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Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 21
4/27/11 (21)
Seems like we're getting to the meat of the story now.
When will E wake up? His mouth & behavior just keep getting him in deeper shit. He's going to have a long way to go to dig himself out to even be considered a human being again. Maybe he doesn't deserve B? I guess only time will tell.
Although, I hope this doesn't turn into a sixty-some chapter story to see if they get a HEA.
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 21
OMG. Well you know Edward needs to hit rock bottom and then maybe clean himself up first before he could try to win her back. So messed up!
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 21
I thought we were at the bottom with the last chapter but obviously not. Hopefully, this is it and he can get some help even if it cost the band. Jacob's reaction was well deserved.
Reviewer: c4k (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 20
Firstly I apologise for not posting a review for any other chapter...I've just been too caught up in the story and kept clicking the "Next" button haa.
Now Review time...
That was awesome! When she was singing the song and breaking down was so chilling and heartbreaking. I loved it. Kinda want to know what it was like from Edward's pov?
The rest of the story has had me on the edge of my seat and can't wait for more!
Your writing is beautiful and your characterisations are so real!
Whew I sit waiting anxiously for your next update :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for your kind words! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 20
You really write such gut wrenching scenes well. Can't wait for the climb up as this certainly is the bottom!!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wow...
Author's Response: I hope that's a good wow? lol
Reviewer: Starglow31 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
That is not a tear, just an eyelash in my eye. Wonderfully done! I was listening to Kree Woods's song Man of Many Faces while reading this and it was a surprisingly good fit. Can't wait for the next update :-)
Author's Response: Ohh I just looked up at that song and you're right! I like it!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 20
and i've read it again, and i'm more pissed than i was the first time! arrggghhhhh
Reviewer: ashleighbabe (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 20
OMG!! I wanted to cry, but didn't... I really liked this, finally Bella did something about it!!
Author's Response: Yup, she finally learned the truth. Bella may be forgiving and want to work on the relationship with all the other little things Edward had done to her...but even she has a hard limit.
Reviewer: ree-ree09 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 20
Oh Jebus the tears...I'm a mess :'( That was amazing! Way beyond amazing :L I LOVE how fast you update! I really just adore this story <3
Author's Response: Thank you :) The secret to how fast I update is actually because I have up to Chapter 23 already written and posted on FF.net lol. Once it all gets caught up on here, I won't be as fast.
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 20
And he still tried to blame jake! No don't misunderstand, I LOATHE jake in any form, but even that would be a better choice at this point. Can't wait to see where you land these two.
Author's Response: Yeah, Jake's a good guy in this fic - not Twilight Jake lol. (But don't get me wrong, he's not good enough for this to spin into a B&J story lol)
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 20
Love it
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 16
Why does everyone enable that shithead?
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 19
Why do so many AH stories have Cheatward. I don't see how any woman could EVER take a cheater back. And how DARE the rest of them keep a secret from her? What assholes.
That said, don't let her get involved with Jake. Ick.
Reviewer: katiej1477 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 20
Don't worry we know you'd never steer us wrong. I trust you when you say they'll find their way back to each other one way or another. And are you gonna have a Bella/Jake thing? Strangely, I'm not opposed to the idea with this Jacob.
Author's Response: LOL - you're one of the few people who wants a Bella/Jake thing. I wouldn't be opposed to it either. I think you'll see in the next two chapters how I handle it :)
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 20
4/18/11
Chapter 20
I'm sitting here bawling my eyes out, trying to type this through my tears. This has been, by far, one of the most emotional stories I've read.
Bella was faced with the one hardest decision, of her life, she'll ever have to make, but she confronted it with tact and grace because that's who she is.
You sometimes have to face the lows in your life to be able to reach for the highs.
E & B have probably come to one of the lowest ones they'll have to confront and I pray it makes them stronger in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you! This is how I was hoping Bella would be portrayed in this chapter, so I'm glad you saw her that way.
Reviewer: manda375 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow. I'm glad she finally got a backbone, but that was tough!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think there's only so much she's willing to work through with him in their relationship because she loves him - but that was a deal breaker right there.
Reviewer: cemcclelland (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 20
WOW. That was some seriously good angst. Thanks for sharing, looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have to say, this chapter was probably my favorite one I've written so far.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 19
Bella knows...oh shit! The shit's about to hit the fan...again!
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
Chapter 19
My heart is racing right now. My god, so much happened in this chapter yet so much was left unresolved. Charlie, James, Bella's career, her and Edward, etc.
It's a shame she had to find out the way she did but it's about time she did. The question is, now what happens when she confronts Edward? What happens to the tour?
I hate that James told Bella to pump herself full of pain meds. Yeah, that's a good idea.
Will B and E ever find their way back to each other?
My heart is broken to think it wouldn't be possible.
Author's Response: The faster I can tear them apart, the faster I can get them back together ;) And Edward can get help so he actually deserves to be back with Bella.
Reviewer: fellowsandfokies (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 19
I hope that I'm picking up on a "Happily Ever After" and not a "he dies in the end" ;) Just sayin'. lol
I found you here and then read further on FF.net... But still can't get enough! Loving it!
Author's Response: You picked up on it the right way. It's definitely a HEA ;)
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 19
I hope the easter egg wasn't foreshadowing the ending of your story. Life is hard enough!!!! Please let them have a HEA!!!!!
Author's Response: No, this definitely has a HEA - I didn't lie about that lol. My foreshadowing was the fact that I HATE stories that don't end in HEA and a death comes out of nowhere
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 19
ruh roh Shaggy! the crap is about to hit the fan!!!!
Author's Response: Yes it is...but at least that means the faster they're torn apart, the faster I can get them back together again lol
Reviewer: crzymusicfreak11 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 19
UPDATE IMMEDIATELY! i'm dying for the confrontation and everything that comes after this. this story is too addiciting
Author's Response: Next chapter's ready to be posted - but here's a hint...I have up to Chapter 23 on ff.net ;)
Reviewer: rach_88 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 19
love love loved it! plz update soon, im dyin to know wat happens next
Author's Response: Next chapter's ready to be posted - but here's a hint...I have up to Chapter 23 on ff.net ;)
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