That was really funny! I really like the scrabble reference! Thanks for an awesome story!

nice chapter. cant wait for the next.

"You have succeeded in catching me drinking water.  I can see why you are the Chief of Police.”  -- This was priceless--I laughed out loud!

Poor Charlie is a hot item on the market now.  If he is not careful he is going to give himself a heart attack jumping out at Bella like that. ;-)  Good for Alice that she tried to control herself as much as possible.  Serious Emmett is so sweet and caring.  He really cares for Bella and wants her to be apart of the family.  Although you said you had a hard time with the chapter I think you did a great job!

awwww thats sweet   lol the doc appt should be interesting with a vampire by her side.  is the doc carlisle

Great Chapter! I love how you wrote in about the women in town now searching Charlie out since his little condom purchase that is so funny! I hope Edward does pursade Charlie into letting him marrying Bella.

I really like this Edward... much better than the "Emoward" we're used to.  Great job.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I decided it was about time he had some fun and started acting like a teenager.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Jaime

crap, who was I kidding now I wanted to marry him.  Hhahahaaa

I love your Charlie! My fav Charlie scene in ths movie is when he acts like he is drawing a halo over his head. :D That reminds me so much of my Dad. Thanks for the laughs :P

Hurry back every chance you get!

 

LOL I'm sorry!  I wouldn't have mentioned getting the movie a day earlier than the release date if I knew yours would be at all delayed...if it helps you feel better, I was out on the Saturday shopping and found the movie a bit cheaper than what I had paid for it online - that's always a kick in the pants, lol.

Okay, loved the chapter - poor Charlie, beating those women off with a stick!  ...Hmm...stick...bad analogy ;-)  Loved the mention of "Willie" again - although I had to think for a few moments before I remembered who "Willie" was, lol.  Glad you beat the evil Writer's Block, can't wait for the next chapter.  At least Alice has learned to keep her thoughts to herself, at least concerning the bedroom (or car, as it may be) habits of others!

Good chappie yet again, reading it you wouldn't think you struggled at all.  Poor Charlie is loosing his mind completely.  I look forward to the Doctor's appt.

Manda

That was a great update.  It was interesting to get a look into Charlie's head

Even though you say you had a hard time with the chapter, I think it's very good. You clearly get to see how happy Bella makes him and also how Charlie is an EXTREMELY over protective father. It's all very cute an insightful.