Love the story!!! can't wait to read more!

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I do believe that these characters have grown so much throughout the entire story.   It just fills a person's heart with so much love to see how two people can care for each other so much, and love their children so compassionately.   I really enjoyed this chapter.   Charlie was so sweet, and Edward, gah...I know we should feel some anger towards him still but I just can't.   He has changed and grown so much, and I hope he and Bella can get past all of the craziness that ruined their lives.   So much to live for, to love for, and you have brought it to us so brilliantly.   Keep up the great work, and show us the love...bring us more chapters soon.    By the way...love the song too!

Lol! Can't stop thinking of Alice rolling around the ground beating g Tanya's ass!

Good Chapter......

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Bella hasn't noticed Edward's change of heart and devotion to the twins.  It happened when Bella was thrown down the stairs.  I'm still convinced someone pushed her down them.  He thought he was going to lose all three of them. The only reason he went to Tanya was Bella and her mood swings.  She kicked him out.  He wasn't in tune with her.  He was still insensitive at the time.  Edward realizes what Bella has given up to have these babies.  Her reputation was trashed, harassed at school, humiliated and insulted by the one person claiming to love her, abandoned and alone to deal, rejected by her mother, told to get rid of the baby, accused of cheating and weren't Edward's, etc...  Bella is working constantly, going to school full time, Edward is watching the twins while she's working when he's available.  Maddy was ill had Carlisle check on her gave her meds.  In order to prevent her crying waking anyone else he brought his pillow and blanket and slept on the floor to watch over her.  That's pretty special knowing Bella needed extra sleep he took it on himself to let her rest and everyone else in the house.  Bella joined him on the floor as well to be close to their daughter during her illness. Total opposite of the treatment Renee would have given Bella as a baby.  Bella made a good decision she is better off without Renee in her life and the twins' life.  She isn't worth it at all. Edward has realized what he threw away with Bella and regrets it.  He wants to try and fix it.  Hoping to regain it and rebuild the solid foundation for a life long commitment.  Bella's not ready to trust him not to hurt her again.  Bella still loves him.  The spark is still there, but her fear of having her heart riped from her is too great to let him in again.

Author's Response:

I think bella's noticed it, but is maybe a little afraid to mention it in fear that if she did, he would stop. Which of course, would never happen - he loves his kids. Bella got her parenting skills from Charlie - who is amazing and stepped up to the plate. And yes, edward does regret everything that had happend with Bella, a conversation where the truth comes out is coming.

 Thanks so much for reading! My One Shot, Honor Thy Father (which is here and on ff) has been nominated at the Single shot Awards. I would love it if you would please read and vote for me. http://thesingleshotawards.blogspot.com/

I liked this chapter...it seems that Bella and Edward are working towards something...even if it is just friendship (for now).  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

PS-Renee is a witch.  What kind of mother could do that to their baby?

Author's Response:

Yes, renee is a bitch. I don't think she ever wanted to be a mother. thank god for Charlie!

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Just how damn drunk were those fuckers?  LOL!

Author's Response:

pretty sure they were six sheets to the wind :)  Next chapter coming shortly :)

He did sleep with her. I remember her saying I miss you when you dont spend the night.  He lies all the time...........that is what will never get Bella back.

 

LIES..

I hope you write fast.

 

You know the Ho had something on him at it is sex. YEPPERS I believe the nasty kind. Bella is young and sweet and loving. COMPLETE OPPOSITE of the HO.

 

Well, now Edward he has managed to kill her love.  I would let him take care of his babies and I would not let him back into my life any damn time soon. Now the last part of this was all Tanya.  BUT the biggest problem is there is not TRUST in between Bella  & Edward.

You know I personally don't think Edward should be allowed around B. He is awfull.

 

Tanya is perfect for him.. shallow.

LMFAO. I love the "cleanse". I am little confused by the Tanya "explanation".

Good Chapter....