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Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Feral Control
Love this chapter, they are perfect together. I'm intreaged about the voices and Bella's changes. I hope they will come across someone that will enlighten them about what is happening. Is Edward stronger now that he is feeding from Bella?
Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Saving Creepy
Bella is starting to resemble a 7elleven, always open for James. It's starting to be annoying and repetitive. A real pity that you have decided to give James so much protagonism when you have created an original and interesting story. I wished you had focused more on the legends behind each creature and the relationship between Bella and Edward. Well, At least Carlisle knows the truth
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Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Glamoured
Absolutely hated this chapter but I guess that's your iintention please let me know if James can do whatever he wants in your fic again and again and again. If that's the case this is not for me
Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Drained
Awesome chapter! Took her long enough to find out
Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 - The Aswangs
Interesting turn of events. I didn't see that coming and now I'm more confused than ever. So Alice and Rose do care about Bella? This is getting better and better
Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Complications
A few questions were answered but so many more still a mystery. So, Edward made a terrible mistake with a horrific end, is there a possibility that she may have survive?
i wish Edward would have lingered a bit more on the 'so called friends' I've been thinking the same about Alice and Rose
its too bad that James is still alive, and it's a shame that Edward is alone seeing as he is weaker due to being a vegetarian. Wonder how a face to face will turn up next time.
Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward's Bed
Loving this mysterious Edward, although I don't know if keeping Bella in the dark is a good idea. Loving that this Edward is not canon, and that Bella might be having some powers (after all, the fact that she is healed is quite a miracle) I wonder if its because of her relationship with Edward. Is James dead?
Looking forward to EPoV, lets see what misteries he unravels
Reviewer: beatriz1976 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Cats and Kittens
Oh no! I hate James with passion. I'm really enjoying this unique fic and hope it does not change and becomes and über angsty fic. Now I'm terrified
PS: love the suspense so far
Reviewer: jaqnjill (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Epilogue
I loved this story! Your imagination and ability to take the mythical to a greater level was superb! I wish you could change the names and get this published, I would also really love to see it on screen. I am thrilled that you took the Edward/Bella story and created your own world that went far beyond the characters that SM originally created. What a great journey to take with all of those characters. Thanks for your story and your dedication to making it so well written! Bravo!
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Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
That was awesome.
Reviewer: SunnyincoloradoShan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2012 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Epilogue
What a fantastic story! Such a wonderful, different spin on the Bella/Edward story. I love the different character spins and all the new mythology. Oh!, and can I say how hot, hot, hot this Edward was! Wow!, steamy yummy ness! Once I started the story I couldn't stop reading, which I've always thought is a great mark of a well written, thought out story. I plan on retreading this story again in a couple of months.
Reviewer: commerou (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Encounter
Love this story! Fantastic fantasy world you have created. Good job!
Thank you!
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 12 - The Aswangs
OK?! Its different but I like alittle different as long as its still E/B story! You have a good imagination; something i guess works well for frictional stories. Good writing and I never start reading something that is not finished.
Reviewer: dbg (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Epilogue
Extremely well written. Unique situations and new types of beings. Great villain in James. Some standard characters were very OOC and there were a lot of new characters who are awesome.
Great job, a recommended read.
Reviewer: bella31 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2011 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Epilogue
great story, very interesting and your writing is very good
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Voices
That was quite a chapter!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Alone
How about some outtakes of Bella and Edwards hotel stay? ;)
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Captive
I'm so happy Edward and Bella get some time toghther!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Finding Esme
Esme sounds very dangerous!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Awakening
Very cool!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Vamarests
That's really different!
Reviewer: stella sin (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Epilogue
Very nice story. I like the new beings and the way they were changed. It was a long read and I felt could have been edited down a bit. I think this would make a great film though, maybe a mini series for the sci-fi channel.
Sin~
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Feral Control
That was a really good and fun chapter! ;)
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Temptations
Very exciting!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Saving Creepy
Glad Edward and Carlise could be civil to each other. :)
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