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Reviews For Shotgun Charlie
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

I'm REALLY looking forward to what happens at school the next day!!

Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Love it! please update ASAP!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

This story has thrilled me from minute one.  I love sexy Edward not being able to keep his hands off Bella.  That's the 17 year old boy in him.  I wish SM could have showed more of that, but I understand she was being careful due to the innocence of her young readers. *pout* You don't have to worry about that, now do you? teehee Lovely, lovely story.  I'm looking forward to how many versions of "Bella's pregnant" you are going to come up with at school.  Stupid Lauren! pbbb

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

This story is beyond good. I have so enjoyed it. Your a great writter. Love the humor and horny Edward.

 

Speaking of flexible I wonder how flexible she would be after her change.  There were some things that I had in mind that weren’t even feasible at the moment but soon enough.  I would figure out a way to bring them up later.  Oh…what did she say?  LOL - Spoken like a true man.

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

I loved it ! Can't wait to see how Bella deals with everyone at school and town.

Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Aww, I think Charlie is cute here, he is trying so hard to get used to the idea of Bella's engagement.  Of course Edward is adorable in how happy he is and I had to laugh at him being distracted thinking of Bella in her Victoria's Secret.  He's become quite randy indeed.  Of course their love making was so sweet, but there for a second I was afraid they were going to wake Charlie again.  Since they're engaged, wonder if he would come flying in again? Also really like that Edward is ok with her being changed. I hate when he acts so stubborn about it in stories.  As always, looking forward to more of this.

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

That was great Poor charlie, he's losing his baby, but at least Edward asked. I'm sure the school will have their pionts of view this should be interesting. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

LOL! Cute.

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Poor Charlie :)  I'm looking forward to school :D 

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

I enjoyed getting back to the funnier aspects of the story in this chapter. Edward continually spacing out and Bella rambling on and on was quite funny. I also enjoyed Charlie (as always) and his gruff acceptance of their engagement, as well as him telling everyone proudly about it. Can't wait for them to get to school! LOVED IT!

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

as always, great chapter!  Can't wait to see what happens at school!

 

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Ohhh Smut Mondays and FFAF?!?!? SQUEEE!!! And a one shot for who knows?!? Dang you're gonna be busy! WOOOHOOO!!!

Ok, Edward not being able to concentrate...HILARIOUS!!!! Charlie calling Edward Mr. Perfect...LOVED IT! And again the Scrabble reference...OMFG LOVED THAT!!! I play Scrabble a LOT (especially since getting it on that new phone I hate so much) and with the app on facebook...dang, I play a lot. Almost as much as I read FF....DOH!!! Will be hard to play and not be LMAO or thinking about SC...LOLOL.

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Ohhhh, I'm dying to read reactions!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

I love that Lauren & Jessica got the rumor mill started! So jealous!

Reviewer: mallen (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble

So we actually play Scrabble a lot (I really am talking about the board game here) and I'm not sure if I'll be able to keep myself from laughing the next time we play!  



Author's Response:

Haha....I haven't played since I wrote this.  I can't imagine the words that I would come up with.  Hope that you were able to keep a straight face if you've played recently. 

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:40 PM · On: What's Behind The Door

SWOOONS!!! ok seriously I have to say it again....cause I even just re-read it NOW. BEST PROPOSAL EVER!!!!! Le sigh....are there any REAL men out there like this? (Of course you know now I'm in love with you since this was totes YOUR idea...LMAO) MWUAH!!! Fantabulous chapter!!!

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.

Oh this chapter is sooo funny!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hehe..thank you!  I hope you have enjoyed the rest of the story too.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:42 PM · On: What's Behind The Door

Aw, the proposal and the setting was beautiful. I can't imagine someone taking the effort to make a room look like a meadow. And the twinkle lights are always so romantic. I'm totally envious now.

Reviewer: Michs95 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:58 AM · On: What's Behind The Door

I almost cried at his proposal!  This is such a wonderful story.  I love Emmett and can't wait for Bella to get a little revenge on him.  Poor Charlie and his attempts to keep PG.  I can't wait to see the reactions at school when they see the engagement ring!! 

Michelle

Reviewer: who knows (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Get Out Now!

great start superstarrh

good choice Edward - silence is a good option and leaving

charlie shooting you and the bullets going anywhere but...  not a good idea  lol

 



Author's Response:

Always play the coward and run, less explaining to do.  Plus less cores are throbbing that way.

Thanks for reading.

Jaime

Reviewer: who knows (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Get Out Now!

I've heard this story is fantastic and as soon as i finish winning the BAT Crackfic contest I am going to start.



Author's Response:

Umm...you done with that BAT Crack yet?  Just wondering.  LOL

Thanks for starting to check it out.  Hope you like the rest.

Jaime

Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun

I wish Edward would climb through my window and do that. H-O-T!



Author's Response:

Ha...don't we all...don't we all.  I would keep my window open for that.

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.

"Who knew you could actually beat somebody with a fish." HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! Man I am soooo glad I came across this story!



Author's Response:

LOL...glad you liked it.  Don't get in theway of Charlie and his fish, he knows some moves!

Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: 1234cullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 01:26 AM · On: What's Behind The Door

i have spent 4 days reading this whole story and this is by far the most amazing, funny, adorable, sweet and sexy :) story i have ever read.

 

This is amazing. You are amazing to have made all this up and i just can't wait 2 keep hearing more of this!!

 

This is a great tory kepp up the great work.

 

Love from Australia!!

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 02:51 AM · On: What's Behind The Door

I loved it, very sweet and touching, but more than perfect for the two of them. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I am looking forward to your completed story. I am sure it will be just as entertaining in wonderful as this one.

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