So so good!! Update soon

My better half is the same way with styrofoam. When we moved, I had to do all the packing and unpacking of delicate stuff because if he touched or heard styrofoam squeaking, he'd start to heave.

Love this story too!

she should not have had sex with him..

Well, it's kinda good.  He wants to face his demons, right?

Great so far, you r a very good writer and really know how to tell a story.

OMG!!!! YOU LOVE DISNEY TOO??? I LOVE IT ... AND WISHES IS MY FAVOURITE FIREWORKS SHOW. MY FAMILY IS GOING TO DISNEY WORLD IN A WEEK! IM SO EXCITED. AND I HAVE TO SAY THE ONLY THING THAT COULD MAKE DISNEY EVEN MORE AMAZING IS IF WHAT JUST HAPPENED IN YOUR STORY HAPPENED TO ME. THAT IS A DREAM SENARIO FOR ME. TO BE KISSED DURING THAT SHOW. JUST READING THE WORDS MADE ME CRY. I CAN JUST IMAGINE THE CASTLE AND THE FIREWORKS. IT GIVES ME SHIVERS !!!

AND I HAVE TO AGREE THAT WALT WAS ONE HELL OF A GENIUS! MY DAD AND I ARE DISNEY FINATICS. MY DAD READS EVERYTHING DISEY! WE CANT GET ENOUGH! I CANT HELP BUT CRY DURING WISHES TOO! I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL THAT I JUST TEAR UP AND GET ALL CHOKED UP. 

LOVED IT :) 

Holy Shit!!!!  This is good!  One would almost say that he exhibits a little bit of Dom tendoncies!!!  Not that there is anything wrong with that at all.... he is very domineering here!  Yummy as the lady said to RPattz @ Comic Con this year in regards to his BACK view during the honeymoon scenes of BD I  previews... This Edward is Yummmmiiiieeee!!!

Smut is great, smut is fun, and that was one hot lemon!

holy fucking shit!!! i wanted to wait til i was done reading for the night to review but shit!! lol.  this chapter was sooo amazing. the story itself is good but this chapter....wow....wow.  its not often that im speechless so you should definitely take it as a compliment :D

Thanks for the update, and we are still reading!

i so love yhis story please don't leave me hanging without it being completed

When Edward finally let loose all those horrid events locked inside his mind of what happened to him as a child to reveal to Bella. to express why he couldn't be loved by her or anyone.  Actually he killed his mother to save his sister from his mother.  He took her actions toward him because he believed based on what she had told him it was his fault his father was dead. The idea that when Alice stood up for Edward to their mother and she turned her wrath onto Alice Edward couldn't deal with any harm coming to Alice at his expense or by his mother's hand.  He stopped her.  Telling Bella was to turn her against him.  He succeeded in shocking her.  But after hearing the entire story what his mother did was horrible and she was mentally sick.  The poor boy was reaching out to his aunt and uncle only he forgot to put a stamp on his letter for help.  things might never have gotten as serious had the letter reached Esme and Carlisle before her wrath reached the final point. Alice and Bella looking all day for Edward all his secret and normal hangouts.  The message facing the past.  Going back to where it all happened.  Facing the darkness head on -- reliving it at the scene a possibility.  Bella and Alice flying to Chicago to see if Edward went back to the old Masen house to face the cabinets where he hid.  Where his mother beat him.  Will be an interesting chapter.  Hoping both Alice and Bella will be able to bring him back from the brink of the edge.