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Reviews For Shotgun Charlie
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Mad hunting skills

What is really going to happen?  Is Edward deluded? :)



Author's Response:

Ha...I think Edward is a bit clouded at the moment.  He has other things on his mind.  Thanks for taking the time to review.

 

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.

my face hurts. 

Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:41 PM · On: The Beginning of the End

Other than the epi u need a part 2 to this story. I don't want it to end. I want to know what "accident" Charlie would be told and everything. Also I was wondering, what happened to Jake?

Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:24 PM · On: On Our Way(VJ)

What happened in Biology class? They did it in the class? I dont remember that? LOL! I love it!

Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Breaking All the Rules

sheesh im worn out after all this sexin. I think bella is gonna be raw by the end of this story lol

Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Monkey Man

omg love your pervy emmett LOL

Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun

lmao this story is FUNNY

Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Get Out Now!

im just starting this and really excited!! The babys napping, its a nasty dull day outside and a new story..close to perfect!! :) lol

Reviewer: TinaT (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:47 AM · On: The Beginning of the End

I really enjoyed that but I would love to see the coming days after Bella's change



Author's Response:

I'm working on it and we will see what happens after her change.

Thanks for taking the time to reivew.

Jaime

Reviewer: xxSamanthaxx (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:04 AM · On: The Beginning of the End

I must say that you are a very talented writer.
i typically don't type up reviews but I have decided that since i am so addicted that i might as well give you my opinion.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review when you normally don't.  It means a lot to me to know that you enjoy what I write so thank you again!

Jaime

Reviewer: EmeraldRain (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Monkey Man

lol im reading this at 1am in the morning, while the rest of my house is asleep, so what do i do? Burst out laughing when alice throws her potato over her shoulder ;p i didnt see it coming and i couldnt help myself! twilighted.net is down but im reaing on fanfic and cant remember my log in to reply at the appropriate place. this fic is awesome!

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:54 AM · On: I Do

loved it all, so beautiful & even more special as that was also my wedding song albeit the ronan keaton version

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:21 AM · On: What's Behind The Door

fantastic, thats the kinda the proposal i wish they'd had in the books cause lets face it who wouldnt want edward proposing to them & who in their right mind would say no lol

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:28 PM · On: A Vampire and a Werewolf Walk Into a Bar

omg almost pissed myself when emmett started on about the badgers & then alice almost breaking the window with hte potato, absolute gold lol

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Read Any Good Books Lately?

emmett is f**kin hilarious

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:28 PM · On: It's going to take more than bars on the window

i dont know whos funnier emmett or charlie haha

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Get Out Now!

woohoo lemons in the 1st chapter way to go



Author's Response:

Haha...needed to start it with a bang!

Thanks for the review.

Jaime

Reviewer: Sarenyia (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.

thru? or through?

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:05 PM · On: The Beginning of the End

good good stuff.. can't wait to see the epilogue... sad to see this peice of fun end :(



Author's Response:

I'm sad too but I hope that I can cover everything that I want to in this epilogue.  It is coming very soon!  Thank you very much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:46 PM · On: I Do

Your story has been delightful all along, but what I've enjoyed more than anything are the little funny tidbits you've inserted, all most as after thoughts, along the way (I've commented on the fish joke, Esme lifting Jasper, etc.)  I LOVED when Charlie handed over the shotgun.  Perfection!

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:54 PM · On: What's Behind The Door

I loved this version of the engagement.  It's much more how I would've reacted if Edward Cullen proposed to me :) 



Author's Response:

I know, I mean you are willing to become a vampire but marriage is a no go.  My thought was that they loved each other and they should celebrate it!

Thank you for all the great reviews.  I'm working on response and appreciate each and every one of them.

Jaime

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Random Observations

Great job with all the POV's.  My favorite was hands down Mrs. Beasley.  Totally creative there!  That might be a Twilighted first!



Author's Response:

Haha...thank you.  THought I would mix it up a bit!

I appreciate you taking the time to leave so many reviews.  I am slowly but surely getting around to them.

Jaime

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Damn Manic Depressive Vampire

Esme is so awesome!  I've read more fanfic than I can remember, but this was her single most awesome scene ever!

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:42 PM · On: The Beginning of the End

That was a fantastic story.  I especially loved this chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  There will be more very soon.

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Jaime

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:30 PM · On: What to do?

I'm with Bella, I don't understand why Emmet wants to know so badly.  I know Emmet is a big tease and he enjoys getting a rise out of others, but his behavior is borderline obsessive.

Charlies commentary was hilarious.  He really does steal this fic!  :)

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