Very cute story

What a sweet little story!   I love that Edward wasn't a big-time stud like he usually is...just a nice, normal geeky guy who loves beautiful Bella.   So glad they found their way back to one another and continued to live their lives as if they had never been apart.

And you know I'm going to say it...would love to read more of this!  ;-)

aww...so lovely. Sweet and pure.

OMG THAT WAS THE SWEETEST STORY I"VE READ I BELIEVE IN TRUE LOVE FOR EVER EVEN IF IT HAS ELUDED ME IN MY LIFE IT"S NICE TO READ ABOUT

That was lovely.

Aw that's so cute & sweet but funny too: After I realized that she was a girl and not someone to take me to heaven, I properly introduced myself. When I held out my hand, she blushed and kissed my cheek instead. Since then, there hadn't been a day we'd been apart. She was my best friend and the girl I was going to marry. She called me silly when I called her Mrs. Cullen one time by accident. She kissed my cheek again right after that though, so I knew she liked it.

These two are so cute I swear: Her eyes narrowed and her nose got all scrunched up as her face turned red. "Whatever you can do, I can do, too."

"Maybe some things," I said again, brushing past her and into the house. "But I'm supposed to be stronger than you. I'm supposed to take care of you." I ignored the way her face got all soft and her mouth parted as if to say something. "You gonna get me a Band-Aid?"

"Fine," she mumbled. She led me through her house and stopped in the bathroom near her room. "Sit." She pointed to the edge of the tub as she opened up the medicine cabinet. Taking out a few items, she lined them up on the counter.

"All right," she said, taking my hand in hers. "It's going to sting a little."

"You said that already."

"You're cranky," she said. "My dad gets like that all the time. Whenever he's been in the sun too long or when he's hungry."

"I've been up since five this morning."

"Oh."

"Yeah," I mumbled and hissed when she pushed something wet over my hand. "Ow!" I tried to pull my hand away.

"Stop being a baby," she said.

lol and aw: "I won't do it anymore," she whispered. "Scare you, I mean."

"I like hearing you laugh," I said, shrugging and blushing. "It's okay."

Both our stomachs growled at the same time. Giggling, I ran after Bella, telling her that the mountain lion in my stomach would get hers first. We tumbled into the living room, laughing and tickling each other.

Aw Edward is such a sweetie: "It stands for the heart you'll always hold in your hands," I mumbled. I had practiced that for ages in front of the mirror. I messed up, I was supposed to look at her and say it loudly. Instead, I mumbled it like a dummy.

aw you're killing me with sweetness and I like it: She smiled sweetly. "You're the only one that gets me," she said. "Promise you'll be here with me, forever."

I nodded. "I pinky promise."

She scowled. "Pinky promises are for losers," she said, rolling her eyes. She sat up and told me to do the same. "This is the way to do it."

Holding her palm up, I copied her. She spat in her hand and waited for me to do the same. I did, only because it was her. She took my hand and our spit smashed together. We both made faces, because it was gross.

"Forever," she whispered.

"Forever," I repeated.

I meant it, too.

omg I actually teared up when they both found out Edward was moving you got me caught up in their little romance damn you lol: On the last day, we sat by our tree and shared our first real kiss. I told her I loved her and that I would forever. She smiled and whispered those words to me, too. Hand in hand, we walked to my house where my parents were waiting.

One look at Bella and my mom started to cry. Her arms circled around Bella and squeezed. "As soon as we get there, he'll call you, sweetie."

"You got email to talk every day," Charlie said, giving me a small smile.

Bella rolled her eyes and shook her head. "I need a computer for that, Dad."

Charlie's smile got bigger. "Didn't I tell you? I went and bought you one today."

Bella squealed and jumped into her Charlie's arms. "Thank you, thank you," she said, kissing him on his cheek. She turned and ran into my arms. "I hope you get a computer soon."

"His uncle has one," my mother said, smiling. "We'll get one in a few months."

"Emails are nice," I said and pulled Bella's chin up so that she'd look at me. "But your voice would be better."

OMG I loved it it was so beautiful I feel sorry I already voted I know I could have voted for this one but I was too lazy to keep on reading my bad. Damn it. I really loved this o/s but I'm not surprised I always love your writing so there it is. Until next time.

I absolutely loved this! Such a sweet story!

Loved it!!

Loved this!!!!!!!

This is one of the sweetest stories I've ever read. Thank you for sharing.

Love It with a capital L! Would love to see this as a mulit chap following them through college and marriage etc.