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Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:07 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
This is one of my favorite stories on this site.....Luuuuuv it!!
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:47 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
WHAT? NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE THE LAST? UGH! NOT HAPPY. WHY??????
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:34 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
That was really good i cant wait to see what happens next. Great chapter yet again
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:04 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Mixed feelings on all the "goodbyes" that Bella is having to say and a little sadness at some of Edward's comments at human's eating habits, but mostly a really sweet, lemony chapter. I'm now wondering where the heck this boat is? The middle of which lake or ocean? Seattle to New York to London to ??? You just want to leave us wondering, I know.
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:01 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
great chapter!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:20 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
You get another ten
Reviewer: jennde (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:16 PM · On: I Do
Loved, loved, loved the wedding. What a perfect day for both of them.
I can feel bella's sadness at having to leave her family, but it contrasts nicely with her happiness at her future with Edward.
I loved Em's portion - it was good to see him happy for Edward after all the shit he pulled.
I can't wait for the honeymoon.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:07 AM · On: I Do
aww!!
Reviewer: Bebo (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:58 AM · On: I Do
amazingly beautiful. can't wait for the next update. i need to check more often. i didn't even realize you had updated. i read this story back in early july i think or late june. lol
Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 12:00 AM · On: I Do
Thank you so much for this chapter. It was really sweet and beautiful. I really enjoy this Bella and Edward, there is still the element of angst, but they're also light and happy and it's a relief to the reader. I like your pick for their wedding song. I have to say, that it isn't one of my personal favorites, only because I would much rather hear 'i love you,' than read it on a face, but that's me. However, it was too PERFECT for Edward and Bella, so I loved it! Also, I thought it was great that Charlie gave Edward the shotgun. Too funny, sad too since Edward thinks he can't procreate. Will there be a Renesmee in Shotgun Charlie? How far are you taking this story? Thanks so much for a great chapter. Oh, and I hope you don't mind, but I put your banner in my siggie. Let me know if you would like me to remove it, no problems! Thanks again!
Reviewer: EmmettLover (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Who Was I Kidding?
I love the twist on Emmett in your stories. It's truely amazing, to see him differently. Even though he has the jokey teasing side of him. We see him actually being serious and caring towards Bella. And i absolutely love it.
Also the way you have written this erotic story without it sounded sleezy is very well done, and by showing the physical side of there relationship, really shows there bond.
Well Done.
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:19 AM · On: I Do
*sniffs very loudly into a kleenex, can't afford lace* Well considering you were'nt feeling the wedding vibe last time you emailed that was bloody brilliant. Not many of the fics I've read have made me cry but rest assured yours is one of them. Aside from the vows, which were so lovely, I loved Emmett's POV and of course Charlie's gift to Edward. For me these 2 chapters have come at a good time as my man and me have decided to finally tie the knot! Have a fantastic time with Mickey. Best wishes as always
Nina xxx
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Something Old
Hi Jamie, sorry for not R&R before, damned internet has been down for a week! Apparently thats just life in Africa! On the upside I have 2 chapters to read YAY! I really enjoyed reading Rene and Charlie's POV, especially Rene's less that motherly thought towards her soon to be son in law! and certain parts of his anatomy, but I guess she is only human after all. Going to go and read 'I do' now. :-)
Nina xxx
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:10 AM · On: I Do
wow that is a really pretty dress. and OMG that was just such a great chappter.
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 07:06 PM · On: I Do
Perfect, this chapter was. Looking forward to the final chapters, but at the same time I'm sad to see it end. Enjoy Mickey!!!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Something Old
Great chapter, and the locket is beautiful. But poor Edward, having to hear Renee's thoughts when she met him, lol!
Reviewer: kschelte (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:02 PM · On: I Do
That's how I wanted the honeymoon to go...In the meadow...It was perfect!!!
Reviewer: alebodden11 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 12:47 PM · On: I Do
Oooh! that was lovely!! LOVED IT!! Perfect, FANTASTIC!! =] It was the perfect wedding for those 2!! LOVED IT!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 10:31 AM · On: I Do
Wonderful!
Reviewer: clarabella (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:44 AM · On: I Do
wow! to be honest, I had forgotten about this story until my friend reminded me! I just read the last five chapters all together and was reminded why I loved it in the first place!! I can't wait to see how you end things!! ;)
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:44 AM · On: I Do
I loved that Emmett scared Mike off! That was cool they got to have their wedding night in the meadow.
Reviewer: french_hornbby3 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Read Any Good Books Lately?
off-shot=yes.
a 10 on the rating scale is the best, is it not?
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Get Out Now!
The wedding was perfect, so romantic and beautiful :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, to me it was very important that they made it theirs. She is ready to pledge eternity to him and give up her humanity but she didn't want to marry him? It never made sense to me.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:37 PM · On: I Do
Just perfect...So sweet and so romantic......
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:01 PM · On: What's Behind The Door
Basically, what I'm envisioning is a panoramic shot of the meadow--right? That's awesome! I have a setting on my camera with that capability, and it is incredible. Great visual. Loved the proposal, and I'm glad she said yes.
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