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Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Easy Complications

Keep going please. That was awesome!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: chrisbell (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 05:11 AM · On: Easy Complications

Keep going - definately keep going. I'm really enjoying it so far.  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: yodi (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Easy Complications

definetly keep going :-)

Reviewer: hellodoll (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 04:53 AM · On: Easy Complications

hi,

I really like this, keep going!

Reviewer: Filippanna (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 04:16 AM · On: Easy Complications

keep going ! Don´t you dare stop ! Please ?

This is a great story, very well written - great Beta :-) and I can really see it happening. But what about Emmett and Rose ?



Author's Response:

Emmett and Rose will be around momentarily. Don't worry, all will be explained and they, Rose especially, become very important to the story. I'm so glad you can really see it happening, though! That's exactly what I wanted.

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 03:10 AM · On: Easy Complications

Oh - this is SO good - simply can't wait for the next chapter - wonderful to read about nessie - so sad but not everything can be roses - thanks for the ride!



Author's Response:

Nope, not everything can be roses. Happily ever after should take some work, shouldn't it? I'm so glad you're enjoying the ride!

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 01:58 AM · On: Easy Complications

Weeehaa! Trying to decide if the Cullens suspected Nessie might do that, or if they were totally taken by surprise...that being said, Ang is strong...she'll take it in stride...



Author's Response:

Hmm...I hadn't even thought about that angle to be honest! But it's a good one. Glad you still like it!

Reviewer: SarahHP (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Legendary Gossip

I love that someone is branching Jasper relationships out!  I think you're doing a great job of giving Angela, a character who in canon seems fairly identical to Bella, her own voice while keeping her basic canon traits intact.  So far I'm thoroughly enjoying this tale!  I can't wait for Jasper and Angela to meet!  Of course that is bypassed by excitement for them to begin forming a truthful relationship!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you, Sarah! I'm so happy that you think I've given Angela her own voice and kept her traits intact. That's exactly what I was trying to do. I hope you like the way I bring them together. Be sure to let me know!

Reviewer: marti1013 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Legendary Gossip

Man, I hate waiting for updates, lol!  This one is definitely worth keeping an eye out on and I quickly clicked the link when I saw it had updated today!

 

Can't wait for more and I love the way the story is progressing.  Very unusual pairing too, so that helps.  and Nessie saying how Uncle Emmett would love the song that never ends, lol! hahahaha. 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm submitting the next chapter right now, so you shouldn't have to wait too terribly long. Though I am so excited that you hate waiting for updates! lol!

I'm glad you like the progression & especially the pairing, I thought that might make it a bit more interesting. But then I worried people wouldn't like it. Oh well. I'm glad you do because I'm having major fun writing it!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:47 PM · On: Legendary Gossip

well i hope she starts to notice! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:47 PM · On: Legendary Gossip

well i hope she starts to notice! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Will do! Thanks!

Reviewer: taloulabigtree (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:42 PM · On: Legendary Gossip

please continue, this is really interesting! =]



Author's Response:

I will! I have many, many more chapters written. Hope you like them!

Reviewer: new2twilight23 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 02:47 PM · On: Legendary Gossip

I liked it. In away it prepares Angela for the truths. I can't wait to see what is next. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I couldn't think of a better way for her to start discovering the truth!

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Legendary Gossip

keep it coming!Ang is a smart girl....i wonder if she'll put the pieces together sooner or later?



Author's Response:

She will...sooner. I've been trying not to rush things too overly much, so I'm glad you still thinks going well!

Reviewer: Filippanna (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Unasked for Answers

I do like this story a lot, but I suck at making banners. Sorry !

Keep up the good work, I´m so curious where it´s going :-)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're curious! And don't worry about the banner, JennyCullen made me a lovely one!

Reviewer: janineb (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:27 AM · On: Unasked for Answers

I would never have imagined these two characters together - but you have me looking forward to reading more!

Great start!

 



Author's Response:

Yay! That's exaclty what I was hoping for!

Reviewer: new2twilight23 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Unasked for Answers

Love



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: jilltalley (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 04:14 PM · On: Unasked for Answers

I really enjoyed this story so far awesome job

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Aurora Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Unasked for Answers

even if i dont read stories without Edward or Bella im glad i gave this one a chance cause i love to read more, you have a way with words and i feel every single one of them

keep the good work

take care

God bless



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for your super sweet review! I'm so glad that you like my story so much!

Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Unasked for Answers

You have me hooked. I just adore Jasper. Great job. Update soon!!!!

Author's Response:

I'll update ASAP! Promise! And I'm so excited that you're hooked & adore Jasper, just like me!

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 12:16 PM · On: Unasked for Answers

I'm imagining that Jacob was also lost in whatever happened...but curious to the rest...will keep watching...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're going to keep watching and I will be explaining about Jacob, so no worries there. Let me know if you want more details or are confused at any point! Thanks!

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Familiar Faces, Strange Places

Interesting premise...

Reviewer: twizzlers (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Unasked for Answers

Very good!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twizzlers (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 12:04 PM · On: Familiar Faces, Strange Places

Very fresh and orignl! great Job hun!

Reviewer: ImCurious (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Unasked for Answers

Well, I love it so far - Angela always seemed such a gentle soul and it's definitely coming out in your writing. Can't wait for more!

Aaaand, I'm a sucker for some Jasper, I won't lie :) Looking forward to see where this goes!



Author's Response:

That's why I put Angela with Jasper. Her gentle soul is just what his tortured soul needs, especially without Alice. And I'm 110% Team Jasper so he always features in what I write. Let me know if you like where it goes!

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