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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 11:27 PM · On: 9: Hideaway
I don't doubt your word for a moment, sounds really good! Edward and Bella are having a wonderful honeymoon. The only problem was Carlisle's request cncerning Bella's healing time. That scared Edward, and he doesn't react well to fear. I look forward to your next chapters, but take care of yourself first, then write when you can!
Author's Response: So many comments in such a short period of time, ^_^ thank you, I love them. I'm slowly writing again but it may take some time between chapters seeing as I'm with a new guy and we're always out doing something when he's not at work. But I am writing and Bella curious inhumity will be answered shortly.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 10:59 PM · On: 8: A Forever Kind of Promise
First, I hope your domestic troubles are resolved, or will be in the near future. It's a terrible hurt and a long time healing. Good luck. Thanks so much for this chapter. The gazebo was a lovely place for the ceremony, the dresses, the rings, the yurt, all just right. You did a beautiful job, and Bella and Edward had a wonderful wedding. They really got to celebrate their love in fine fashion!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 10:21 PM · On: 7: Changes
The Yenko is a good match with Bella's personality. What a great car!! Although the silver Mustang would have been cool, too. I am curious as to what she bought at Bed Bath and Beyond.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 09:56 PM · On: 6: Mood Swings From Hell
The changes are still happening, and Bella is an intriguing mix of human and what? All the books from Aro are suspect, to me, he never does anything out of the goodness of his heart. There's always something in it for him. Now comes Jacob, this ought to be fun.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 09:40 PM · On: 5: Eviction
I could hardly believe that Charlie would kisck Bella out of his house. I always thought he loved his girl more than anything. Guess you never know hoe stuff like this will go. Can't wait to see Renee's reaction. Poor old red Chevy pickup, rest in peace!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 09:19 PM · On: 4: What Is With My Angel?
The eye color thing is really kind of cool, freaky, but cool! The changes in Bella's heart rate, blood , and all the enhanced stuff is a mystery and amazing.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 09:04 PM · On: 3: Reawakening
I got nothing! There is no explanation that comes to mind that tells what has happened to Bella. It seems as if some venom got in her body, yet she's not a vampire. Still, she's not totally human either. It is a puzzlement!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 08:45 PM · On: 2: My Cold Dead World
The guilt and recrimination are to be neverending, if Edward can find no way to join Bella. With Alice keeping watch, he'll have a difficult time doing away with himself.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 08:33 PM · On: 1: DEATH
Okay it could have happened this way, I know it only would take a second. Now what the hell is Edward going to do? If he loses Bella it will be the end of him too.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 04:55 PM · On: 9: Hideaway
I couldn't help, but laugh at your author's note. More power to you, lady. That's amazing!
I really enjoyed this day after their wedding. It was very romantic that Edward cooked her breakfast and wrote her that lovely note. Bella's gift was very sweet. The lovemaking was fantastic and very passionate. I loved the time on the boat, picnic, massage and above all, the hot spring.
I was surprised that Carlisle called on their honeymoon with more research questions. Oh, this list is becoming quite long. I was afraid that she would cut herself to prove the healing point. It was good that she no longer has that aversion to blood.
Well, sadly, I'm caught up to your current update. I really enjoy this story and hope you update soon. Thanks for the ride so far.
Author's Response: Hopefully the next chapter won't take near as long as the last one.
Guess Carlisle is caught up in the science that has become Bella and missed the notice that they were on their honeymoon. I had thought about Alice interupting but then I thought it would be more funny if it was Carlisle.
I did manage some writing last night, about 1/3 of a chapter is done too. ^_^
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 08:34 PM · On: 8: A Forever Kind of Promise
Sorry for your RL heartache. Hopefully, things will look up soon.
Great wedding and wedding night! I like that Carlisle married them and that Seth came. Too bad that Edward had to deal with Jacob's sour mood on his big day, but at least he realizes that he lost and it's tim to move on. I never heard of a Yurt. That was interesting. I guess you learn something new everyday. Thanks for the pics to help with the visual.
Author's Response: Thank you for the concern, good thing I wrote this chapter before RL chaos interferred.
I almost moved into a yurt, its a lot like a studio apartment and I figured it would be a nice change from an island or a hotel in Paris.
Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 06:15 PM · On: 7: Changes
O.K. A question and a remark. First off, this is a fun story! Question: Did I miss the part about what Victoria did with Bella's heart? Didn't she rip it out of her body? Is it back in there? You might want to add to the list - eyes turn red, purple and blue.
I'm so disappointed in Charlie's reaction and Renee's. What is up with them.
Author's Response: OMG, I totally missed the part about her heart. I think I'll slip in an explanation soon. I didn't update the list? EEP. I have plans for Charlie and Renee. I've heard about some parents acting like that though, scary huh.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 08:22 PM · On: 7: Changes
I enjoyed the playful teasing between Edward and Bella. I can understand Edward's frustration with Jacob showing up. He was a rival for her affection. Hopefully, Jacob can help Carlisle discover what happened to her.
I love that Edward gave Bella a choice of any of his prized cars and that she stayed with a Chevy. The Yenko Camaro is a beautiful car. I am curious what Bella bought at Bed, Bath and Beyond.
Author's Response: You'll learn about the BB&B purchase in a chapter or 2. ^_- It truly is a beautiful car and I wanted something unique. Think I managed that. ^_^
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 09:05 PM · On: 6: Mood Swings From Hell
I was surprised by Renee's reaction, but both Charlie and her made it easier for Bella to leave them behind and live her life with Edward and the Cullens. It was funny that Bella interrupted Alice with the change in wedding date while she was having sex and that she came to the door wrapped in a sheet.
That kiss in the kitchen was hot and so was the teasing in the bedroom. It was good that they did that test to see whether Edward's venom is dangerous to Bella's blood.
I am surprised how quickly Aro's package got there and how many books he actually sent. I look forward to seeing how Jacob will be able to help their research.
Author's Response: LOL, a lot happened huh. Her parent's really did make leaving easy for her, they will show up again. It was nice getting to surprise Alice for once. Aro is definitely eager for Carlisle to figure out something I'd say.
Reviewer: carlisledancer (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 06:41 PM · On: 9: Hideaway
I freaking love this story so much!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm hopeing to have another chapter out sooner than this last hiatus.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 01:24 PM · On: 5: Eviction
I loved Bella's attempt at seducing Edward and how they ended up on the floor. It was interesting that Bella has more chromosomes than humans and vampires. Doesn't that put her in the class of the shapeshifters? I wonder how that happened.
I can't believe that Charlie forbid Bella to marry Edward. He truly went overboard in kicking his daughter out of his house because she refused to call off the wedding. He'll miss the marriage of his only daughter because of his stubbornness and he only has himself to blame. Well, his loss!
I laughed so hard at the irony of her truck dying after she made that deal with Edward. It was so cute how Edward tried to soothe her by telling her that it lived a long life and would be in car heaven. Priceless! I like that he asked Rosalie to look over it to see what she could do to fix it. I am glad that when the confusion of Alice's statement was cleared up that Bella was staying in Edward's room.
I worry about Carlisle peaking Aro's interest in Bella when he asks for that book.
Author's Response: I think shapeshifters where 1 chromosome lower than vampires. Humans=24, shifters=25, vamps=26...something like that. I have plans for Charlie, don't worry. That poor poor truck, *sigh*. I've worked out plans for Aro. ^_-
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 08:32 PM · On: 4: What Is With My Angel?
These new symptoms are very interesting, but I thought it was quite amazing that Bella could hear Alice so far away. Emmett and Jacob fighting over who would give Bella her sandwich was funny.
I like that Edward was able to distract Bella from Carlisle taking her blood by kissing her passionately.
I did feel sorry for her when she felt Edward had rejected her and didn't want to marry her now that she was like this, but it was great how Edward reassured her of his feelings.
My favorite part was when Edward offered to go to Vegas to marry her and Bella told him that he wouldn't like that and that they would have the big wedding. It really showed how much they would sacrifice to make each other happy. It was very romantic.
Author's Response: I'm glad your liking it. I love being able to throw in some humor, we all need it.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 07:34 PM · On: 3: Reawakening
No, I definitely did not see that coming. It was quite surprising that she woke back up and Edward's reaction was hilarious. Her symptoms were like she was a mixture of a vampire and shapeshifter, since Alice couldn't see her. I like that Bella is focusing and relying on Edward to help her find out what's happening. I can't wait to see the results of these tests.
Author's Response: Thank you, its definitely turning into an interesting test/ride. ^_^ Enjoy.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 05:38 PM · On: 2: My Cold Dead World
Wow! Such compelling drama! I love how Edward told Jacob off about how he did not just let this happen and why he gets to clean her up. Jacob really has no say whatsoever here. I am shocked that a HEA can come out of this, but I guess venom can cure many injuries. Poor Edward! Great writing!
Author's Response: Trust me, it will be a HEA. Jacob has always annoyed me -.-
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 12:10 AM · On: 9: Hideaway
This is fun :P and you're such a tease lol. I wonder when we finally get to know what Bella is now? Seems Carlisle is on the right track... hmmm. I saw a couple spelling mistakes (around the beginning/middle of the chapter) and, while this is Twilighted and sex scenes are pretty much guarenteed here, you should probably move the 'warning' up a paragraph for one of the scenes. Btw, those scenes were yummy ;9
Author's Response: Thank you. I had errors O_O?! And I was careful too :-( At least you enjoyed yourself. ;-)
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 01:07 PM · On: 9: Hideaway
It's not the AMOUNT of orgasms I find implausible - because I'm extremely orgasmic. I have a problem with a virgin being able to have sex this many times and also, I'm the most hair-trigger climaxing woman alive and two thrusts is NOT enough, even with magical Edward. Unrealistic.
Author's Response: Than I'm an unrealistic person. If I'm horny enough, I climax that quickly and I had sex a lot right after. The lose of virginity is different for every person. Some have excruciating pain, others don't feel anything.
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 08:17 AM · On: 9: Hideaway
I loved the sexy playfulness of this chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Playfulness is always a good thing. ^_^
Reviewer: redauntie1 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2011 04:10 PM · On: 8: A Forever Kind of Promise
more please dont stop now
Author's Response: LOL, I'm not stopping, I'm just going a little slower lately because of RL. Thank you ^_^
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:55 AM · On: 8: A Forever Kind of Promise
wow i love it
Author's Response: Thank you. ^_^
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 03:46 PM · On: 8: A Forever Kind of Promise
I truly love this story. I'm sorry about the issues in your personal life. My husband and I went through something similar at the 14 year mark. We were apart for about 8 months because of it. But, we're at the 17 year mark now and doing better than ever. I truly hope things work out the way you'd like them to, but if they don't then I'm certain a greater purpose and happiness will be on the horizon for you. Hang in there, chica. You'll be ok.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope they work out soon also. If they don't I still have my children, my fics and my fans. The Fates better have something better planned for me after what my ex is putting my through.
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