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Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG. Not fair now you have to hurry and update. Just found this story and am hooked.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading there's a teaser up on the blog to hold you over.
http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: cofey (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
i get that bella loves edward but honestly how can she trust him ... he has proven time and again that he doesnt feel strongly enuf about bella to not only believe her, but to stand by her and make her his priority ... how wld he feel if it was james all over bella and bella did nothing to push him away - she wldnt do that to edward coz she loves edward but edward never puts himself in bella's position and how he'd feel if she did to him what he does to her ...
no matter how he excuses his actions esp not pushing tanya away when she kissed him ... why didnt edward go after bella straight away .... why did it take him so long to check up on her ... if he really cared about anyone but himself he wldnt keep hurting her .. he doesnt deserve her
Author's Response: She can't trust him - not yet at least. And don't give up on Edward yet. Perhaps this is the thing that will finally get through to him.
Teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/ thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG what's wrong with Bella? It's a good thing that Carlisle is there.
And what's up with Rene already? That woman needs to get a clue that her daughter wants to keep the babies. I know that in her perspective that she is looking at what is best for her own daughter. I will agree with Renee in that for some adoption is the answer but for Bella it would be the wrong answer. I am hoping that Renee will come to respect Bella's wishes and accept the wonderful gift that she is about to recieve.
Edward is sure taking a beating. Tanya was an unwanted invasion at this gathering. I actually felt bad for Edward. Go figure when I was ready to serve his balls up on plate not but two maybe three chapters ago. He lacks the maturity that Bella has but I must say he is trying. Little by little he is growing up. I loved the part when he layed by her and felt the little ones move. The miracle of life is too beautiful to experience alone.
Sandra
Now to take care of Bella and keep her safe and healthy until the babies get here....
Author's Response: Oh Sandra, i love your long reviews. I love that you're passionate about these characters.
Renee - she'll come around. She just wanted to make sure that Bella thought through her options. She may not have done it the right way, but that's Renee.
Edward - don't give up hope on him yet. This scare may shock him into reality and may finally be the thing that gets through to him.
Teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/ Thanks so much for reading :)
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
Ahhhhhhh!!!!! Im gonna cry! Quick write more I need to know she is ok!!
Author's Response: Don't cry! teaser is up on the blog. read it and leave a note if you feel like it :) http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm very disappointed in Edward. Thought he would man up after the last chapter but he's still dragging his feet. He'd better hurry I'm losing hope. Speaking of hurry, please don't make us wait too long for chapter 6 - this cliff hanger will drive us crazy!!
Author's Response: I'll try not to take too long for the update. As for Edward - don't give up hope just yet. There's still so much to come.
Thanks for reading and for your reviews. There's a teaser up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG you have to update soon so we can find out what happened to bella!!!
Author's Response: HI! I'm waiting to get chaper 6 back from the betas, but the teaser is up on the blog. Go have a read and leave your thoughts! http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
I want to see Charlie instate a requirement that every time Edward wants to see Bella that he has to show he means it. Every time he comes over he has to have a picture of them together and he has to explain how he was feeling about Bella. Or better yet he start to journal his feelings of what he has done and let Bella read it. I would really love to see him account for the times that he wanted to be there for Bella but Tanya led him away.
I would also love to see someone fond all over Bella while she is pregnant, and have her eat up the attention...showing Edward what his actions has caused.
There are two problems I see 1) Edward finally broke up with Tanya only after Bella said she was keeping the babies. If she had put them up for adoption, Edward could have just pretended it wasn't real. The babies weren't his. 2) I don't know how Edward could ever effectively prove to Bella that he's loved her the whole time if he slept with Tanya.
I don't know what Edward needs to do, but pushing to be told he is forgiven is just weak. Bella doesn't even know all of what went on. How can she forgive him if she doesn't know all that he has done including telling people Bella had ruined his life.
Author's Response: HI:)
Yes, Bella's forgiven him, but it's not a quick and easy one. He still has to earn back her trust, which I think is the harder thing to do. Charlie will be difficult one to win over, if he ever does.
Chapter 5 is in the queue at the moment, so hopefully it won't take too long. There's also a teaser on my blog.
thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Caglove (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
I hope she makes him pay! I understand that she is feeling needy right now, but come on. It is not going to be that easy.
Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
Awwwwwwahh lol I'm team e alley way but f u e!
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
I still want to kick Edward in the balls. Just thought I should say that...
I have the feeling the psycho whore is not going to go away, it is Tanya (the slut) we are talking about. And Edward... Like Bella, I can't trust Edward. He believed Tanya once, he could do it again.
I think Edward should humiliate himself.. something for what he did to Bella.. he did say he would do anything. But seriously, someone has to at least give him some pain. Come on, at least a good kick in the balls. Emmett could do it :)
Charlie. I'm team Charlie here :P
Edward slept with Tanya in that month? *please say no please say no*
I also want to say THANK YOU for replying to reviews! You get a lot of reviews but you reply. I have extra love for authors that reply :)
Author's Response: I love replying to reviews. I think it helps build a relationship between author/reviewer, KWIM?
As far as Edward getting some pain... just wait for it. I promise somethign along those lines will happen.
As for Tanya... I can't say anything without giving it away.
Charlie.... sigh. I love Charlie. You should read my other fic, Finding the way back (if you haven't). He's big in that.
Teaser for next chapter is up on the blog :) Thanks a bunch!
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
wow that was a great chapter. I can not wait to see what the next chapter will bring. I am so glad that edward is going to be there for bella
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 4
well.... at least Edward's broken it off with Tanya. It's a start. still want to kick him where it hurts, though. LOL.
And Edward's excuse is just... it annoys me. When I stop to think of it I can totally picture any soon-to-be-teenage father saying that and I just want to roll my eyes. They are all idiots. hehe.
until next time!
Author's Response: It's a shitty excuse yes, but remember, he's only a teen and doesn't really know. But don't worry, i'm sure he'll come around.....soon.
Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog. Thanks so much for reading.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
How could Edward be such an ass??? Great story!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
Glad Edward kicked Tanya's slutty ass to the curb. The road to redemption for Edward is going to be a long one.
Had a blast with you during your old school music binge on twitter :)
Author's Response: A very long one. and Old School music binge was crazy fun!
thanks for reading!
Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
good she needs to have some pregnant sex! It is good for her and for the future delivery!!! Trust me I am a mom of 4!
Author's Response: Huh. Never thought of that.
thanks for reading!
Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 4
ugh i hope she doesnt forgive him right away he doesnt deserve it he is a creep lol but a well written interesting creep in in a great story
Author's Response: Don't worry, she won't. I mean, yes, she's forgiven him, but not completely.
thanks for reading!
Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
Totally loving this story:) Can't wait to see how Edward is going to be making it up..because he has a lot to make up for!!!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
Totally loving this story:) Can't wait to see how Edward is going to be making it up..because he has a lot to make up for!!!
Author's Response: Yes he does! A lot.
thanks for reading!
Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/
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