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Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh Edward... Please say it ain't so!?!?! :)
Author's Response: Um... next chapter tells all.
Reviewer: TeamKellan (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! hurry write the next chapter asap
Author's Response: I'm working on it! :)
Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
Is Edward telling the truth???? I don't knoe if i believe him, but look who this is coming from - james.
Glad to see the update. Thank yo!
Author's Response: Next chapter tells all. Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: tickledpinkstamper (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 8
Your Bella is a Capital B! She really is so stupid some times. I mean really why would she listen to James in the first place. She is a true idiot!
Author's Response: cuz she's young, stupid and vulnerable, that's why. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
wow! I so did not expect that! I can see though if they are not real how Bella could believe they are she's already jaded from everything. I just hope she doesn't prohibit him from seeing the kids they have nothing to do with whatever happends in their relationship!
Author's Response: Oh don't worry about that. She wouldn't keep the kids from edward... unless something stupid happened....
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
Are James and Tanya in on this together. Sounds like a set up or Edward is trying to cover his ass. It's still hard to tell where his head is at. He's still being selfish, but he's just a kid and having to cope with alot.
I really don't think that he's putting too much thought into how much Bella is having to deal with though.
I'm thinking that they're being set up.
Rox
Author's Response: James and Taya were in it together at one point, but he's smartened up and is gone, so don't worry about him.
Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow Bella really thinks highly of herself doesn't she. She is all knowing. James screwed her over before so what's stopping him from doing it again. Wow she needs to pull her head out of her ass and listen to Edward. I love this, PMS.
Reviewer: iamafan10 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 8
please could not take so long to update i love this story
Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 8
Fix it. Fix it now.
She's believing James & Tanya.
Wasn't that how this all started?
I take it back...Fix Bella's heart. Let Edward suffer.
He hasn't hurt enough for what he has done.
Reviewer: MeyaRose (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 8
Umm... has she looked at all the facts? Tanya's insane, it could still all be a fabrication.
Reviewer: courtney1022 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
Come on please lets give them a break. Just when I thought things were looking up/ This is a HEA yah????
Author's Response: yes, this will be a HEA. :)
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh, please clarify the pics are fake....if not then castrate him!! :)
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 8
Chapter 8
I don't think Edward is really trying too hard. Yeah, he's scared and confused but shit, so is Bella. I think he has a lot to prove to her before she should trust him again.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
ok this is getting a little crazy....enough is enough give them there happy ever after!
Author's Response: All my fics have HEA's... you just have to wait for it. they both have a lot of growing up to do before that can happen, though. But it does.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
Just when I think that everything is falling into place everything just falls to pieces again.
Reviewer: sheen97 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
wow...all i have to say is wow...that chapter is deep...plzz update soon...just wowwww
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
well i guess i sorta hate you
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm really liking this story I think it shows young people what the reality of having babies young is really like for the majoity of most girls. Hopefully once Bella and Edward see each other interact with the babies it will bring them together to form some kind of bond as a family. Looking forward to next chapter!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! It's exactly what I was going far! Next chapter is coming along great, so it should be up soon :) Thanks for reading
Reviewer: Readr1 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hi... its rare for a writer to evoke such anger from me. I left this chapter seething how dare He!? Bella better get some kick ass revenge on his pathetic ass... It takes alot for me to review but in this case i couldnt help myself... good work : )
Author's Response: hello! Thank you for the compliment. I'm trying to make this as real as possible, and not some crazy look at a perfect pregnancy and life. I do hope you continue reading, even if you don't always review. I do the same thing.
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 7
This story has grabbed me and I can't stop reading it!!! Tanya pushed Bella down the stairs didn't she??? I can't wait for the next chapter. You have me on the edge of my seat!
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
Looking forward to the meeting between Bella and her babies. Wonder if Edward will be there too?
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow. I am glad that the babies are here and safe, but I wish that Bella could see them and Edward would talk lovingly to her. The abies don't even have names yet, so they? I am looking forward to seeing what you do next. I have no idea who the dark man is.
Author's Response: dont worry, she'll see them next chapter. thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
So sad! But I am glad that Edward is acting like he should at this point.
Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 7
Poor Bella, those dreams are going to haunt her for a while I'm afraid. Edward showed improvement in Chap. 6 but he needs to do some serious groveling at Bella's feet to make up for the last few months. As much as I hope not to see Tanya again, I think he's going to have to prove to Bella he's done with the skank and for that Bella's going to have to see or hear it.
Author's Response: he does need to grovel for a bit to show Bella he's changed. Lets hope he does! thanks for reading!
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