Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:09 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
haha yes, lets get some advice from emmett, this should be good lol!
Author's Response: I shudder at the pointers that Emmett might give. Bella may not be durable enough. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 03:09 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
Yay! An update! I so excited for the next part! I wish you would have just let it be super long *pouts* waiting will give me a headache... >.<..... And with Emmett. I'm all O.o If I could I would give you a 1000000 but I can only give you a 10 so..... 10 for you!
Author's Response: Ah...thanks. I will gladly take the 10!! Sorry to cut it in half but it was really long and that seemed like a good point to end it. The rest is up and I am frantically working on more in between review responses! Thanks so much, I"m glad you are enjoying it and keep an eye out for more!
Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 03:07 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
Wonderful! I actually laughed out loud at Emmett. Ah, Emmett...always good for some pointers! More please!
Author's Response: Yes..that Emmett knows more than most. He can give some rather good pointers. Thanks and more has been added and more still to come.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 03:01 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
I'm loving how playful Edward is, and how excited too! But I'd like to see more of the love he has for Bella, too. This chapter felt like a "quickie" for Edward and Bella, and they are SOOO not the type for that. Can't wait for your next chapters! WOO-HOO!
Author's Response: The love will come more into play later. At the moment they are just enjoying the high of first sex and exploring. Horomones are kind of taking over. More is posted and more is on its way! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 02:50 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
This is a really great story:] I was happy to see the update I kinda fliped when I saw you updated!!
Author's Response: Ah...I'm trying to update at least once a week. Whenever inspiration strikes. I'm glad that you are enjoying it and thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 02:49 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
I am loving it. Its nice that Edward is finally enjoying himself. Bella doesn't seem to mind either!!!! Great chapter!
Author's Response: No, neither of them seem to mind the whole sexual exploration one bit. I can't imagine why...hehe. I'm glad you liked that chapter and thanks for the review.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 02:33 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
LOL Emoward :) excellent! And WTG bella!
Author's Response: Yes...poor Edward, just when he started getting some he had to go and get all depressed again. It won't last long, no worries! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 10:07 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
I loved it!! I cannot wait to see the dinner that should be fun..not but it might be funny as hell to see Charile see Edward for the first time ha! Ooo!! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Dinner has been added, actually two chapters since this one so hopefully still fun. More is coming soon and thank you for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: schleprock (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:57 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
i'm thinking ha ha ha and ooooh. update soon please!
Author's Response: Ha...exactly what I am aiming for. Two more updates since this chapter and more on it's way! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: floggedbyedward (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:15 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
WTF
Author's Response: WTF indeed!
Reviewer: Kiri_sora (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 11:01 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
Poor Carlisle and Jasper, but good for Emmett :)
Author's Response: Yes...they were so hopeful that his infamous control would hold strong. But now that it is gone...it is gone!! Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: McQueen (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:11 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
This is hilarious! Please continue!
Author's Response: Done...more chapters have been posted and more are on the way soon! Thanks and I hope you continue to enjoy.
Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 09:05 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
That was a really good, funny chapter! I can't wait fr the update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks..I'm glad you enjoyed it! THank you for taking the time to review. More updates posted and more to come.
Reviewer: lostinhishazeleyes (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 08:20 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
WOW that was even more harsher(is that even a word) well i cant believe it...wow...i would die if that ever happened and my dad has threatened it before
Author's Response: Ha...yes, I couldn't imagine being in that situation, vampire boyfriend or not. It will just make things more interesting for them now. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 08:08 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
omg i love it... i seriously need to know what charlie says at this dinner!!! update ASAP!
Author's Response: Dinner is up and I am also working on next chapter from Charlie's point of view so keep an eye out. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:45 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
LOL, WTG Bella! I don't blame her, I can't lie either :) This is a really funny story. I can't wait to see what happens at the dining table :)
Author's Response: She is a horrible liar and Charlie already knew the truth anyways. No one is that oblivious. Dinner is up so check it out if you haven't and thanks for the review.
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2008 11:43 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
haha this story is entirely way to funny. Emmett is cracking me up (as he usually does) and hooray for Edward finally doing the deed :)
Author's Response: I know, there should be a parade for Edward, it's about time. Emmett is just so much fun to play with, he demands to be written. Thanks for the review and I am glad that you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
Finer points of welding! Haaaahahahaa I love it! Poor Bella, hey been there done that and I wasnt wearing A Tshirt. What do you say?? I am loving this! I am on vacation..away from a computer unless I can sneak on someones laptop. I cant wait to come back and see how the dinner goes. Ha..
Author's Response: Hope you enjoyed your vacation!! Yes, tough situation to be caught in but now the fun should begin as they try to find ways around it. Thanks for reviewing..especially while on vacation!!
Reviewer: rara2007 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 11:13 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
This story cracks me up to no end!! I love Emmett!!! "Finer points of welding"...hilarious!!!!!!!! Kepp up the great work!
Author's Response: Emmett...always wants to help when he can! He's a giver. Thanks so much for the review and glad that it is making you laugh!
Author's Response: Emmett...always wants to help when he can! He's a giver. Thanks so much for the review and glad that it is making you laugh!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 11:03 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
I LOVE it!!!!! This story is so much fun to read. I can't wait to read what happens next. Surely, they won't be able to keep their hands off of eachother now!!! Great update.
Author's Response: No, surely they will not be able to keep their hands off each other. They've unleashed something they can't contain. Thanks for the love and I hope you continue to enjoy. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:25 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
Did I ever tell you how much I adore your story? Loved it! Fav Line: "Who knew that you could actually beat someone with a fish?"
Author's Response: Ah...thank you so much. Yeah, I had to laugh when I wrote that, it seemed so Charlie! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
OH NO! Not bars on the windows! I can't wait for them to all have dinner together lol
Author's Response: Dinner together is complete and up. Bars in the windows will come into play again later on! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:06 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
This story is awesome....loved Emmett happily collecting all his money...too funny! The dinner should be interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad that so many people are enjoying because I am having such a great time with it. Makes it all worthwhile. Dinner is up so check it out if you haven't and thank you for the review!
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:06 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
charlie is so funny!
Author's Response: Thanks, I had to show some Charlie love. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
That was so funny "we were just having sex". Good Start
Author's Response: Thank you...she decided to go with the whole, "the truth shall set you free." We'll see how that works out for her! THanks for the review!
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