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Reviewer: carolinagirl2011 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:03 AM · On: Monkey Man
Oh, Emmett he was so funny in this chapter. I couldn't stop giggling.....
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 08:43 AM · On: Oh Look at Me, I'm a Sparkly Super Strong Vampire! (VJ - Got Milk?)
Wow! Just when I thought I had read all the "good" stuff on this site, I found yours! A little sleep deprivation was well worth reading this in it's entirety at one time. I really liked this story, and especially enjoyed the noticeable absence of Jacob and the wolves. It was a real relief not to have to deal with the triangle/wolf angst and simply enjoy B&E's love story. I wish Alice & Jasper had been more in the forefront but Emmett & Rosalie more than made up for the loss. Emmett was well-written just as he should be: 50% asswipe and 50% caring brother. Loved horny Edward and sex-crazed Newborn Bella! My only critical comment is that your Beta(s) didn't do a very good job cleaning up sentence structure and spelling but that's minor. Great - and fabulously long - story!
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous
I am so glad I found a fun happy story that makes me laugh!!! I have really enjoyed hearing Charlies pov!
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Monkey Man
I love Emmett! This story is so entertaining!!! Thanks for the work.
Reviewer: Edward_Dream (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
tHIS HAS TO HAVE BEEN THE MOST TASTY OF AL THE FAN FIC. i WANTED TO BE BELLA IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE!
gOOD WRITING i LOVE THE WAY CHARLIE SEES THE CULLEN FAMILY AFTER THE DINNER. gREAT BOOOK i LOVED IT. PASSING IT ON TO MY FRIENDS
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Oh Look at Me, I'm a Sparkly Super Strong Vampire! (VJ - Got Milk?)
Really great story. One of my very favorites ever.
Reviewer: Katrina117 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Oh Look at Me, I'm a Sparkly Super Strong Vampire! (VJ - Got Milk?)
I really loved this story. It was at times funny, sexy, heart breaking and touching. Really amazing, and I hope you continue to write Twilight fanfiction for a long time to come.
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:42 PM · On: It's going to take more than bars on the window
I love that you added Emmett at th end.
Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Oh Look at Me, I'm a Sparkly Super Strong Vampire! (VJ - Got Milk?)
Well, this epilogue is somewhat weird (the whole thing with separating B and E). I know that this fic is based on ooc fact but separating E from Bella in time when she needed him most? I guess you were fed up with angst-free plot.
Now I've got an idea: this epilogue could be used as a base for angsty outtake. Let's say that Bella would come to a conclusion that Edward doesn't love her anymore (because she is vampire) a ran away?
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Charlie's Dream
Poor, poor Charlie. That dream was hilarious.
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous
Aww! Poor Charlie, but the chapter was awfully sweet.
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:47 AM · On: You Have Got to Be Kidding Me!
Yes, as I said before, Emmett is truly evil. But I love his POV!
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Who Knew Edward Had It In Him?
LMAO! Just awesome!
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Read Any Good Books Lately?
Emmett is truly evil and yet soo funny. His thoughts are hilarious. Love this chapter.
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Monkey Man
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Charlie´s POV is fantastic. I still have trouble breathing from laughing so hard.
And Emmett! Edward should really have known better and not asked him. But I want a copy of the book! LOL!
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Mad hunting skills
That was clearly Charlie at his best. He definitely had me in hysterics. But their school day was awesome, too. LOL!
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun
OMG! I don´t know what´s more funny. Emmett´s suggestive comments or Charlie´s dreams. 'Fishing and torturing Edward.' You definitely had me at this point.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Um...we were just having sex.
ok, when i read the summary bookmarked the story and then decided to read the first chapter. and i'm glad i did, this was hilarious and i really cannot wait to read what happens next. im glad edward went through with it and also despite bellas mortification she was honest. "we were just having sex" only "just" lol like any dad wants to hear that. great first chapter, definitely adding this to my favorites.
Reviewer: Edwardstruelove (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Forever Isn't Enough
yay! 2000th review! lol... aww i really love charlies POV! he always wants whats best for bella and sometimes he says the funniest things! love this story ;)
Reviewer: Edwardstruelove (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Mmm...zebras (V to the J)
this was a great chapter! awesome job!
Reviewer: Edwardstruelove (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast
i just love this fic and the proposal was just soooo romantic! looking foward to the reaction at school :)
Reviewer: Edwardstruelove (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Let's Go to the Mall
yay for bonding at the mall! that was too funny in victorias secret!
Reviewer: Edwardstruelove (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous
aww poor charlie... i cant help but feel sorry for him because he is losing his daughter in his eyes. you really did a great job with cPOV i really enjoyed this chapter! :)
Reviewer: Edwardstruelove (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Who Knew Edward Had It In Him?
i love hearing emmetts POV great job! it was hilarious wen Rose says
“I’m really going to have to rethink my opinion of Edward"
Reviewer: Edwardstruelove (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Read Any Good Books Lately?
awww poor eddie anyway great fic so far!
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