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Reviews For Shotgun Charlie
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

I was very much enjoying the fun in the previous chapters, but this was good too!  It was a very sweet chapter, and cool to remind us that this is just not merely messing around for Edward!  Plus, I love your Charlie.

Looking forward to more!

 



Author's Response:

Edward is in it for the long haul.  He wants Bella for forever and isn't afraid to share that.  He thinks it would demean his relationship with Bella if he wasn't anything less than honest.

Thank you for the Charlie compliment.  He isn't explored a lot in the books so I'm just taking what my dad would be feeling if I had dated a vampire...just kidding.

Thanks and more coming very soon.  Chapter 15 is up but 16 is almost done.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Jocasta (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

Poor Charlie. If feel so bad for him. Losing his baby girl two years after getting her back. I felt sorry for him when I read the books too.

The lemony goodness of the next chapter she clear up my sadness. Can't wait!

Author's Response:

I know.  Charlie never really got the chance to have any time with her.  He doesn't know what to make of her on one hand but he isn't quite ready to lose her to another man.  He realizes she is happy though and can't bear to take that away from her.

Lemony goodness coming soon. All will be better then.

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

I totes give this a 10...not sure why the 9 popped up there at the last second!!! 10 10 10!!!



Author's Response:

Sure you did...sure you did!

LOL..thanks for reviewing again just to fix that.  You are too kind.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

LMAO @ the mangled worms!! Those poor worms didn't stand a chance!! LMAO LMAO LMAO Loved it Jaime!!! Can't wait for the update and we get stuff from Emmett's book?!? SQUEEEEEE!



Author's Response:

Poor little worms.  Alice really should have seen that one coming but who can blame her for not warning him.  Where's the fun in that. 

Emmett's book is being explored!  Hope you like it and thank you once again for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: Jessie (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

Aww, bittersweet.  Poor Charlie. 



Author's Response:

Yes, he just got her back and now he has to share her.  He wasn't prepared for that but he knows there is nothing he can do to stop it.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

That was sweet and cute and hilarious!  The worm thing cracked me up. You write Edward perfectly. Thank you so much.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, what a compliment to say that I write Edward perfectly.  He just didnt know what to do with himelf this chapter.  Between the worms and Charlie at least the worms were the only ones hurt.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

mounting pile of worm carcasses = favorite!!!!!!



Author's Response:

haha...poor Edward just can't control himself with the worms.  This is a situation that he never expected to find himself in.

Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Cullen0128 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

LOL that was so funny that he kept killing all the worms. Cant wait to see what she had makred in the book. Update soon



Author's Response:

Poor worms never had a chance.  Nervous vampires don't do well with fragile objects.

Exploration of the books will occur in the next chapter so stay tuned.

Thank you so much for the review and Chapter 15 has been added and Chapter 16 coming soon.

Reviewer: sonyabrady1971 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

You know what they say, never ask a question you might not want to hear the answer too!!!!  LOL poor Charlie

Can't wait for your next update, I am enjoying this story very much. :-)



Author's Response:

I know, what was Charlie hoping to hear on that one?  I'm just using your daughter for sex?  Would that have made him feel better.  Poor guy is just trying to figure this out as he goes along.

Next update was posted and Chapter 16 is almost done.

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

awww that was adorable and hilarious all at the same time. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

I think Bella reading Emmett's guide is too funny, especially her folding down the corners of the pages she wanted to try. :)



Author's Response:

Always be prepared right!  She just wants to have some ideas for the next time and she is a big believer in planning ahead!  Hehe.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

I'm picturing Emmett wearing a fly fishing hat (like Brad Pitt in A River Runs Through It). Don't know why, but that image popped into my head and now it's stuck!

 

I love this story! It makes me laugh so much and feel the need for a cold shower...or a good 3 hours alone in a room with Rob! (Wait, not or. I'll take the latter!) 

 

Can't wait for the fishing, I know it will be GREAT! 



Author's Response:

Now that image is stuck in my head too.  I can just see it so clearly.  Now I can't get the image of a shower with Rob out of my head either.  Now Edward and Bella may need to explore some shower time activitiy in the near future!

 

Hope you enjoyed the fishing and Chapter 16 will be coming soon too!

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

I LOVE IT!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: twi_hard205 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

i was so happy to see that there was a new chapter.

i love how bella marked some pages that shocked edward.. lol

cant wait for the next chapter. time to do some fishin'

 



Author's Response:

:D   Another new chapter is in the works now so keep an eye out!  Poor Edward can't control himself around Bella and she has the same problem.  She just thinks the books has some good ideas and she wants to be able to find them easily if the opportunity presents itself!

Thank you for the review and I hope that you enjoyed the fishing.

Reviewer: smellyia (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

Bwahahahaha! FISHING. I am in love with that and what really struck me in this was Charlie's POV because I liked how he saw Bella. The whole comment about wondering if Dr. Cullen could help was hysterical. I felt like I was really watching a father take a completely inaccurate but completely realistic view on his teenage hormone crazy daughter.



Author's Response:

I'm already worried about dealing with my daughter when she is a teenager.  I hardly understand her now and I can't imagine being a single dad who hasn't been living with his daughter until now. 

Poor Charlie has a long road ahead of him I fear and I'm not sure how much more he can take between these two.

As always thank you for the reviews!  Your support in this whole story has been more than I could have ever hoped for.

 

Jaime

Reviewer: lostinhishazeleyes (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

well that was very interesting...with the three chapters i had to read to get caught up it was wow. an i really hope that you enjoyed yourself in disney!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Disneyland was a lot of fun and I didn't want to come home but I had no choice.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the last three chapters.  More is coming soon and thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

Ok  great chapter   I am looking forward to the fishing trip.  



Author's Response:

Thank you and I hope that you enjoyed the fishing trip! 

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Monkey Man

Holy crap. That was freaking hilarious!! Absolutely fantastic!! LOLOLOL



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm happy that this is going over well.  I appreciate the review and hope that you have enjoyed the rest of the chapters as well.

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Get Out Now!

i really enjoyed this story would like to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope that you have read the other 14 chapters and that you are still enjoying it.  Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

Yes... Charlie and Edward fishing is going to be wonderful.  There were no more E/B moments though, and that's a sad thing.  We need to get through the fishing so that they can eventually continue to explore the guidebook.

 



Author's Response:

More E/B coming very soon (see Chapter 15 and Chapter 16 coming soon).  They will start working their way through the guidebook I promise!

Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

Ohh can't wait for fishing!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha..I hope you enjoyed it!

Thank you...thank you...thank you.  Can't seem to say that enough to you!

Jaime

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

Hey! I really enjoyed this chapter....I know some people don't appreciate multiple povs but I think they are really enjoyable. This was definitely a funny chapter and I can't wait for the fishing trip! Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input on the POV's.  I know there was a lot thrown into that chapter but that was just how it seemed to work.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review and I hope you enjoyed the fishing trip!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

cant wait to read about fishing.



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoyed it!  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: pink_sapphire (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

Emmett is just too funny!  I love how him and Edward are messing with each other!  Well written!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I never have really written Emmett as much as I have in this story and have found that he is a lot of fun to work with.  I'm glad that you are enjoying it and thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

Haha I luv it please update soon I cant wait to see what happens with Charlie.



Author's Response:

It's updated so hope you enjoyed the fishing with Charlie!

Thanks for the review and Chapter 16 will be coming soon.

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