Well it looks like they're finally going to start sorting things out.. I hope.

Edward has been kind of a douche though. I hope that Bella makes him really work for it.

Great job.

Rox

Author's Response:

She's not going to take him back as easily as she did before, that's for sure.   Thanks for reading!

Personally, I think this Bella is quite pathetic when it comes to Edward. She said so many times that if he ever does anything to her again, she was going to let him go. Yet she never follows through. I understand that she is in love with him, but even that only goes so far. If she actually goes back to him, then I would lose all respect for her. Forgiveness is one thing; everyone deserves forgiveness. But you don't forget. Bella is nothing more than a doormat.

I hope I don't offend you.

I do enjoy your writing and I care enough about this story to leave a review. But Bella is such a weak-willed character. You can't respect someone like that who lets other people walk all over them.

I'm ranting now. I apologize. I had a friend go through something similar to this story. I feel very strongly about this topic.... 

Author's Response:

I hope you like Bella come next chapter and the chapters that follow.  She's going to find her legs and stand true, don't worry. I think once she hears the truth from Edward, you'll start to see a change from her.

Thanks for reading :)

I just have to say that even though your Edward is the worst I have ever read, I love reading your story! The conflict between Bella and Edward really ruffles my feathers and leaves me wanting to know how the story will progress. Can they possibly end up together after all that has gone down with Tanya and Edward's pig headedness? Can't wait to read more! Keep it coming!

I am confused about one thing though.... The pictures of Edward and Tanya going into the hotel were fake right? But that doesn't mean Eddie wasn't sleeping with her...does it? He has been sleeping with her all this time right? Why else would he think Tanya's baby could be his? A matter of fact, wasn't he with Tanya the night before the big "Not Pregnant" show down at the Cullen's? I feel a little confused about this, and I'm hoping you can set me strait. Thanks

Author's Response:

Edward is a douche, I know. But lets hope he turns a new leaf now that the truth is out there!

Answers to your questions: Yes, the pictures were fake, and yes, Edward and Tanya had been sleeping together. He was also at her house the night before the truth came out, however I don't think he slept with her.

thanks for reading!

OMG.  Tanya is freaking crazy bitch.  But Edward was just as stupid.  He better get his shit together.  Best chapter ever.

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Thank the lord Tanya isn't pregnant!!!! I knew she was lying and i'm glad Edward figured out the REAL Tanya! I hope Bella overheard every word Edward said to Tanya and Tanya's confessions! I look forward to the next chapter, I hope its up soon!

Author's Response:

I hope to have it up soon, too. Thanks for reading :)

ughh omfg i hate that stupid bitch!! i've never actually gotten so angry at a fictional character in my life. but i have to say i loveee weston adn jennifer :) 

Author's Response:

I love them, too.  They went in a completely different direction when i wrote them, and I have to say, I was happy with how it went! thanks for reading!

Glad to see that lying Tanya gone!

Edward says he loves Bella, yeah right. Actions speak louder than words. He's a jerk.The fact that he even got in involved w/ Tanya tells us how in love he was with Bella. He is very shallow and selfish. I can't belive he let Tanya manipulate him w/ her lies. I admire that Bella lets Edward see his babies, but I am also glad she is guarding her heart from him too. She has been so mature in this situation. Going to school, working and just making a life for herselt and her babies. As you tell I'm definately not a fan of this Edward. I think the fact after Edward has "the talk" w/ Bella, she isn't going to go right back to him and this is going to drive him crazy. And I think when he sees her on a date it is going to shake him to the core. After Tanya's forced confessions, I still don't think he knows the damage and hurt he has caused Bella. Ok I'm done w/ my rant, can't wait for next update. :)

Author's Response: You are right on a lot of what you said. It's a long road ahead of Edward. Let's hope takes the right path. Thanks for reviewing :)

why do i think that edward is just stupid enough to put himself in a bad situation yet again with tanya.. im praying not but i just want to punch him in the face. i hope bella takes her time with forgiving him he has been nothing but a total nightmare to her  

Author's Response: Nah-Tanya is gone. She may pop up in a future chapter just in passing, but she's gone. Thanks for reading! :)

Well,I honestly believed Edward when he said he hadn't been with Tanya. he deserves to rot in hell, but he and Bella will never be happy with anyone but each other. I just don't see a way for them anymore

Its about time Edward came around

That boy better make good on that promise!