Reviewer: katee412 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
I really enjoyed this :)
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 Profusely Apologize
Reading this on my ereader so I don't get the opportunity to review as often - sorry. I've come to the conclusion that your talents are wasted writing fan fic. You should be writing stuff that you get paid for - change the obvious SM stuff and get your writing published (I know, it's not as easy as that). On the other hand, if you did that then I wouldn't be reading this, and my life would be empty. :)
I love medieval stuff - so much so that when my teenage daughter was studying history I had to control myself and not complete her medieval assignment for her - and I don't mind that you're not being accurate (I wouldn't really know anyway) - and why let facts get in the way of a good story.
Lyn
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Covertly Strike
love this story!!!
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2012 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
This story was amazing. I feel the need to thank you for it! I have not been so exhausted from lack of sleep since I had newborns. I just couldn't find a good stopping point!!! This story was completely engrossing! I absolutely loved it! I felt so much of the story. Your writing is amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm really glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2012 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
Terrific story! The names alone were entertaining (a valiant Volvo no less with the beautiful Vanquish as the back-up steed!) And his pack of dogs with the dynamics within the pack, constantly these little details cause me to smile. Esme absolutely rocks my socks especially chapter 9 when Edward Anthony gets a proper dressing down.
Historical fiction has always been my favorite and this was an excellent and well written story for the genre. The Twilight characters allowed their faces to be easily pictured in my mind in the roles you cast them to play. In this world of Twilight fanfiction I don't think the characters were overly OOC and what was, such as Edward's Casanova ways, was necessary for the story and historical context. Overall brilliantly done; this story could easily be a published book.
Author's Response: Awww - thanbks for the kind words! I appreciate it! Glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: TheNanaUsako (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Covertly Strike
Gooood I've read it all and it was fantastic! You write amazingly and the story was so well written under all aspects! Now it's time for me to start another one of your stories!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: ninabella (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Humbly Rectify
I dont know if you are still reading your reviews... But would you please tell me if Jane And her tea have anything to do with Isabella not getting pregnant?!?!
Author's Response: You just gotta keep reading! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: roxxychik06 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Gracefully Endure
Twilight......*giggle*
It's Jane in the bedroom with the tea......I
Reviewer: gez (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
amazing. You have written a truly splendid story that has kept me hooked.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Covertly Strike
wow.
This is my third time rereading your story, and it is honestly good as the last two times.
This story is by far the most incredible fanfiction I have ever read on twilighted- a true gem. Absolutely fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: flutterback (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Covertly Strike
Such a good story! I am a sucker for period pieces, and yours is so well written and detailed. And do I get a brownie for knowing it was the DAMN TEA THE WHOLE TIME! (Kinda glad Edward burned her at the stake. That probably makes me a horrible person, but...)
You wrote such true and amazing characters. I teared up when King Edward went to march agaist Volterra after Bella was kidnapped and the townspeople were there to help the fight. And the part about the Angela becoming the concubine, very harsh to deal with emotionally, but true to the period and the circumstances.
Wonderful, wonderful work. Thanks so much for sharing your story!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed it! Feel free to collect a point. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
thank you for a wonderful read. abk
Reviewer: SheaBunny (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
Please publish this. Thank you once again for keeping me anxious through this well scrolled story.
Author's Response: Awww - thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: SheaBunny (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Nearly Destroyed
Please for the love of all holy get Jane to STOP feeding her that damn tea babe!!!
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
Fantastic story. Absolutely adored it!
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Utterly Destroy
holy crap- you had her drawn and quartered? you are one bloodthirsty fanfic writer! this could totally be published...
Author's Response: I like a little blood...wait until I start writing gladiators... ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Finally Discover
WELL DUH!!!
I tell you, it's all of those Beatrice Small books...an enemy did it to one of the heroines once...but I can't remember which. YAY!!! No more Egg Blocking!!!
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 24-Lamentably Arrange
Oh for Godssake, quit drinking the flipping tea bella!
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 18- Inelegantly Fail
Wow...Issy B went from 0 to 200 with a stable wall fuck.
Oh yeah-and I think she should have a "man root" in the morning...I read that once in a Beatrice Small book-the queen of historical smut, that lady is!
Reviewer: nikim (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Reluctantly Wager
I just wanted to let you know that I enjoy your writtling so very much!! Thank you for sharing you mind with us!
Author's Response: You are very welcome! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
Wow, very nice. What a great story. I got way behind in the great post-a-week of the last few months, but I've always known I'd finish it, so it was actually sort of nice to read it all at once :)
Thanks again for posting, this was such a cool and interesting story. Great job, great ending, thanks for seeing it through :)
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2011 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Violently Captured
Wow... dear heavens. Time to get caught up on this story!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
I saw this story a few months ago and was very intrigued by the synopsis. I waited though, becuase I am continually frustrated by stories that completely draw me in, then leave me hanging for the concluding chapters. I am very glad that I kept an eye out for the conclusion of this story. I don't know if I would have made it past concubine-gate if I hadn't known that I could get to the next chapters immediately. You weave an intricate tapestry. I kept comparing the plot lines to those in the "The Game of Thrones". I am anxious to check out more of your other work. Thanks for the fun.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Lovingly Live
This story was really good. I have read a few of your other stories and when I saw this one I couldn't wait for you to finish it so I could start reading. It had lots of twists and turns and was really entertaining to read. I admit I did freak out a bit about the concubine thing. It was really hard to read because I don't see Edward ever agreeing to something like that. That (in my opinion) is what makes him different from other guys. But the way you did it made sense even though it was still hard to swallow. It made it bearable because #1, he was forced into doing it. #2 you could really really tell that he didn't want to do it. #3 Bella excepted the fact that he needed an heir and she wasn't able to provide one and as hard as it was for her to except, she was putting his needs ahead of her's. #4 when the truth really came out Edward was devastated that he did that and hurt Isabella in that way. You could totally tell he never once got enjoyment out of what he was being forced to do and he was having a very hard time forgiving himself for doing it. All of that was very obvious in your story and it justified what he did (for lack of a better word). Anyway, I am really wanting to read the rest of your stories but your warning about "Tempt my Tongue" has me nervous. Thanks for the great read.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed UC! Thanks a lot for the review! TMT should make you nervous... ;)
Reviewer: ChocolateBliss (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Finally Discover
First time commenting - but i had to say that I KNEW IT!! SHe gave it to her as soon as she got there I frikkin knew it lol
excellent story
Author's Response: It's just alike a horror movie, huh? No no - don't go behind THAT door!!! LOL
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