warning.
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
Aww, poor Art he's so worried about his Mum. I hope that the paternity test doesn't become public, it's the last thing they all need and people will blow it up into something it's not. Rob has a lot to think about. Once he has Art on a permanent basis both their lives are going to change radically. I'm sure both families will rally around to help.
Jane x
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 10
Wow. What a situation to be in.
Love the story... looking forward to lots more.
Catherine
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 3
Starting out well. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Catherine
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
Awwwwww, great update.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awwww, I hope that Dallas recovers from this bout of pneumonia. It's sad that this is something that's giving Rob and Art more time together to bond, he's such a sweet little boy.
I'm glad to see you back flower, I've missed this story.
Jane x
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 9
loved ths, bittersweet. xx
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh boy, it's certainly different going out on a proper date without your child, I can vouch for that one. You have this history and child connecting you but your lives have moved on without each other and that can be a bit awkward as neither of you are the people you used to be.....obviously. I hope it goes well for them.
I hope they do go to London in the summer and then Robs parents can meet their grandson and his sisters can get to know their nephew. Rob was so pleased with his present, homemade is the best.
Jane x
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
thats so right a homemade card your child makes is 10 times nicer that any other gift
Reviewer: kimjhill (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
so glad to see the update !! i really like the story- hope they all get to travel to london for summer break :)
Reviewer: kimjhill (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
well what a cute little story !!! i am glad i ran across it today....do you have an update schedule????? cant wait to see what happens to dallas since she is sick :( hea, maybe?
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm so glad that they've told Art the truth, he completely took it in his stride like most children his age would. I loved s question about calling Rob Dad, it'll happen when Art's comfortable with it and probably when Rob least expects it.
Jane x
Reviewer: pearlgem (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 7
I really am liking this. There isn't so much detail that its overwhelming.
Reviewer: pearlgem (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
I'm into this...at first I was a bit hesitant but I'm liking the flow.
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