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Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous
That was such a funny chapter.
I love it when you do Charlie's point of view.
I absolutely ADORE this story of yours! It's lighthearted and fun.
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Sequel pleaseeeee..... I'm enjoy reading this sooo much.
I was hoping to read about the dinner at this chap, but that's okay. And I really really like Edwards thought, lol.
Please UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:53 AM · On: You Have Got to Be Kidding Me!
Emmett is such a joy. :) <3
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Please continue! I've really enjoyed this story and look forward to every new chapter.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Please continue! I've really enjoyed this story and look forward to every new chapter.
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
another great chapter.
Reviewer: truelove4ever (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
continue this... or start a story line, just keep writing its so good, easily my fav.
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Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Ahhh, just continue it here!
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Ether or is fine with me as long as there is more right now I would say I lean towards taking this to the honeymoon, but hey I have no idea what your sequel would be.
LOL YES Finally calls him on the sleeping thing lets see him wake her up next time
Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Poor Charlie. :)
And I can't believe that you have already reached the 24th chapter. I remember when this story was just a wee little one-shot, but look what it has blossomed into.
I don't really have much of an opinion of whether to continue or make a sequel. As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading. :D
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Oh definately a sequel plus the add on and the six month honey moon on Isle Esme so Bella gets some sheet time. *snickers* This was a great chapter. I love Edward's monoglogue when they were in Victoria secrets because it was fantastically hilarious!!
Great writing!!
Jace
Reviewer: MaeCullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Like Your Surprise?
Very sexy and very funny!! I love it!
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Great chapter! It doesn't matter to me how you continue you the story. I will follow either way.
Reviewer: JillyReb (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Continue it here! But either way I will follow!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
I vote sequel. This fic is quite long already, you can have a nice ending, which everyone will love, and then begin fresh. Yes, definitely sequel. I liked this chapter a lot--Charlie made me LOL, and the shopping trip was much fun--Edward losing his cool in Victoria's Secret--perfect. Can't wait for the upcoming dinner w/Charlie.
Reviewer: hasmyheart (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Oooh great chapter!! P.S. "Let's Go to the Mall" is definitely a song that will stay in your head for awhile haha
As for continuing the storyline or sequel- I can't say either way. I guess I would say it's up to your judgment as the writer. But either way, keep writing please!
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Keep it going! This story has had me in stitches so many times. :)
Reviewer: Merciless Vixen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
This is a fantastic story! I'd love to see a sequel, I generally don't like when a story gets really far away from the original premise. No matter what you decide though, I'm sure it'll be great! :)
Reviewer: Babby B (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
I think you should continue:)
its realllyyy good
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
wow that was a great read I can not wait to read the next chapter
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Breaking All the Rules
Wow, Bella killed the mood in the sex scene.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
As much as I enjoy sexin' as the next pervy person, I'm glad to see they were able to go through the whole day without it. Just because. It's easy to get too caught up in sex and not the emotional connection sometimes. And just spending time together for the sake of being together!
I'd love for you to continue but only if you really are excited to continue it. I hate it when an author continues because of the pressure to continue but their hearts aren't really into it. You can usually tell from the writing and the less frequent updating. You shouldn't have to force yourself to write something you don't want to!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
I would love if there was a sequel!
Reviewer: Sam362 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
Either one, extension or sequel works for me :)
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
I am interested in the coversation with Charlie..is he honestly going to open up his home to Edward...if so, that would be an interesting extension of this story.
Not to mention Emmetts book has some intrigue...for the vampire in us!
:-)
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