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Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
LOL! Your limerick was fucking hilarous! I really like that Edward is planning the wedding rather than Alice--you're right, it is impersonal that she would be doing that. I also like that Bella is looking forward not only to this wedding, but the idea that they can get married many times. I love the idea of a wedding in the meadow with many sparking vampires! And it's very sweet that Charlie is warming back up to Edward.
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
what was Alice talking about the shower that had Bella wanting out?
Charlie is very insightful.
Reviewer: achangeofheart (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
you made me cry, the ending to that chapter was simply beautiful. ive been waiting for an update for far too long and im glad this is what you updated with. i cant believe its nearly finished. well hurry up with more please.
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Le sigh...you know I too am sad it's gonna end...sniff, sniff....are you sure you wanna end it? Ok, ok, ignore me....seriously, I'm just sad it's ending...LOL. I know that doesn't help you not be sad...
Reviewer: rebmatmak (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Loved Charlie's POV in this chapter!!!!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
I have missed this story! June 27th, huh? That's a lot earlier than most of the stories on this site. Most authors stick with the tried and true August 13th. hehe
I can't believe Alice isn't planning this wedding, but she would not be able to deal with "simple and elegant". Over the top is more Alice's style. Edward and Bella are so sweet together and I'm happy that Charlie is finally coming to terms with everything. That was so accepting of him to put a blanket over them and just let them "sleep". Yeah, Edward's asleep, right. What's in the next chapter? Graduation? The Wedding? Both? Bring it on!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
good stuff... sad to see this little romp winding down :(
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! Charlie made me cry! Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
That was great i cant wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: QueenShelley (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2009 09:30 PM · On: A Vampire and a Werewolf Walk Into a Bar
hee hee hee...Alice and her potato....can't stop giggling at that image...I'm am so enjoying this story...laughs, love, and lemons (that is the term, isn't it?)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
So Sweet...Love this chapter...Oh, and I like your limmerick!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Random Observations
Solid Gold Dancer?!?!? I am peeing myself! TOOO funny; inspired, actually!
Reviewer: QueenShelley (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Read Any Good Books Lately?
I can't stop laughing at Emmett's thoughts and reactions, and the rest of this stuff is pretty good too....
Reviewer: Simona (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Aww, soft teddy bear Charlie comes out of hiding!
Hehehe, mmmmm.....zebras! What on earth was she thinking of, her future diet??!!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: QueenShelley (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
I swear to God, I almost fell off my chair at the image of someone getting a beating with a fish...Great stuff, and not just the fish image....
Author's Response: I always forget about the fish until I read reviews. Thank you so much for taking the time to review and I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Interesting poem at the start. Great chap. I agree, sometimes forever isn't enough.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
That last bit with Charlie almost had me in tears- it was so sweet
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Yea... Edward will always love her.
And one good thing about Edward and Bella,
they will live Forever in our harts and Stories.
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Awwww! I love the Charlie POV that was so sweet.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
aww. edward pretending to sleep and charlie actually feeling affectionate...
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
ughh not enough! i want to read more. i love this story. so interesting. i love the poem at the begining. hopefully you are able to make this story into two more chapters but if not oh well. i can't wait for the next chapter. update quickly!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Great chapter
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
Aww! Charlie is so sweet! :D
Oh, Alice! Alice, Alice, Alice! Lol! Well, at least they were persistant in planning the wedding on their own! I can't wait to see it in full swing! :D Bella's right, she'd have many more weddings that Alice can plan, but this first one is special! And Edward's right about the guest list. There would probably come a time where they will look at the wedding pictures and want to remember their old friends! Especially after Bella's change, she probably wont remember this very well anyways, and she'll want to look back!
I love this story, and I'm sad that it's ending soon. You've done a wonderful job in writing! I can't wait for more! :D
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
awwwww
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
great chapter!
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