Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2013 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wait, where's the next button?? That's it...? I'm loving this story, it's so different from every other's I've read/am reading. I'm curious to find out what's happening with Esme though, seems kind of fishy to me. Hope everything's okay there... and Rosalie, I hope she decides to keep her baby. Who knows, they could be great mothers together, help each other out. Seems as though Rosalie knows what she's talking about when taking care of kids and what's required; at least food wise. :)
I'm also wondering when our favorite guy(s) are coming into the picture? Edward, and Emmett as well for Rosalie. And where's Carlisle, why is Esme alone? And Jasper and Alice!
Bella is amazing, and I feel so bad for Grace to have to go through all of this. I was shocked by Bella's background... what happened to her between birth and 9 years old? And where's Renee and what happened there (or at least her birht mother considering Charlie is her adopted father)? Obviously she was loved, or something, to be left everything from her mother's side of the family, regardless her own feelings toward her mother.
I did read your AN stating that chapters have a good chance to take a long time, but you are planning on continuing this story. I still hope that's the case (it is April 2013, almost May, now). Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
oh no! what does she have?????
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 10
OMG OMG OMG just when you think all is getting better you drop this bomb and I wonder if Esme is Ms Graces Grandmother... Did Edward just figure out that Graces mom is dead or that Grace is missing presumably dead too... OMG OMG post again soon!!!
Reviewer: juicybitkathy (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 10
its been so long since and update! I love this story and the chapter was great! Continue the amazing work!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 10
Great chapter!
I hope she'll be okay!
I'm looking forward to your next update :)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 10
looking forward to whaqt happens next
Reviewer: Wolfskind (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 10
I really love this story.
The poor little girl...,Esme, Rosalie and Bella I want to read more so pleeeaaase write more.
Reviewer: Goddessa39 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 9
Yet another I ran into, loved, an wish there was more to it. Love the Rose-Bella friendship that is developing.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 9
looking forward to more
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 9
Woot woot Bella got Grace!!! Can't wait for more love love love! I hope Rose keeps teh baby sniffle I know its not teh best circumstance but she would make an amazing motehr ifs shes the Rosie I think you will play her out to be! Post again soon
Yay for Bella doing a good job raising a kid id hard work and when we find Edward hopefully hes an amazing dad! Can't wait cant wait!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 9
Yay !!! She gets to keep her! she's so adorably nervous
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2012 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 9
This is a really great story. I'm looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Tjputvin (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2012 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 9
*fist pump* yes she got custody!!! I can't wait for more. I'm so loving all the updates coming more frequently. I'm dying for the E/B Meet up..
Reviewer: drJamJam (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2012 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 9
love Bella and Rose's budding relationship.one question, is Rose going to move in with Bella and Grace when they get a bigger apartment?
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
I really am enjoying this story.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 8
Aww her and Rose are gonna be besties :-)
Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
My heart is absolutely breaking for little Grace and the horror she's experienced. It almost sounds like they through her out of a moving vehicle. I love Bella's character in this. Even if she is abrupt and grumpy, I think I would be too after living her life. She seems to be an amazing person.
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
A strong friendship building going on?
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love love love Bella and Rose relationship!!! Can't wait for more I hope Bella decides to get a bigger place and let Rose move in! A nice 4 bedroom so Grace can have a yard Bella can help Rose and the baby and they can help each other raise these two kids! Can't wait for more
Reviewer: Tjputvin (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow quick update, thank you so much. I'm so loving this story & Can't wait for more.
I hope Bella gets her approval for Grace to come live with her.
Goodness poor poor Rose. Not my favorite character (in Twilight) at all but you've made her so different here. I'm so feeling for her.
Reviewer: KrisBowes (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 8
<3 this story i cant wait to find out what happens!! please update soon!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 8
I am so ready to find out what happened to Grace! That poor, sweet girl deserves justice to be served!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 8
looking forward ot more
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 7
I feel bad for Grace but am happy Bella cares so much. Esme Hum!!!
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws. Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|