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Reviewer: RebeccaJ1973 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2019 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 9

Why wouldn't Bella just apply for a Pell grant?  If she is living at home while attending school, her only real expenses school-related would be the tuition and fees (which the Pell grant would cover) and childcare.  I was married with a nearly 2 year old when I went back to college and easily obtained the Pell grant.  My husband also utilized that option while in college, though he didn't have a family yet.  It is income based, and though I cannot swear to it, I believe that Bella having the twins would allow them to base her financial aid on her own income rather than Charlie's (that was my problem when I went to college right out of high school - my income was based upon my parents' incomes, so, other than the two scholarships I had earned, I was only able to obtain secured student loans).  Also, with Bella's grades, she should have been able to gain at least a partial scholarship (I'm not aware if they have special grants or scholarships for children of law enforcement officers, but if they don't, they should!  The least we could do to thank them for risking their lives to protect ours while being highly underpaid would be to make sure their children could afford higher education).  There are also state and federal programs that help with childcare expenses (the government realizes just as Bella does that she can support her children more easily with a college degree). ;)
I know this is fiction and that the little details can probably be annoying when readers get hung up on them, but it is just difficult to read about someone in her situation gettting buried under the weight of student loans when there are other options out there.

Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2018 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

I like this story but these two are fucking hopeless. It;s ahrd to imagine Edward even as a human being so dumb and immature...and don't even get me started on Bella. bella he can't read your mind...if you needed money he is't going to guess by looking at you you are overdrawn and poor. I feel sorry for these kids. Their parents are children and actually act like it. I'm so annoyed lol but trying hrd to finsih this. 

Reviewer: KimiD (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 09:57 PM · On: Epilogue

I totally love every moment of this story! I could not put it down I just had to get to the next chapter. I am not one for angsty stories but truly enjoyed yours. Great writing! 

Reviewer: KimiD (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 09:54 PM · On: Epilogue

I totally love every moment of this story! I could not put it down I just had to get to the next chapter. I am not one for angsty stories but truly enjoyed yours. Great writing! 

Reviewer: Brittany08forever (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2013 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 16


Reviewer: luckyladyfla (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2012 12:18 PM · On: Epilogue

Thank you this story is awesome!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 06:34 AM · On: Epilogue

sniffle omg sniffle!! Not the HEA ending that I expected but you know what so worth it!!! Love love love!  Can't wait to see what you come up with next

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 21

squeeeee omg omg omg so freaking sweet!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 11:46 AM · On: Epilogue

Loved it. You did a great job. Hope to read some outtakes later. Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh poor Bella :(

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

yep he is a liar.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 11

he still met Tanya and had sex with her. So he has that to keep in his mind. He is young and dumb.. sounds familiar.. Tanya is evil to the core.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 9

Sorry I have been reading and not reviewing.. Sad story. I am glad B is taking responsibility and moving forward. Honestly I would not trust Edward with my dog.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

the dark figure?  Anything bad it is Tanya or James.  She is certifiable.

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 11:15 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks good chapter

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Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 08:51 PM · On: Epilogue

Such a lovely ending...

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Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 01:59 PM · On: Epilogue

Very nice. I love the little snippets in the epilogue.


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Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 01:11 PM · On: Epilogue

Nice ending.

My baby nephew is like that with his temperment.  Only time he really fusses is for hunger and sometimes for a diaper change.

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Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 12:31 PM · On: Epilogue

Awesome ending!!! :)

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Thanks so much!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 11:20 AM · On: Epilogue

Wonderful ending to this story. Acceptance of Edward from Charlie. Charlie's marriage and new addition to the Swan family. Surprised regarding additional member to Edward and Bella's clan as well. Going to law school with the possibility of practicing family law for Bella. Interesting twist for her, but definitely something she would be good at and has a lot of experience.  Still curious about the stairs causing the premature birth of the twins and almost loss of life for Bella -- was it just Bella's extra clumbiness or did someone cause it?  Never have gotten that question answered.  Anyway just love a happily ever after ending for everyone.

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No, Tanya never pushed Bella down those stairs. I"m guessing she probably passed out beacuse of her blood presssure.


Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Epilogue

The first thing I thought of when I saw that this updated was, "YAY!!!!!  More Maddie and Mason!"

Then I realized I didn't even think about Edward and Bella!!  HAHAHA! :)


I was glad to read about them and their new addition!  Super sweet!

Thanks for the epi!

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Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: ocsickgirl (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter. Feel bad for BBella learning about her mom like that though. And how sweet is Edward singing Pooh corner.....awwwww

Reviewer: ocsickgirl (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

I think I accidentally deleted my review....but I thought this chapter was hilarious. I loved him hanging out with his brothers.....acting like a normal teenage guy. 

Reviewer: ocsickgirl (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 21

Well at least someone set her straight. Glad she everyone realized she was in the wrong this time. Good for Edward. :)

Reviewer: ocsickgirl (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 20

Now I'm pissed at her. She is reverting back to her ways of just assuming things and not talking to apEdward. She says she doesn't have anyone to talk to??  How about going to the source itself?  Now she's the dumbass.

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