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Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Two Propositions

Wow! This was really good. I'm so disappointed you have dropped this story.

Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Two Propositions

SHE RAN!!!??!?!?

 

Did Edward see this happen??

 

WHAT'S NEXT???

Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Grim Reality

OMG!! I'm on team Jacob, but Edward's POV was great!  Jacob cracks me up and I can't wait ot see what happens next!

Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Pomp and Circumstance

Operation Keep Upright!  HA!  I love that!

Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 Facing the Future

great start!  i can't wait to see where it goes!

Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Grim Reality

I think you did a fabulous job writing EPOV! He's morose, skulky, AND OBSSESSED LOL! Keep it up! ;-)

Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 Facing the Future

Regardless of where this story is going, you can't go wrong with these Jacob/Bella scenes (my opinion, anyway)! ;-) I guess you can tell what side I'm on...LOL! Anyway, I love your style and the way you seem to have caught the characters' essences. I'm anxious for for!

Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Two Propositions

OMG! That was so sweet with Sam. I hope she comes back to Jake (sorry Edward fans).

Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Two Propositions

Please say NO Bella! I want an update, please.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Two Propositions

I am freaking out!!!  Edward, get your ass back in there!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! that made me smile, thanks!

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Two Propositions

I love it! 

I can see Jacob proposing (even at what, 17?) and I can see him using those exact words.  I'm glad your Bella is unsure (okay, freaked out, even better).

 

Looking forward to more.

 

 

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Grim Reality

You do NOT stink at EPOV- infact this was good!  I love hearing Jacob's thoughts through Edward.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Two Propositions

OMG. That's all I can say at this point.

Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Two Propositions

Verry interesting plot so far.  I'm anxious for me. Please update soon!

Reviewer: cwal (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Two Propositions

Can't wait to see where this goes!!  I was scared that Bella would automatically accept Jacob's proposal but thank God she freaked out!  Gives more chances for Edward to come back! LOL

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Two Propositions

Great story.  I'm kind of hoping she works it out with Jacob, he's so darn sweet in your story!

Reviewer: stephanie1068 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Two Propositions

I think you're off to a good start.  I'd like to see where you go with this next.  Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Two Propositions

Excellent fiction. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Two Propositions

Awwww...poor Jake...

Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Grim Reality

Oh wow. I think your Edward is pretty good and I'm really excited for this to continue!

Reviewer: Lead69 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Grim Reality

Great start, I look forward to reading more.  You are staying true to character so it will be interesting to see where you lead us. 

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Grim Reality

W.O.W.  I am floored!  This was intense!  Poor Edward.  I hope he steps out of the shadows in time!  Great, great, chapter! 

Reviewer: eclipsee5 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 Facing the Future

wow!! that was so good. pleasee keep updatingg. =]

Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Grim Reality

Awww poor Edward shouldn't have had to find out that way. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)

Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Grim Reality

i thought it was pretty good.  i like how he had to go through jacob and that's how he found out what's going on.

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