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Reviews For Dear Mr. Masen
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

Three days, that's the amount of time I needed to read this chapter. And it's not because it's boring or dificult to read, but because I was interrupted on several occasions. How fustrating! Anyway, I enjoyed it very much. It's refreshing to read this kind of stories. Thank you guys for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: ShannonEG2000 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 3

TWO WEEKS! NOOOO!!! I want more NOW! LOL. A friend of mine recced this fic to me and I'm loving it! It's so light-hearted and fun, which sometimes you really need in a fic. There's so much drama/angst out there that it's nice to find an easy read like this. Keep up the great work!

 

Shannon E

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love it!

Reviewer: 4everLoVe53090 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

can't wait for more! love it!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love it! The thought of Edward showing up in the basement to kidnap Bella on a Christmas adventure would keep me awake as well. And probably the stock boy too!

Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

That was... perfect. Savory and sweet in turn with dashes of spice now and again.  It was like dark chocolate with sea salt.  I absolutely love this story.  Each note back and forth is something I just want to wrap around myself and snuggle in as I watch the inevitable slowly occur.  (At least, I hope it is inevitable.)  

Thank you so very much.

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm in love with these two!  They are so witty and charming and cute and honest in a way that only semi-anonymous e-mail acquaintances can be.

I laugh with every chapter!  I must also admit, that before your Edward I never considered the value of pi to be sexy or romantic in any way, however now I find myself wishing someone would want to call out pi in the throes of passion with me ;-).

And Bella's 'early finishing date'.... Gah!  That's horribly embarassing and I think her hallway and her blouse have been violated!  So funny and mildy disturbing...

Thanks so much!  I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

Looking forward to the next chapter. These two are adorable.

Reviewer: Tweemad (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Totally adorable!

Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

How cute. I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 3

I can't tell you how much I love this story. This is the best one I have read in a long time. The other day I emailed my friend Michelle to read this and she emailed me back saying she was just getting ready to email me to tell me to start this story.

 

A+++ in everyway

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love how they are getting so comfortable with each other. I am curious about them bumping into each other at the office, will that happen? Doesn't sound like they will intentionally meet, for now anyway, but maybe they end up in the elevator together or something?? But now I am dying to know how Edward will respond to her recent 'Counting Ceiling Tiles' email :) hope you guys update soon loving the story  xoxox

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: lmfirst (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 2


Reviewer: TGDofATL (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story.  Their interaction is already great, and they haven't even met yet.  Once they finally meet, I predict fireworks!  

Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

Another cute chapter , I like this Edward and Bella !!!

Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hello ladies!

I really had to stop by and say thanks for this amazingly funny story. You made my day!

Just wondering...how many of the things the two endure are based on personal experience? ;-)

Lots of greetings,

Cora

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG THAT WAS GREAT I LOVE THE FLIRTY DIALOGUE BETWEEN THESE TWO HOPEFULLY THEY WILL MEET SOON FALL IN LOVE AND GO TO IRELAND TO SEARCH FOR THE RAINBOW AND DRINK IRISH WHISKEY!!!!!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG  THAT WAS GREAT I LOVE THE FLIRTY DIALOUGE BETWEEN THESES TWO AND DEAR GOD WILL THEY EVER MEET PLEASE SAY YES AND FALL MADLY IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER!!!! (SORRY I"M HOPELESS)

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story.  It's SO smart and funny.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG  THAT WAS GREAT I LOVE THE FLIRTY DIALOUGE BETWEEN THESES TWO AND DEAR GOD WILL THEY EVER MEET PLEASE SAY YES AND FALL MADLY IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER!!!! (SORRY I"M HOPELESS)

Reviewer: Dillinger910 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 3

Jendonna - you got a winner of a story! I am enjoying all of their exchanges, their secrets, & their joking! What a way to spend an evening! Loving it!

Reviewer: LiLi82 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

love it

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

Lol, Bieber in a box with farts, I'm with Edward on that one.  These two are so funny with their dating misadventures, they have to get together.  I loved the sites that Jasper has been visiting and Edward's personal e-mail address is a scream.  Did you make EILF up or does it really exist? Of course, I know of MILF and DILF but that one was new to me, funny though and Carlisle getting it wrong and calling Edward an ELF, that could stand for something else, lol.  Jane x

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