Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:00 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
She was dangerous like that .....I bet she is!
I think that Em better lay OFF, Bella is going to break something off in his ass that he cant pull out! Actually....that might be just as much fun to see. I love how well Bella has come accustomed to putting up with Emmetts shit. Cant wait for more.
Reviewer: mommy2sethnty (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Please continue it..this is a great storyline!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will be continuing here and I have just started Emmett's Guide to Sex as kind of a companion to this story.
Thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:50 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
So Edward is struggling with self control....poor guy, at least he's had plenty of practice where self dicipline is concerned. As for Emmett, he's a big boy (mmmm) he can take it! Great as ever Jaime, update soon xx
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:48 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
Loved Bella's come back to Emmett!!! (Even Esme and Carlisle would find that funny!)
And poor Charlie - he's really trying. He just hasn't got a clue, does he?
And I'd love to know what the other kids at school think about seeing all the Cullens cracking up and laughing. That's not something they've seen before!
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:36 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
I swear you have to be the funniest author ever. I have always hated scrabble but this makes me want to give it another try ;-) Emmett needs to be afraid. Bella is not even a vampire yet and she is already giving him a run for his money. I can not wait till the next chapter!! update soon
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:33 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
Wow that was great i just love this story its amazing cant wait for more
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:32 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
Wonderful. Can't get enough of the Scrabble reference ... actually, I can't look at a Scrabble board with a straight face again ... hahaha.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:20 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
good chapter.
Reviewer: pink_sapphire (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:14 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
Laughed my butt off! You rock! I love this Bella, she can hold her own!
Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:53 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
The ending was totally awesome. Go Bella!
Reviewer: kittenmittens (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Get Out Now!
Brilliant! I love this. This is a truly fun idea that needed to be done. You did a great job of building Edward's resolve to delve further with his physical desire. It didn't feel forced or unnatural to his character. In my opinion, it felt a bit more honest than the series portrayed.
Bella's response was pitch perfect from her dreaming state to her conscious one.
Charlie was fantastic! It's priceless when he sees Bella's torn clothing. HA!
I adore that poor Edward's at a loss. It's very rare that he doesn't know how to handle a situation. The tiny touches of him needing to act scared like a typical teen, dress slowly, not allow himself to escalate the situation so that Charlie shoots him. These were wonderful.
I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:43 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
LOL that was great - lemony goodness to start, and Emmett-banging to finish it off (hmm...perhaps some bad choice of words there...oh well!)
Looking forward to the next chappy!
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:27 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
I laughed the whole time, I really really like it. you're sooo good. please update soon dear ;)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:15 AM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
I love how Bella had a come back at Emmett way to go! Love the lemons of course they are always so good.
Reviewer: SleepyValentina (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Monkey Man
This was quite possibly the funniest chapter of any FF I've ever read. Seriously.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, what a wonderful compliment. I hope you have enjoyed the rest of the story.
Jaime
Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
This story is absolutely wonderful! I loved every minute of it. As much as I love Edward, I really couldn't get enough of Emmett! He is really hilarious and I'm glad you gave him a lot of "screen time".Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am actually working on an Emmett fic at the moment that ties into this story. Basically the behind the scenes story of his sex guide for Edward.
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a wonderful review.
Jaime
Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
Great Charlie pov! So funny!
Author's Response: Thank you. Poor Charlie is really trying to make this as painless as possible.
Author's Response: Thank you. Poor Charlie is really trying to make this as painless as possible.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
This is great. I really laughed!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was my evil plan, to get you to laugh.
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
ha this is a great story i just found in and my room mate and i love it.
Reviewer: mslupin (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
I am reading this at work and I choked on my sandwich. Because I was laughing so hard. There should be a warning. Do not read this while eating or something like that.
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
i loved this chapter!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
I will never be able to play scrabble again without laughing now. Great Chapter.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
I love Charlie, he seems to be a little ore observant than they think i think its funny. Good job
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
I love your story ever since I discovered it after before Xmas. Something like the missing pieces of Twilight the book. I can totally see Emmett reacting the way he does in your story. I can't tell you how much enjoyed your Scrabble analogies, especially the part, when Rose and Emmett decided to play that game. I'm sure they are exceptional :)
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