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Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Forever
Great chapter!! Continue!! It would be nice to hear Alice or Rose's point of view...
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Forever
Great chapter, thanks for the update.
As for whose POV to do - I'm sure anything you pick will be great.
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Forever
okay, this is truly random, but could we either have esme or mikes? i would absolutely love to hear a bit from their heads.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Forever
Great chapter. I'm so happy that Edward told Bella he wanted to change her at some point and time. I really can't think of one pov in particular that I really want. Maybe Rosalie being bitchy to someone cause of all the Cullen attention, lol.
Reviewer: AleKat (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Forever
I am soo glad Edward finally admitted to "forever" Looking forward to seeing what forever entails. As for the next point of view, I'd like to see Rosalie. Very curious what her take on all of this is. Great story!! :)
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Forever
Here's random: Carlisle!!
Reviewer: lmkf (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Forever
i enjoyed this chapter especially Emmett's POV at the end.
i would like to see Rosalie's POV to see how she is feeling about what Edward and Bella are doing.
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Forever
Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter! I love how edward is so open to the idea of Bella changing and a forever with her! It's so refreshing that he's not all Emoward and totally against a vamp Bella! Great job! So umm.. is Bella going to remember that she was mad at him? Lol! I think not! :P
Hmm... POV choice? Well, Esme would be wonderful, or maybe Carlisle? Jasper and Alice would be nice too! :P I know, too any choices! They all would be really cool! Oh, I know ... how bout some of the kids at school! Like Jessica, Mike, Eric or Tyler? Anyone who's now pining for their attention! Lol! I love that! That's so funny! Way to go Edward, start dating Bella, and the whole school wakes up and notices! Lol!
Okay, so if I really had to choose ... I guess Esme! I love her! How kind and motherly she is to everyone! She has a warm heart - you know what I mean! Then maybe Carlisle! His compassion for them, and for everything, is amazing! Maybe have him talk to Edward about Bella changing, and have Esme talk to Bella about being a part of the family for forever - mother to daughter, father to son! Oh so wonderful!
Update soon! Have fun writing! :D
Reviewer: alebodden11 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Forever
Heehee! That was totally awesome! LOVED IT!! POV?? lemme see...EDWARD!! and Charlie!! hahahah! LOOOVED IT!
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Forever
Rosalie or maybe one of the many students of Forks...
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Forever
esme... i want to hear from esme!! hehe
Reviewer: Jasarey (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Forever
You should so do Jessica--that would be too much!!! Great chapter by the way...
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Get Out Now!
Awesome new chapter! I would love to see how Jasper or Rose feel about all this!
Author's Response: Thank you. I added quite a few points of view so hope you enjoyed those. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Forever
This story is one of my favourites. I just want you to know that. I love that Edward and Bella are sexually active instead of just pining away for each other. It's hilarious that Charlie caught them since it seems Edward's radar is down when they "get busy", but still it's nice to see them together.
As for who's POV I'd like to hear from? Rose, of course! Then maybe Jasper.
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Forever
loved the chapter. maybe jasper or alices pov.
Reviewer: NightCullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Forever
JASPER'S!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Forever
yay for updates! :)
I always love Edwards point of view but it would be fun to see Carlisle's too and see what he is thinking about Bella, maybe show a conversation between him and Edward about Bella changing.
I love this story! :)
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Forever
Oh my vote is always Emmett! LOL. You KNOW how much I love Emmett! Your Emmett is...just....Brilliant.
Seriously his jealousy is freaking hilarious here....but also love how he says he can't wait to know her and love her as much as Edward too (along with the rest of the family of course!) Le sigh...Yes. Emmett. He's WIN! LMAO.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Forever
She stood there for a moment and just looked at me, her eyes taking in every inch of my body like I was something to be devoured. Of course you would not catch me complaining if she decided that she wanted to take a little lick here and there. I could never deny my angel anything. HAHA - Edward is so unselfish.
I can't tell you how much I enjoy this story. It really makes me laugh.
I woud love to hear Rose and Jasper's views. A visit from Tanya would be interesting - I have always disliked her and would love to see her be jealous of Bella.
Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Forever
I think something from Jessica would be good... or even mike or tyler- Thanks -Tsherm
Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Forever
Welcome back! I loved it! Thanks! EPOV please!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Forever
I'm all about taking any girl that talks to Jasper.
Just saying =P haha.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Holins (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:48 AM · On: A Vampire and a Werewolf Walk Into a Bar
hahahaha this chapter was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing.
Reviewer: Twilightinmyheart (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Forever
Sweet sweet sexin, my favorite!!! I would like to see Esme's POV or even more random how about a fly on the wall, LOL no really I'm serious.
Reviewer: Holins (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Who Knew Edward Had It In Him?
"caring is sharing" and everything else that was this chapter had me laughing nonstop. You write this characters very well. The way they interact with one another is very good. It never seems forced. Their conversations flow and everything they say is very believable with their characters. Awesome work.
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