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Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 1: Heaven

They seem very happy with a perfect life! I am worried for what is around the corner...   Loving it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad your loving it!

~Chy3

Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hell

Wow. What a way to start a story. Poor Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad it gave you at least a portion of the impact I was going for. 

I'm reading the fic 'Breaking The Silence' and there's a Doc mentioned closer towards the end name Mary Sheehan, did you know that? I couldn't help but notice that in your penname. 

Thanks for the review chica! 
~Chy3

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hell

Very good Very good can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter 3 is in the editing process right now. It's taking a bit longer because I'm changing quite a bit from what I originally had ready to post. Should be up with in the next week!

Thanks for your reviews. They inspire me to write faster.

~Chy3

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: Heaven

it's sweet the perfect life  for bella and jake



Author's Response:

That it is!

 

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hell

So she doesn't remember anything of that night?  Thats terrible for her or maybe a blessing!  What about the baby? Jake?  I am so intrigued and can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

At the moment she does not remember anything. We got a couple more chapters to go before we find much of anything else. So stick with me!

I'll start editing chapter 3 soon, promise. :) 

Thanks a billion for the reviews! ~Chy3

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Heaven

Nice start!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked my fluff. Personally I can't stand to read it. LOL. 

Thanks for the review you ROCK!

~Chy3

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hell

interesting start! I am a person guilty of reading stories and either not reviewing or waiting til the end to review..since this is so early on in a story, and I saw you only had a few reviews, I thought that was nuts..this story definitely caught my eye..I hope others are reading and just not responding...trust me you will get a lot more reviews as the story goes on.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I only posted this story to this site about 4 days ago and already I have over 600 reads. Which is fantastic! I can't wait to tell more of the story and I'm glad that so far you are enjoying it. So I hope you bare with me as I try to connect the dots of what's in my head to actual chapters. 

And psst if you want to read more of this story... right now FFn has one extra chapter posted. It's not beta'd and  will be fixed and changed some soon, but you're welcome to read it and get the gist of what's next to come. 

Lots of hugs to you! ~Chy3

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hell

well she didnt remember her baby! cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Nope she can't remember anything of importance. :( 

I'll update as quick as I can.

Thanks for your review!

~Chy3

Reviewer: Koffie (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hell

love love love this.i just saw this and saw it only had 2 reviews so far! not possible! this is so good. im going to be reading this until the end



Author's Response:

Why thank you! This makes me so happy... I can barely stand it! I bet people have things to say but are just too lazy or too shy to do it. But that's okay, you made up  for that with just your 1 review, so Thanks! 

 

I'm ecstatic that you'll be following this to the end, and you inspire me to write more and quicker. 

Much love to you! :)

~Chy3

Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 2: Hell

poor bella. i guess she lost the baby and JAKE? please update soon



Author's Response:

You infer correctly about Jake. We'll find out soon about the baby. I'll do my best to update quickly. 

Thanks for the review and following my little bitty story. :)

Chy3

Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1: Heaven

looks like bella has such a wonderful life, it's sad to think it's all going to come crashing down... but i'm totally interested so fyi I will be adding to my favorites so I don't miss a thing! If you celebrate have a happy thanksgiving *cheers*



Author's Response:

Thanks for being the very first to review! It means a lot to me. Truly. 

Next chapter the catalyst to the whole story reveals itself! I tend to ramble and give everything away... So before I give anything away! Thanks a freaking MILLION for reviewing! Happy Thanksgiving! I hope you get so stuffed that you must retreat to your room to be naked to take the pressure off your full belly! 

:P Chy3

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