I WANNA KICK EDWARDS BUTT SO DAMN HARD...GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!

I hope to god he sees the light, and soon!

Poor Bella and her dreams/nightmares...the first one in the meadow was cute though. I want to see her tear into Edward :) I'm a vindictive bitch ;)

Author's Response:

I think it's safe to say she will be tearing him a new one. Can't say when, though.  thanks for reading :)

Good Chapter.....

My first guess would be Edward or Charlie. I hope Edward shapes up for good this time. I hope even more that we have seen the last of Tanya. Love your story.

Author's Response:

you think it's charlie? Huh. Maybe.  As for Tanya, she may be gone for good, but then again you never know with her. thanks for reading.

That is strange that there is a figure in her dreams Ireally wonder who it is.

i get that edward is sorry and worried and doesnt want to lose his childhood - doesnt feel ready to change all his plans for bella and the kids but that he dangled tanya in front of her and tortured her isnt really forgiveable to me ... i love edward/bella combo but edward needs to do some serious grovelling if he wants bella back ... he shld get off his ass and show he is trying .. first step would prob b to find a med school he can attend where he can b with bella and the kids and also make sure that bella can also study ... they need to sit down and talk to work out compromises but most importantly edward needs to face reality and decide if he loves bella and if he wants to have a life with them ... and bella will need to decide if she can trust edward

xoxo

Author's Response:

you are right. On all accounts.   the time has come for them to grow up, and it isn't going to be easy.  thanks for reading.

:)

well... this went in a direction I didn't expect! I wasn't expecting Bella to start having seizures and to have to have an emergency c-section, thats for sure!

But Edward is starting to man up, which I like. And him interacting with the twins is too cute!

That was so heart breaking to read :( Sadly, this happens everyday. Can't wait for more.

Aww the babies are here :) but poor Bella :( That was a heartbreaking chapter to read :(

Author's Response:

it was a difficult one to write.  Thank you for reading :)

I love being a twin. I got to grow up w/ someone my own age. I didn't have to worry about starting school knowing no one, until college that is. So just some randomness from an "inside sourse" so to speak...

 

Hospitals usually don't put twins next to each other in the nursery... if someone is in the hospital to kidnap a baby and they knew there were twins, they might target them b/c the mother will still have one child. (Or so said the nurses to my mother when we were born) But I'm sure some hospitals do put them next to each other, especially with increased security in later years.

 

Twins are individual people. I know that sounds really obvious, but it gets annoying to always be considered 1/2 of a whole. It's as if who I am as a person is relient upon my status as a twin. People see us as one solid unit, not 2 siblings who happen to share the same birthday. Off of that point, I HATE matching outfits. My mom, being a twin herself, never bought them for us. My relatives didn't see eye to eye with her on that, so unfortunately, their are pictures of my sister and I dressed alike.

 

The short version of all that I've typed? Please please please treat Bella and Edward's children as the separate people they are. Terms such as "the twins," well not entirely avoidable, just reenforce the idea of one identity for 2 people.

 

Also, I love this story and look forward to more. :-)

Author's Response:

Oh trust me, the twins are two seperate people - you'll see that in coming chapters. And once the names are revealed, i'll start referring to them that way.  And I am not a twin, but it irks me when I see twins dressed alike. It's cute, sometimes, but I don't think i'd do that if i had twins.

As for Bella, you'll find out next chapter.  you'll need tissues....just saying.

thanks for reading!

WOW!! ty for the update!