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Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 02:53 PM · On: Reason to Live
Twins!? Wow. That was a good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: amandao (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Reason to Live
OMG... im in COMPLETLY in love with this series!!!cPLZZZZwrite more
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so much...it makes me happy!!
Reviewer: Bubblegum2006 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Gravity
Omg I love your storys you have to write the next chapter soon :D
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 09:05 PM · On: Gravity
Wow! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Gravity
"I didn't want to tell you this before because it's harsh, but if he doesn't comply, you have to leave him. You can't keep torturing yourself for a man you love but don't know completely." Speak about being between the rock and the hard place...
'He stayed quiet, but I already knew what he had done. It was one thing to know the man you loved and married had a dirty past that involved a lot of women, but something completely different knowing he'd had sex with a girl without her consent.' :-O
A really sad chapter. What Kaleb did was huge; can't even say I'm mad at Derek about the situation. Besides, I think what really messed it all was Kaleb's stubborn insistence in hiding something when there was obviously something being hiden. I hope it makes sense. :-]
This one will take a while... At least I hope it is just a while. :(
Author's Response: Yeah, what made everything worse was Kaleb's secrecy, but what he did was still very shocking and wrong... anyways thanks a lot and I'll try to post the next one in the next few days...
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Gravity
awww, this is so sad!!!! i figured that it was something like that, but still!!! D:
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review!! A sad chapter but i hope you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 08:09 PM · On: Gravity
Why did you have to make it rape? why did you not warn us that there would be sexual violence? I am a survivour of a gang rape and do not read about rape. I could have skipped the chapter.
good luck on your story.
please please in the future warn people
Author's Response: I didn't say anything beforehand because it would spoil the secret...I didn't think it was necessary as I don't actually describe the rape, just say that it happened.
Thanks anyways and I hope this didn't ruin your perspective of the story, I just present things to happened in everyday life and that could happen to anyone. Nothing like this is going to happen again...
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Rising Worries
i loved it, but when is Kaleb going 2 tell Ami his secret???
Author's Response: Thanks a lot and sorry for responding to this so late... I already posted the next chapter, just in case you wanted to know...
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Rising Worries
Heavy. Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:49 AM · On: Rising Worries
'Throughout the whole love making, I felt something weird, like the man I brought home wasn't entirely my husband, like something inside of him changed when he attacked Derek.' Hmm, ominous. :-[
'Luke, who had initially acted with indifference, was now giving Kaleb the cold shoulder. I guess the shock of almost losing his brother had finally caught up with him.' Interesting, considering his last thoughts on the subject. I would like to see his POV about it.
'"He's hiding something from me, and I think Derek knows what it is," I said, voicing out loud what had been bothering me since Kaleb attacked Derek.' Uh-oh! Here comes the bomb the summary promised. I need to find a foxhole... :-{
On one side, Ami, determined to uncover the truth. On the other, Derek, willing to tell the truth if asked. I take it won't be long now.
I'm slightly surprised that Derek isn't up for vengeance. However, he is still taking pleasure from making Kaleb squirm, as he was before the attack. Still a jerk! :-/
My imagination is running amok trying to figure out what could the big secret be... :)
Author's Response: Luke is very confused: in one part he doesn't regret having those thoughts that Derek deserved to be attacked, but he worries that his family could have suffered a disaster. He still cares how his mom and dad are going to be...
Derek enjoys more torturing people than to just ruin their lives quickly...
As for the secret... it comes in the next chapter!!
Thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Past Secrets
:( that was sad!!!! why did Darek have 2 be such a jerk???
luvz u always, bri
~GODBLESS~
Author's Response: Its a tradition to have a jerk of a big brother... Hehe!!
Thanks a lot for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Past Secrets
Ami and Kaleb just came back, and Luke already got the difference in Ami. Just one month. The effect was faster than I thought!
And that talk about the will to phase...I sure am rooting for Ami never lose hers. Why would she? Wolves generally stop phasing to age with their loved ones. But, with Kaleb, this is not an issue.
'He tended to get frisky in the weirdest places-in the back of the store Andy worked in, behind the school's bleachers, once in the back of Jared's car (they didn't do it again there as Jared almost caught them) and so many other random places.' And to think that Thomas, before Andy (a unashamed girl; lucky boy!), was always weirded when the sex topic popped in the Pack mind... ;)
Derek...Is there anyone (aside from Sam and Emily) who doesn't feel aversion for this guy? From what I saw up to now, I doubt it. So much so that, I admit, I'm pleased with the way Kaleb teached him the reality of the old legends. X-)
Sam and Emily must have done something very wrong when raising him. This dude is trash! I hope he is too old to phase. To have him in your head would be worse than having Taylor in his bad times.
And I feel Luke is right in thinking he have hidden reasons to come back. :-/
I wonder what is this secret Kaleb have that can threaten his happiness with Ami. What can be worse than the way he treated girls? Was he a murderer? A drug dealer?
Finally, I'm curious to know what little Sophie did see or not in that confusion of fur, claws and teeth. :)
Author's Response: Luke knows Ami very well, just one tiny change will get noticed.
Everyone is more scared that Ami's priority is going to change...that if she gets pregnant the pack is not going to be that important to her....
Well Thomas now knew that it was really hard to resist the temptations of imprint... also he is a teenager with raging hormones.
You're the only one who says that Kaleb did well in attacking Derek...Hehe!!
Kaleb's secret is complicated and you'll find out soon enough... as for Sophie she did see the wolves but remember she was only two...
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 09:21 AM · On: Past Secrets
Thanks for another great chapter! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks to you for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 06:05 PM · On: First Born
I can't put my finger on why, but I don't like Derek. Such a pleasant fella... :-P
' No matter how many times Derek avoided us and ignored his family, they were always going to take him back with open arms and smiles on their faces, as he was always going to be their first born.' Luke shouldn't feel so down. This is probaly more like the parable of the Prodigal Son; rejoice for the return of the absent son.
Then again, with Sam, I cannot be sure... :-/
Author's Response: Hehe... Luke can't help but feel jealous of his older brother... and Derek doesn't help the case by being such an as.... Anyways, thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 05:09 PM · On: Baby Talk
'Even though she never said it out loud, I could always see the jealousy in her eyes - she was scared that I would take Dad away from her.' Silly girl! As if it was possible... Maybe in a few decades they will get along better. ;)
Oook, I admit, Taylor seems less stupid now. So, unless he does something to ruin my mood again, I'm officially sorry for him. :(
'On our way to the airport and during the flight, I couldn't stop thinking about whether I had made the right decision in letting Taylor go.' What about that? What else could she do? Give him false hope?
Good to see them having a nice time (to put mildly) and Ami with such a nice project! I wish all the luck to the future parents; cause they will need it! After all, our heroes lives are never easy. :)
Author's Response: Emma was a very insecure person and she took that to her vampire self...
You need to remember that Taylor is still a kid... he still have a lot of mistakes to make.
Ami couldn't do anything, but she still feels bad for how hurt Taylor was... she can't help it.
Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 10:50 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Wedding
Intriguing prologue...
Oh, I bet Alice was frustated for not having free reign on the wedding planning. :)
As it seems, Emma don't have a temper only when discovering previously unknown children from her mate. Hehehe! At least Seth will never get bored! :-P
'The ceremony was performed by a minister from Forks and he kept it brief.' Could he be Angela's father, I wonder? Hmm, nah, he would recognize the Cullens.
'Taylor was looking grim, and as he walked out of the gazebo, I saw his figure shaking slightly. Poor kid; even though before he left he said he was okay with Ami's decision, but it was obvious that he was still hurting badly.' You could make Taylor find his imprint. Nothing better to heal unrequited love than requited love. Unless you mean him to create more trouble... :-]
Thanks for the happy moment, Andy. I imagine things will not go that smooth for long? P-)
Author's Response: Well I always like to attract people with the prologue, hope it did its work...
Yeah, Alice was frustrated but she was smart not to mess with an alpha.
No the minister was not Angela's dad... just another minister.
Taylor's story is still a mystery to me, it will come in time...I hope!!
The thanks is to you for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 05:06 PM · On: First Born
Such a cute chapter. I loved seeing Luke spend time with Sophie. It really makes me wonder what their future is going go be like. It's going to be interesting to see Derek's interactions. Love the visuals!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot... well Luke and Sophie are going to have their ups and downs like everyone who had imprinted... its never going to be easy.
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 07:48 PM · On: Baby Talk
Wow! A baby already? Well, I guess not right away. :) As always, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Because Ami have to stop phasing they need to decide things with time.
Thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: everblue1037 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:46 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Wedding
iam so happy i came across this. i was so sad when hidden truth ended i cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Well I had said I was going to post the sequel... I keep to my promises. Hope you enjoy it and thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 08:09 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Wedding
I am so happy this story is finally here! I missed these characters! You always leave me wanting more. I don't know why but Taylor is my favorite. I hope we finally get to see him find happiness. I can't wait to read more of Luke too. :) And that was a beautiful wedding!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so much. There is going to be a bonus chapter in Taylor's POV but its not going to say much. He's going to appear later in the story and I do have something special for him.
Thanks for reading always leaving your support...
Reviewer: Tysonlane (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 06:14 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Wedding
Woo-hoo, THE sequel! Excited for the story to continue on. Wonder what you have in store for us this time!?
Nice treat with the wedding visual too!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for following the sequel. There are going to be some interesting stuff, from angst to happy moments. Hope you enjoy it!!
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