Reviewer: ram2001 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
ok so I can't wait til the next chapter Please let me know when it is up
Reviewer: christina1199 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Encounter
Eeeeeek, cant wait to read next chapter.
PLEASEEEEE update soon
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter
Reviewer: chvz (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
Please update soon. I like your story.
Reviewer: juicybitkathy (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
nooooooooo!
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
holy shit is it James???
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Too Hot to Handle
Every room! Wow, this Edward has my attention!
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
ahhh who is it? and who was textin?
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
I forgot to mention something in my post earlier :)
The name on that inscription of the ring, Belicia, is a Hebrew variation for Isabel. Hmmm...
very interesting....
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
hmmm who could it be at her door???
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
That was pretty hot of them to have sex on creepy's desk! I'm still trying to figure out Edward & Carlisles relationship!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
So now I'm questioning 'The Gangs' role in all of this. Rosalie and Alice acted very peculiar with Bella. And Edward acted strangely around Emmett and Jasper.
That whole has he bitten you speal from Carlisle was hilarious. Creepy, but hilarious. I'm starting to actually fear for Bella here. If Edward's is a vampire, are his intentions good toward Bella? Is it like canon and he is her mate? Because he seems so hateful toward her sometimes. And the whole ring business, like you implied in your reply.
Please, just don't tell me Bella is going to be dinner or something. LOL
Edward looks terrified when Bella played her little mind game with him. I was wondering if he was the one who stole the paper out of her apartment, but he seemed genuinely surprised that she'd mentally tell him she knew he could read her mind. If it was him who took the paper, wouldn't he have already known about her questions?
I'm so confused. I need a valium. LOL
Thanks for the update and I look forward for more.
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Matters of Concern
omg what happens next
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
Whoa! Talk about your Doctor jekyll and mister hyde! What was up with Edward? Maybe Carlisle was watching again?? I hope. I loved this chapter and can't wait to find out what Carlisle says!!
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
y can he read her mind? and how hasnt she noticed yet? i dunno if i like this. does bella has a special talent like edward that she doesnt know? how are they destined ot be together? how does creepy know that bella is edwards type? and why did he warm her of him? i need answers...ahhhh lol ;)
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
interesting,,,, he apparently can read her mind, and whats up with the ring? this story ROCKS
Author's Response: Many thanks for your review. The ring...hmmm. It does have some significance, keep reading to see what.
lizzy xx
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
more dark hotness.... :)
Author's Response: More dark hotness.... yeahhhh, and more to come!
Cheers for your review
lizzy xx
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
i think i am more confused than bella. Edward is flip flopping too much
Author's Response: A flip flopping Edward - the mind boggles...
Isn't that what he was like in Twilight - Wanting to be Bella's friend, but telling her to keep away.,. He's hot then he's cold, he's yes then he's no, he's in then he's out, he's up then he's down...
haha... that's Addicted Edward!
Big hugs
lizzy xx
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
What the hell was that ending???? I can't wait for the explanation chapter!!!
Author's Response: Ohhhh... the explanation may be a bit away. The mystery will deepen before it unravels.
Cheers for the review,
lizzy xx
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
A few things:
It's becoming clearer and clearer Edward can read Bella's mind. And she's totally clueless. And there were ALOT of clues.
I'm glad Edward did want to be with her, and their rendevous on Creepy's desk was totally hot. But why the hatred between Edward and Carlisle? Are they both Vamps? His stealth, his cold skin, his beauty, his mind reading...Edward is not what he seems. Talk about being addicted; I'M the one addicted here. I cannot wait to unravel this puzzle.
And WTF was that at the end about the ring? Who's ring is that, and why is he angry at Bella? Doesn't he know she IS keeping it safe for him?
Update soon. Before I die. LOL
Author's Response: Woah... so many questions... where to start?
Glad you've picked up on Edward reading Bella's mind... it's been there since the beginning, he's quite funny at times.
Edward and Carlisle will be explained in a future chapter - I'm planning on an EPOV soon. Both vamps...hmmm, maybe the next chapter will answer that question for you.
And the ring...very important to Edward. He was worried more than anything...
Hope you continue to enjoy the story
lizzy xx
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Family Connections
Hmmm...something is not right with Carlisle and Edward. I'm seriously questioning whether they are human. And Edward, dangerous? Yeah, you could say that.
:)
Reviewer: 504angel (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
is it me or can edward read bella's mind .......and when will bella realize that edward can read her mind
Author's Response: Reading minds, good or bad?
Glad you picked up on it - the clues have been there since chapter 1. And Edward does have quite the sense of humour at times...
Cheers for your review
lizzy xx
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
bi-polar party of one
Author's Response: Haha... love it!
But why leave it as a party for one? I for sure, would love to join Edward in whatever party he was having!
Cheers
lizzy xx
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Encounter
can edward read here mind? and why isnt she picking up on it?. great story although he is kind of psycho he is very hot he is like that crazy ex almost everyone had great sex total bad boy. I love your writing great chapter cant wait for more
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