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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Someday

I'm so glad that Marissa is feeling better. Rob was so sweet when they were discussing having kids 'someday'. It is a bit of a dilema when to start a family but I think you eventually know when the time is right. So it's back to reality with a dirty great big bump, I love how Marissa sent her man off to work with a packed lunch, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Someday

all caught up - so yummy! xo

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Someday

Ahhh home sweet home....

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Solice

Geez, I'd love to wake up to Rob that way and never stop, lol, impossible I know but a girl can dream. It's so good to have you back again, I'm looking forward to more.

Jane x

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Solice

Yeah, I want wake him!!!!!!

And he can wake me too!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Glad to see you back. Excellent story. Great chapter. Loved the ending texts!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Well thank God for that, I really couldn't see how they could come back with a different verdict. I think it will help Marissa to move forward a lot more once Samantha is finally sentenced.

Jane x

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Yippie, now we need a baby!

Reviewer: suzuki (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

lol I'd actually almost be interested in seeing how it's possible for the jury to find her not guilty XD great job and plz update soon ^^

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Another amazing chapter, I miss this story soooo much.

Xxxxx

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Oh, if you had found her not guilty, you'd better have locked her crazy ass up in the booby hatch for a loooong time!!

Reviewer: Amelia Bedelia (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 36 - The Healing Begins

Ahhh! That conversation with Josh just about killed me... First of all, seeing how bad he feels, and then Rob's panic when he lost track of Marissa and THEN ripped Josh a new one... that guy's having a rough day...

I also feel bad for Melanie... She feels so guilty about what happened with Sam, but I gotta believe she's SO much more hurt that she had been with Sam for three years and had NO IDEA who she really was! I'm sure she feels like the entire relationship was a sham! Poor girl!

I really enjoy this story - update soon?

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2012 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meet Up

So happy she is okay. I am curious as to what sent Sam off...I am thinking their engagement/marriage. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2012 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 36 - The Healing Begins

I can understand Rob's reaction to Josh and I'm glad that Marissa made him promise not to sack him. Rob might not really agree with her but in time I think he'll see it's the right decision. Because of what's happened Josh will be even more vigilent and won't take any chances at all where Marissa's concerned whereas, a new person might become more complacent sooner as the 'threat' has been caught and Marissa's safe. I think Josh has learned a harsh lesson. Make sense? It does to me, lol.

Marissa and Rob just get hotter and hotter, I need a cold shower, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 36 - The Healing Begins

Poor Melanie, it wasn't her fault. About Joshua I think I wold have the same reaction as Rob.

Can I give you an evil idea? You can put KS dating Rupert here, hahaha. Sorry.

Amazing chapter btw, so bloody HOT.

Xx

Reviewer: suzuki (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 36 - The Healing Begins

i understand Rob's reaction to Josh but sometimes there are just some things that you can't predict... yea it's their job as security to cover all the bases but hindsight's always 20-20 you know? keep him and let him make up for his mistakes... poor Melanie though... I think she should talk to Sam about this... figure out what set her off and why... or maybe Rob can get Kristen to do it... lol great job and plz update soon ^^

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Awakening

I'm so glad you updated, I thought another story was being abandoned, I'm glad you're back.

I'm so happy that Marissa's going to be okay, well physically at least. They're both going to have their own issues to deal with, but with each others love and support they'll get there.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Jane x

Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Awakening

Good to know she'll be ok. I wonder what Sam will say to the police, but that woman is nuts! Rob most be going crazy with her in the same hospital. Good chapter :-)

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Awakening

OMG poor couple, but at least they are together.

Xx

Reviewer: suzuki (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Awakening

and she's awake! oh man this is going to be a rough trip... sooner or later she's going to be self conscious of those scars >.> poor Marissa >.> great job and plz update soon ^^

Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Awakening

OMG I thought you'd never update!

Author's Response:
Hi Ruth,

I wouldn't abandon y'all. Sometimes it just takes a while for a beta to review the chapters and post them. I also have this story posted on FanFiction.net

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6710886/1/Taking_Flight

Reviewer: handa (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Top Floor

Could make visiting office blocks tricky - lifts will never be the same again. That was seriously hot!!

Reviewer: handa (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Your Girlfriend Is Here, Right?

Stalker is too scary - you've got that very well. I like the chat show section although I'm not familiar with the shows - I've seen the interviews on you tube.

I think the balance in this chapter was good - and things are moving along "quite nicely actually"!!

Keep up the good work

Reviewer: handa (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Wanna Go See a Movie?

REspect - beautifully handled all the way through

Reviewer: handa (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Quiet on the Set

Smart lady - Marissa is so right - although I don't think Rob realised it might have come back to haunt them - tough call though....

Keep it up you have the pich just bang on.....

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