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Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:11 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
good stuff... will be sad to see this story end :(
Author's Response: Me too but I have been having a great time writing it and hopefully something else will come to me soon.
thank you for taking the time to review.
Jaime
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:15 PM · On: I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y
Hell naw!!!!! Bella just out-mouthed Emment!!! Day-um!!!!
Reviewer: Mels78 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:59 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Very good. I always enjoy reading your story; your viewpoint has just the right balance between sweet and fun. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I am curious as to how Bella will turn out if you are taking the story that far.
Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the balance of the story, I try hard to keep it fun. The next chapter is coming along. I promised only 1 more so I am trying to fit everything in although I may just end up finishing the honeymoon and then wrapping everything up. I am taking it through her change and that part is already almost written. I am hoping to have at least the honeymoon up this week since I already have about 4,000 words written.
Thank you again for your support.
Jaime
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
They never stop. They're giving Rose 7 Em a run for their money.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Bells is so good she can make 107 year old vamp act like a horny 17 year old. Must have been a pretty good day dream if he accidently took her into Vic's Secret store.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Breaking All the Rules
I love when Bella takes control,though im not the only one. The oart with Jasper & Alice:to freaking comical.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:50 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
I love that Edward and Bella cannot keep their hands off each other. It was hilarious to hear that Edward found kissing Bella after she ate a Peanut Butter & Jelly sandwich a turn off. His observations about the consumption of food by humans was interesting and just plain funny. Bella's wedding gift to Edward was very sentimental. This chapter was a good mixture of sexy, sweet and sad moments as the newlyweds took off for their honeymoon. Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:39 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
This was fantastic!
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:15 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Really good
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Note to Self, When Bella Wants Sex....Bella Gets Sex
Bella & Esme get major points for being ball busters!!!!!
Reviewer: silentred (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:06 PM · On: A Vampire and a Werewolf Walk Into a Bar
"At one point I had to stifle a laugh when Alice got a bit overexcited and flung a whole potato over her shoulder almost taking out the window behind her. "
I almost fell out of my chair, that is just perfect!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Damn Manic Depressive Vampire
I love that Esme showed some brute force!! And to think this all begin with fishing. HA!!!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:50 PM · On: You're On Your Own
That was weird to see Emment so serious.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Whatever You Do, Don't Look Down!
I didn't think Bella had it in her,I was just scared that they had to do it in a tree. Emment McCarty Cullen eat your damn words!!!! What you think about Bella Swan now? HAHA!!!!!
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:32 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Great chapter! I absolutely love the inscription Bella wrote for Edward .. gah, that was too sweet.
Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:56 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Awesome as usual!!!!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:24 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Awesome, as always! :-)
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:55 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
I love this story!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:37 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Way to go!1 Excellent chapter! Looking forward to Smut Monday.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:54 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Great update!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:15 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Loved it! Update very soon please!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:08 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Great chapter!!Finally the honeymoon...Can't wait for more.. ;D
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:47 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Great chapter. And I'm VERY curious as to where exactly they're headed. Can't wait to find out!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:10 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
It's so sad that's it's winding down! This story has been a blast!
Are they going to Isle Esme in a different location?
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:46 AM · On: On Our Way(VJ)
Ooo Smut Monday, why have I not heard of that before?!!! Sounds perfect for the perv in me!! Take your time with the last chapter it'll be worth the wait I'm sure. Best wishes as ever.
Nina xxx
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