Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:52 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Jacob isn't a morning person, or maybe Bella said something in her sleep that upset him. She can't really say since he left without a word. She isn't very happy about it and might even reconsider movie night.
As for Edward, he got to see more of Bella than he thought he would, not that he complained about that part. What he didn't like much was seeing a guy coming over to her house. He can't say anything though, especially since he has been stalking her. What would she say to that? Will he keep doing it?
Guess we have to wait...
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:43 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
can't wait for more
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:43 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you kindly! :)) Keep reviewing!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:41 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
Six years when you're six and twelve is a lot, after twelve years or a bit more... perhaps not so much.
The one who observed, then became the observed. Who would have thought... Edward after some time and lots of thinking.
As for Bella, she stayed, not exactly for Edward, but the idea of him sometime coming back wasn't that terrible.
They are neighbors again, have they changed too much? Will they find out? We'll have to wait and see...
I like the idea of the story, I do hope you continue it.
Author's Response: The whole age-thing here is indeed very relevant. Bella noticed him first, and he just (understandably!) considered her a pest. When the time came for him to notice her, he was already too old (and she not old enough, YET) for him to do anything than feel supremely guilty. He still hasn't gotten over the feeling that she is too young for him, just because he guiltily remembers her as a younger girl. I guess some people might find this setting disturbing, but I've always considered it plain human. It's important that (in this case) Edward recognized that it wasn't alright to act on it (then), but it doesn't make him a pervert, either. Human beings are sexual beings from the cradle to the grave. Oops, did I just totally go into lecture mode? Sooooo didn't mean to.Sorry!
Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:10 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Like it! Keep it up!
Reviewer: Kyvak (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:44 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
NOOO! Edward can't think Jacob and Bella are together!!! And why was Jacob so weird? Hmm... I wonder.... Oh never mind =]
Great story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Jacob heard something he didn't like, you might have suspected. Thanks for reviewing, I hope you keep reading as well as reviewing ;)
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:35 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Hmmmm....so Edward went to the library........and now thinks Bella has a BF. Time to talk to her don't you think? He needs to know Jake is just a good friend. (maybe not so good.....take the damn videos back Jake! geez!)
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:23 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Keep going so we can see what happens!
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:14 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
besides the story being great so far you picked three of most played songs on my ipod just awesome
Author's Response: Really?? I wonder if the next ones will be on your ipod :D
Reviewer: Arr (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 05:40 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Oooh, I like. Well, everything except Jacob. Can't wait to see how Edward will reveal himself
Author's Response: Yea, no one ever likes Jacob (except Team Jacob). Poor guy! Thanks for reviewing :))
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 05:21 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Humph!! Not so sure about that Jacob. Great installment.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 04:59 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Muah hahaha Stalker Edward is to funny hes so torn I really can't wait to see how you have them hook up how you have fit in his world. And WTF was up with Jacob did he see something naked in the neighbors house next store and feel guilty because he liked what he saw muah hahaha sorry couldn't help myslef with that option lmao! Post again soon great Chap!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 04:38 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
Okay so a nice misunderstanding, I'm mighty curious what will play out next.
Reviewer: carolbenatti (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 11:45 AM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
Loved it!
Can´t wait for more
xx
Reviewer: hey333777 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 09:55 AM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
I am so excited about this story i love a domward, my fave. Been looking for a new dom story so thank you.
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 09:45 AM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
humm.interesting...
Reviewer: pussycat (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 04:57 AM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
LOVE IT!!!!!! I am so eager to read more so please please please post more!
Reviewer: TeamTaylor2010 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 10:58 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREPLEASE!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 10:39 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
well usually a first fic...from an author i haven't heard of yet...well let's just say I don't expect much (so i'm not too disappointed) :) it's a good thing I was pleasantly surprised.
Author's Response: Well I guess it's time you heard of me ;)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 10:34 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
I'm really pleasantly surprised...I really like this story and can't wait to see what you do next....don't keep us waiting too long, i hope :)
Author's Response: Hmmm. Should I be asking what you were expecting then? :D The next instalment should be up soon...
Reviewer: TwilightTucker (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 09:57 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
Yes, yes, yes....I'm ready for the rest. Bring it on, quickly please.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 09:34 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
Interesting start. I am looking forward to seeing how this story and their relationship progresses.
Reviewer: gracedout (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 09:30 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
LOVE TTTTTHHHHIS!
Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 09:25 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
Continue' por favor. I like it. Some interesting possibilities
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 09:23 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
I would like to see more. I vote for more. I'm pretty intrigued.
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